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Chapter 4 PLEASE!

I've been checking the site everyday , waiting for you to continue this story! It's my favorite , I fell in love, and now I'm so hooked. please give us another chapter! your writing is amazing.

Dream

After listening to this i had a very wonderful, vivid dream about the under the table scene. Thank you, sir.

HOT

Please tell me there will be more!!

I never thought I'd like this

But I love it lol
Bring on ch 5

Bob, Bob, Bob

This is a hot threesome, and you're worried enough to turn up the heat so no one gets cold?
Incredible.

a terribly weak end!! ;)

though you try your best to make it look like a celebratory weekend...its a terribly 'weak end' !! ;)

aristocracy comes so naturally to every line of your writing...!! :)) i have every suspicion you have some true blue, blue blood in you our BDSM erotica queen!! :))

hey Fairy:)) aristocratic tastes in describing the house,the erotica...everything!! :))are you an aristocrat in reality?!! :)) aristocracy comes so naturally to every line of your writing!! :))

Yesss....you are our BDSM erotica aristocrat...the queen...the high priestess!! :)) the characters of your story neither over the top, nor below par!! :)) loving every bit of it!! let the magic river flow on through fairy's pen!! :))

reminds me of the real life story of Hollywood actor Nicholas Cage and his ex waitress Chinese wife!! (even after marriage to NC the Chinese lady wanted to continue working you know...:)) and NC of course would not let her!! ;) )....:))...of billionaire dom Mr Dorian Grey and Ana in 50 shades of Grey!!

your work way beyond excellent!! Touche!! :))

had she completely lost it?! ;) or did she become Andy's alter ego, speaking back the exact things he wished to hear?! ;)

she fell deeper in love with Andy after her torture night?! ;) Andy's alter ego speaking back the exact things he liked to hear?!;) or she had completely lost it?! ;)

Anything she wants

Big fantasy of watching my wife be pleasured. I would let her have anything she wants with anyone, she just never requested it. I've always said she could tell me to do anything and I wouldn't do anything she said on the spot.

Been with my wife for 30 years it's time for her to let go.

as long as you yourselves are not going through those shitloads Mister HS,suits you all fine,doesn't it?;)

pooh!!what a justification at the end to market pregnancies and submissiveness to women!! as long as you yourselves are not going through all those shitloads, Mister HS, suits you all fine,doesnt it? ;)

Just Goes to Show...

... that grammar, spelling, usage, punctuation, and other generally accepted rules of English don't have to be followed to write a hot story. However, rowing through all the errors became quickly tedious so I just jumped ahead to make my comment.

Great concept poorly executed.

Sorry, but that's how I see it.

To Wanderinggipsy

You are always so sweet :). Lol thanks so much for the kind words, and yeah I try to get chapters out quickly but not too quickly to the point I rush them. If I rushed them they would lose their spark:). Thank you for your patience and thanks for the compliment about the names. When writing a new story I spend like 2 hours trying to pick names!!

Thank you for your ongoing support as always and happy reading

Tcodee

The story that you say has potential is called "Avatars of the Goddess" and it was written by an author naked Spankednaked, (with some help and guidance from me).

"Avatars of the Goddess" first came out in December of last year, and is now up to 4 chapters. Chapter 5 will probably be coming out in May.

And thanks for the compliments on my writing. It's also great to hear compliments from my fans. That's the #1 reason that I keep coming out with new chapters. :)

I expected more

If she was going to be punished for dressing like a whore, I was hoping he would whore her out.

I'm so glad to read from you that leaving a story unfinished is torture for the readers (and for the writer too). You have great style and a lot of imagination and I love the daddy-little girl stories. Keep going! And thank you for taking time to write

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