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This information is readily available but

information of how to actually type it is not!
eg
"No." OR 'No'

"No." OR
"No."
How to express thoughts eg
'That's nice!' OR in italics OR in italics and the '.....' apostophies etc
What about examples of the use of to and too ?
How to set out dialogue....
indent paragraphs or not?

"Dialogue." he smiled, "dialogue." and story continues on this line or not?
She smiled, "Rubbish." I said. OR
She smiled.
"Rubbish." I said. Or
She smiled,
"Rubbish." I said.

I mean the actual mechanics of the story set out.............. !I've found this sort of info hard to get.

FRUSTRATED

FOX / FOXX 44 NEWS PUSSY

LAUREN MALONEY. FOX / FOXX 44 NEWS - BURLINGTON,VERMONT. THOSE TITS THAT ASS THOSE LEGS THAT DELICIOUS PUSSY FAVORITE FOOD. BEEN THERE DELICIOUS PUSSY FAVORITE FOOD DONE THAT DELICIOUS PUSSY FAVORITE FOOD. AND THE SAME FOR : MEGAN CARPENTER. FOX / FOXX 44 NEWS - BURLINGTON,VERMONT.

H. H. K. THE BLONDE. THE MOTHER.

HANNAH HARDING KAUFMAN. VICTORY BAPTIST CHURCH - VERGENNES,VERMONT. HANNAH HARDING KAUFMAN. MONKTON,VERMONT. BEEN THERE DELICIOUS PUSSY FAVORITE FOOD DONE THAT DELICIOUS PUSSY FAVORITE FOOD. CUTE PRETTY BEAUTIFUL HOT SEXY GORGEOUS BABE. I AM THE FATHER/DADDY OF THE BABY/KID THAT SHE HAS HAD AND I AM THE FATHER/DADDY OF THE BABY/KID SHE IS HAVING. GIRLFRIEND BESTFRIEND LOVER WIFE.

girlfriend bestfriend lover wife

anne messier lowe. victory baptist church. woodman hill route # 7 - vergennes,vermont. anne messier lowe. green street - vergennes,vermont. been there pussy done that pussy for over 30 years. cute pretty beautiful hot sexy gorgeous babe. girlfriend bestfriend lover wife for over 30 years. i am the father/daddy of the 3 baby's/kids that she has had for over the passed 30 years.

victory baptist church vbc / monkton,vermont

hannah harding kaufman. - victory baptist church - vergennes,vermont. & hannah harding kaufman. monkton,vermont. i am the father/daddy of the baby/kid that she has had and i am the father of the baby/kid she is having. cute pretty beautiful hot sexy gorgeous babe. girlfriend bestfriend lover wife. been there delicious Pussy favorite food done that delicious Pussy favorite food.

Good laugh

This is actually quite good, thanks Swinger Joe. I enjoy a good BTB (and a good RAAC) just like many on here. I'm quite shocked how emotional some people get over the stories though.

CHURCH PUSSY

ANNE MESSIER LOWE. VICTORY BAPTIST CHURCH - VERGENNES,VERMONT. ANNE MESSIER LOWE. GREEN STREET - VERGENNES,VERMONT. BEEN THERE PUSSY DONE THAT PUSSY FOR OVER 30 YEARS.

Nice

Very informative. Nice to know when money is tight or if you need disguise the toy as something innocuous.

Agree 100%

My husband and I have been discussing this for a while. He's actually wanting me to cuckold him. But what he doesn't know is I already have been for the last 10 months. Had he actually tried to taste his own cum when I wanted him to, he might have had a better chance of knowing that he was licking up another mans seed when he went down on me. Oh well!

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MORON

go suck dicks elsewhere, moron. if you want to read good stuff, BUY A FUCKING BOOK instead of complaining like a little bitch about the offer of a FREE PORN SITE.

@ gxnn

I've heard this assertion lately over and over again. BTB fans seem to have embraced the notion that their repetitive stories are repetitive on purpose. They celebrate the sameness of their favorite assembly line stories and compare them to the blandness of McDonald's french fries -- in a good way!

My response: bullshit.

BTB stories do NOT have to follow the monotonous, repetitive, BTB formula. You can write a BTB story where the wife isn't an evil, brainless, bitch. Human beings are complex creatures. There has never existed a thoroughly-evil human with no redeeming qualities whatsoever. Even Hitler loved his dog!

You can write a BTB story where the husband isn't a stoic hero, where his revenge plot isn't executed perfectly, where high-tech gadgets aren't necessary, where the wife's lover isn't beaten to a pulp, and/or where Heroic Hubby doesn't end up with someone way hotter than his ex-wife in the end.

You COULD write such a story, but it's far easier and requires far less imagination to stick to the script. You also may risk upsetting the BTB Brigade, who have come to expect bland McDonald's fries.

my immature thought

My thoughts on this writing is: There is nothing new under the sun, as the English saying goes; new bottle can contain old wine, as the Chinese saying goes; the essence of life lies in its variety, as a French whore told her granddaughter when she tried to persuade her to be in the same business to pleasure men.

Right on!

If you don't like it, don't read it! And, especially, don't take it out on the author by commenting on it. Read something else! This is an easy one, or should be.

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