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Good enough first submission

Fairly well written, and I hope you write more. I don't care for the humiliation, but maybe that's just me. I give it a 4.

mmmmm!

This gets better. She should get a chastity cage for him I wear one most of the time and my favourite sex was always wanking. (bit small to put in a pussy) and it works wonderfully. When I get out of it the cum is explosive.

I honestly did not see that ending coming at all. Not even one little bit. Amazing.
I liked that you didn't have to kill us with details about the whole hypnosis thing, and assumed your readers were smart enough to figure out what was happening.

An interesting thought exercise this story brings up is to compare what Winters was trying to do with her "ponies" to normal people and their pets. Is it right to keep a bird or a cat at home? Or a sea lion or tiger in a zoo? Yes, they'll be protected from harm and receive the best possible care and probably live much longer lives that way, but they essentially are still in a cage, a prison, not free to fly or stalk as they please. Do they love us for the nice window we gave them to look out of and see the trees blowing in the wind outside? Or do they just wish we would open the window already and not try to catch them when they jump out of it? I have pets, and I myself don't know how I feel about this question. But it makes you think, no? And further, will people object and say that's OK to do to animals, but not people? Are people so much better than animals that we deserve better treatment? More questions.

Anyway, interesting story, made me feel all sorts of different feels.

Copied

Probably a guy copying stories from asstr...pathetic

Most revealing character trait about your lead character. Total complete asshole.

"Three years later, I was two states over visiting my sister. I had to swing by the local mall since I forgot to get her kid a birthday gift." "Her kid" is his nephew. Hope you meant to illustrate, this pathetic slime has no soul. And Frank will deserve Tracy fucking around with the next Dom that she succumbs to, someday. Sooner or later. "You knew I had this weakness; I warned you," she will tell him. Dumb and dumber.

so well done!!

Loved it! Look forward to reading more of your writing. I usually don't like/understand BDSM, but somehow that took a backseat to the overall situation. And the situation here just seemed genuine and honest. thank you

the best

This is the most enjoyable porn I have ever read, and I have been reading porn for several decades. Not only does it satisfy my fantasies perfectly, I'm enjoying the characters. They are intelligent and have a sense of humor, as must be true of the author as well.

Please write more!

I'm a submissive guy and this shit is perfect. Please continue!

Her Journey

The track she is on to discover her true submissive self is really well written. The struggles she is facing w her kind of warm husband is on the way, but the man in the park will take her closer to her true self. Nice writing and character building.

right

Then please stop reading all of my stories. If the characters don't jump off the page at you, then please jump off my page and find another author. Clearly there are thousands of them here.

Your the one that's amazing.

The story has been out for 2 days now as of 5/3/15 and has been seen by over 800 people, some of them has made it a favorite. So now I'm beginning to think that your a troll who can't be satisfied. Good luck with that....lol

Amazing

This left me so wet. This is the best writing in the "slave" "sub" section I've seen so far. I've seen quite a lot. You're brilliant.

If the gag affected her so much, a dental gag throat fuck would be something I want to see.

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