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Great Start but...

A very sensual story, it’s not uncommon for people in high powered jobs to relieve stress by submitting sexually. There are myriad ways to introduce bdsm to someone, I find the term ‘training’ a bit demeaning and off putting but holy crap what a jerk. It’s obvious that she been through some kind of emotional trauma that day after all he knows what her job is. Clearly he helps her forget about the stress, without allowing verbal communication, then he pushes her boundaries. Finally he leaves her in a worse emotional state than when he arrived without discussing any of it, why was she upset or what he was doing. The whole situation relies on her fear of him leaving and never seeing her again. No communication it’s like dooming the relationship from the start. Clearly his mentor isn’t as wise as she thinks she is.

This was better

She was more determined and took charge. I wish that she had bought 2 dildoes,to include the largest one,determined to get him on a good road. She should be making reports to Tiffany,and he should have been in Velcro fastenings for a couple of hours over a table with a well whipped arse to improve that attitude and bring about more worshipful behaviour. His own toenails should,by now,be varnished,to improve his skill set.

Oh dear

Caitlin is all wrong. First of all,she is in a hurry,work soon. That was bad enough. But she did not take control of him as soon as she appeared,and have him strip then and there. She kept saying things like :don’t worry,I’m a nurse,or: it does not mean that you are gay...I could go on. When he hesitated,she should have produced a rolled up leather strap,and got him focused. And even worse was his damped down report to Tiffany,not giving anything away to her. EXCUSE ME? Tiffany wants a report,about Caitlin and all that has gone on,and he responds poorly. SHE should have sent another message demanding a full report and telling him that his tardy first response has caused future consequences. He needs to be put on his toes,instead he is allowed to complain that the fucking has not worked and gets a sort of apology,instead of further instructions,and another whipping to correct his attitude. Caitlin just crashes on the bed,having left no specific instructions..wash her work clothes,or even better; WAIT until she is asleep and then clean and varnish her toenails,ready for her to inspect later. As well,there is far too much booze consumed and he is allowed to be far too sloppy for a man under control,he should have been appraised and goals set,like,his weight...he is obviously presentable,so maybe he only needs to lose 10 lbs,so how is that going? And a bit more body definition,gym visits? And the flat to be kept to its recent high standard of clean. Caitlin is just wrong...her nurse’s matter of factnes,her failure to take control,and not enough satisfaction with his predicament nor enjoyment of his fucking. Instead,she is focused on whether he has cum or not,he hasn’t,but,not controlling him again,her attitude is that it may be better next time.....all sorts of things were wrong,and I gave 2.

Submission.

Its a well known fact Submission starts at school, with your school teacher administering Lesson and Obedience. Your mind has been programed to obey an assertive person weather White or black and mixed race.
Sooner are later you find yourself controlled an like it.

Its a great example what can happen to you in this Story.

A great read

Thank you for the story. It was well thought out and nicely paced.

Moving along perfectly. Perfectly judged pace

Tiffany has not yet shown her claws. She seems to be really nice.

I suppose we can say that the pan is on the stove

Things are certainly warming up. Maybe,if she had suggested that he make another date with Diane while she was with him in the apartment. Don’t take that tone with me...seems portentous

Convincing

Would love to read more.

I do expect this to hot up,but,but.

I do wish that authors would stop calling them chastity belts,when,what comes out of the box is a cage. So,therefore,it would seem a good idea to call it a cage,maybe the chastity cage,just once,but thereafter...what is it????
I was also unhappy about looking at cages online and ordering one. Not once were measurements taken or was there any interest in his size,flaccid,and erect. The author is much praised but I hope that this feeling of scrimping on detail does go away. Gave 5,in hopes of improvement.

Wow!

What can I say, but this is one savage wild ride of a story. Thanks.

Categories

I am switching between Non-consensual and BDSM categories in different chapters because it it contains elements of both. In Goodreads I have heard this type of story referred to as "Dark BDSM". Please note that the non-consensual part is never condoned and is met by an organized resistance and sharing of knowledge by the captives on how to eventually effect an escape. You will have to read the first two books and the epilogue to find out who ends up prisoners for life. :)

Wrong category. This is nonconsent/reluctance, not BDSM

As the title says. You've put this story in the wrong category. It starts off with a kidnapping and her cooperation is coerced, where it exists. This is non-consent.

I want one!!

Need one of those places here. Great read. Couldn't put down.

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