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I can't find an adjective sufficiently negative enough to describe this in terms of content. Technical writing is decent.

You seem to have a pattern.

You start a pretty good story, but stop before it's finished. What you wrote was good as far as it went.

That's it?

It was a good start, but really didn't go anywhere.

A bit of switch play.

So you were pissed off because she was inconsiderate of your time, with no reward but watching her ass move. You attempted to Dom the situation and reap some benefits. She played your game but occasionally took control. At the end of the night, you both won.

Sex play.

Not bad improvisation. Lots of spanky fun with a satisfying end result.

Amazing!

Wonderfully written and hot. Cuntface deserves every bit of what she got...

This is a dumb story. Why would they even need an auction? Why would the auctioneer be female, and how could she not know what her fate would be. What exactly is the distinction between slave and woman? It's ridiculous that she would start as a willing slave and end as an unwilling one. Who exactly was selling the slaves, and how could an auctioneer possibly become a slave if she represents the interests of the slave traders? Now that she's gone how will the traders get their money? Why would anyone respect property rights in this crazy world? This story is very much ducking retarded. It has the dumb idea of asking "but what if the seller became what they sold?" it's not clever or logical, just retarded

Keeps getting Hotter

Very exciting - such a masterful slow build up - can;t wait for the next episode. You are tantalizing your readers you know.

Nothing like a throat fucking after a nice meal and drinks. How does she not toss it all up?

Brilliant

Loved it. So raw and painful and a ray of hope at the end.

Also hoping there will be more

I'm here seconding so many others. This story is fantastic. It hit me in all the right places. I'm a metal fan, a sex positive feminist, and also a male dom. Please keep the story up! This last chapter wowed me on so many levels.

Muslim slaves

I love Muslim women - they make good sluts and maids. Allah knew best when he allowed us to have 4 of them.

Day 2 and beyond

Awesome story so far. Would love to read about slave tie down, Venus 2000 milking machine attached, slowest setting, left alone for long period, knowing it's not enough to allow orgasm and for female friends to join Mistress in using slave. Or humiliate him more by bringing home young men and women

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