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Kayle wears a skirt without panties to college

Kind gentle dome

Nice story, stupid critics. Really got me thinking what we guys really want and need.
Try giving her a more realistic gentle fem Dom approach. Damaging him seems your idea of why she wants to make him her bitch. Let go of your dick and write what makes sense to us all. Perspective is essential, also. Sure opening him up is what she wants but be realistic. Give him just enough to do that and stop until the next chapter. Needs some serious thought. Great story

Nice Read Accommodating to Sub

I liked this story as the sub was a proper lady and married but needed to be controlled. However, I got from this that she had a need for release from the tensions of life as well as sexual tensions and the Master was understanding and very accommodating, He let her chose the instrument of punishment when there was no indication of punishment incurred but a need she had but he was very clear as to who was in charge. Quite a nice read and compatible in their actions or needs.

A for intent, C for execution

The idea is good - too many D/S stories here are unrealistically one-directional. A good relationship must contain both give and take and here that goes both in the physical sense of the sub tying down her Dom to pierce him and in the mental sense of him having the strength to let her do so. And her care for his long-term health is a welcome bit of real life among the silly fantasies that otherwise prevail here on Lit.

Unfortunately, it is partly ruined by her use of safety pins to do it. While sterilizing them in the toaster oven may work (a stretch, but plausible), their materials are dangerous in themselves and likely to cause severe reactions and possibly lifelong nickel allergy! It would have been so easy for the her to buy proper needles and surgical-grade barbells or rings for a pittance on eBay.

Loved it

I love that the wife joined in. Would be great to have more chapters. Preferably with the wife and babysitter having some fun together while "daddy" watches. Too many babysitter stories have the wife as an evil witch but it's nice to see them become one big happy family once in awhile. I think you have the makings of the perfect story here.

The Bullshit Walked,But His Money Talked.

As soon as Harlan freed himself he quickly made a call. Long before Virginia could submit the divorce papers or release the film,a hit man had put a bullet right between her eyes,recovered the papers and camera ,and disposed of her,in pieces,at the bottom of a cesspool.

I would like

To see the story continue.
I know everyone has their knickers in a twist about the category and poor dear, no gives you strokes for the actual writing.
The story is captivating to me and I would like the see the characters further developed.
Please?

Second instalment..

We are human and even more different from each other than we suspect. For every ten people who hate this, you will have one who doesn't. None of that even matters. Your fiction is simply and wonderfully just that. Yours. You share it and have to suffer the slings and barbs of the naysayers. Own what you write. Characters are never perfect for everyone.. Events don't always fall in with the expected course of things.. This is your story though and you do a great job of showing the reader an abbreviated glimpse into it. Flesh it out, if you think you want to.. But remember this is yours .. =D

When is more coming? I can't stand the wait!

Seriously I'm hooked please feed my addiction!

Too dark?

BDSM... Bondage and discipline.. Domination and submission.. Sadism and masochism... This story falls into one or more category. Not sure why there's so much venom in the comments. I'll wait to read the next instalment before I jump down anyones throat. Or rather.. If it's not my cup of tea, I'll move on. The title does say in bright blue letters.. Sadistic S.O.B
If you don't enjoy this type of thing.. Don't read.. Easy peasy.. Be safe and well.

Really bad

Repetitive garbage. Both implausible and unbelievable. Neither erotic or sexy.
1 star

I'm really needing a new chapter haha. This one was incredible as always, I can barely wait for the next one!! :)

This is really good

I'm looking for a slutty wife like this ! I love this story.

Fabulous!!!

Magnificent tale of firm loving control & eventual consent!!! Did they live happily ever after - or will there be more chapters?

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