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Not bad

Not as bad as you think. Yes,the grammar needs improvement in correct words and phrases concerning moments in the story. And any scenes should be drawn out enough to be more enjoyable. And more details in the story as a whole as well as the sex scenes.
As a Duke/Dominant man. He should know exactly how to go about relaxing a female on her first time. And know how to pleasure her as well. Overall, it was pretty good for a first. Would enjoy reading more.

Great story second time reading

Hope you continue this such a great story line. Excellent writing.
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Andy

Great story!

I loved it and i think my own master would too!

Good read

For a first time post. you did an excellent job. I did stumble on this sentence "You gentle a little at my anguish". I think you meant to say 'gently chuckled', other than that the story flowed quite nicely. I found the story engaging as it proceeded to it's climax...literally.

superb!

Loved this episode! Great job! Thanks Spankedboy!

Well done

Good story. I feel like it skipped most of the journey into submission in college which is disappointing. Look forward to seeing Lily get her tattoo.

However, I was thinking the same thing as other anonymous in that you have many chapters worth of extra material if Lily has a daughter: Lily, already docile and submissive, is made to try to recruit her much more independent and assertive daughter. So Lily is instructed to guide daughter into an event which results in incriminating evidence. Daughter is then blackmailed into service - mildly at first. And maybe doesn't even know mom is involved. Maybe daughter is trying to protect mommy from involvement. Maybe daughter is tasked with using mom's keys to get into her classroom and take some naughty pics/video. As the claws of control take hold, perhaps daughter has to take black men home and when mom is out of the room, has to do humiliating submissive tasks without mom noticing. Meanwhile, Lily is tasked with preparing her husband to be a cuckold. Eventually, daughter learns of mom's role in some humiliating manner (does some incredibly degrading task to keep mom from learning of her wickedness, succeeds at task, but then revealed mom not only knows, but is actively involved) and after an outburst of anger and betrayal, daughter has to be punished .. by mom. Husband meanwhile has conceded to some mild BBC cuckold action - he's not REALLY into it, but the chastity belt his wife pushed for and seeing his wife happy goes a long way to help overcome that. Also picturing a session in Lily's classroom with a not-so-hidden "hidden camera" that records Lily (and her daughter?) following their instructions to seduce (or maybe even forcibly rape) one of Lily's young black students. Suddenly escape seems impossible and daughter, feisty though she's been throughout the series, finally submits.

Prologue: Lily struggles to finish teaching her last class of the day as she tries to make coherent sentences, (a consistent behavior that is feeding her new reputation of being a rambling scatterbrain) due to the vibrators in her cunt and ass, controlled by a black student in the classroom. She picks up daughter - who lifts her short skirt from under her ass and sits very gingerly, both from large butt plug, and the bruises from her "corrections" - from her 2nd job at an inner-city Gas-Mart, where she works - after dropping out of school - as the only white cashier for an domineering black manager woman. Her main job is as a lowly secretary for a two-faced (sweet in person, mean behind closed doors) black woman personnel manager for a mostly-white company - coincidentally a company where many of her high school friends now work in middle/upper management. Both women drive home and walk in the door to a naked, kneeling husband in only a chastity belt, who blushes even to this day from his daughter seeing him like this. He hasn't seen them in over a week (and that was just to watch his wife and daughter get gangbanged), and proceeds to grovel at their feet like he's been trained and Lily's eyes water as she knows he's not really into this - though interestingly, she has noticed that lately his cock starts to swell whenever they walk in - but he's willing to obey to keep his girls (and later he himself) out of prison. They mention they're only stopping by for a chat as they have to get out to Goddess' house. Lily then asks him how long he's been locked in his cage. He says just over 3 months. Lily takes a breath and says, "Good, then you will understand the meaning when I tell you that we're both about 8 weeks pregnant."

Sorry, muse got a hold of me.

Ahhhh the racist haters; what better sign of approval than their scorn.

Another great installment to a great series. Waiting for more.
L O R

fuck that

Fuck that shit. Fun is fun but she crossed the line. Should have knocked her out and refunded myself whatever cash the bitch had.

loved it!

Cool idea with the dialogue. Pulled it off nicely!

wonderful

this was an amazingly written and riveting series. The emotions felt were indescriberable. I found myself skipping over most of the sex scenes just so I could find out where the story was going to go.

Blah, blah, blah

Small nugget. More blah, blah, blah. Boring beyond belief.

Just awful

Really nothing even mildly interesting. Is there a story? Another author that has their scores propped up by the site.

Is anyone really that stupid?

Nothing erotic or sexy about this abuse.

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