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A good master would have taken of his possession and there would be no place for insecurity and jealousy to take hold. Wish that he had corrected his error by emphasizing her value as well as his ownership. Well written, I'm just on her side.

You were too effective in developing his callousness and a victim frame of mind for her. By the time you revealed the twist, there is a negative view of him. The twist makes the reader miffed she acts the victim instead of owning it. Good job getting the reader invested in the story, even if we are not happy about it. You, author, get points off for for leaving someone alone who is so significantly bound.

Over and over

I read this over and over. m.

Please Finish

I read this entire series and the comment that this only counted as one referred to the last series of orgasms. Prior to this she had achieved three orgasms he had credited her with. Please finish the story and let her have her fifth orgasm which I suspect will involve sex and then he will set her free. Orgasm denial is apparently fantastic to build up to the orgasm that is achieved but this story is not just about orgasm denial but also about how she treats the guys who get her off. Please finish this story. I have no idea when this was written.

Good writing

The story, however, is a bit lacking. Did he marry her just to torture her for cheating? Does he not realize that eventually, she will get tired of their lack of intimacy and when he asks if she still loves him, the answer will be 'no'? What then? Does he try to keep the chastity belt on? I see her leaving if he carries on this way - this is not Dom, it is revenge.

thank you

Thank you for the comments and i want you all to know that i am writing as i can. Please know i am actively writing for you :)

Please More Sir

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter, and the next, and the next!

Amazing!!

I usually don't like to read the male point of view but this story is so good! Please write more and frequently. Your endings are semi-cliffhangers which suck, but the story is so good. I don't care how surreal he seems, he's is perfect and I want to read some hot dom/sub sex soon, please.

Waiting.....

I love this story! Please continue, it's been too long!

Leave Her Bound Alone???

Perhaps she asked for this on his arrival home but this is more than she expected I would think. This is not right leaving her alone and going to relax. She could become permanently injured especially with the nipple clamps being left on too long. She was a fool to toss the ducky aside and he is cruel and sadist but that may be what she wants. However it is so dangerous to leave a person bound and alone and the damage that could be done is tremendously stupid.

Well done

Proof that size doesn't matter. A gem among stones.

Awesome!!!

I was so excited to see you added another story. This is positively incredible; it's as good as your last one which is really saying something! I hope you'll do more.

Doesn't Belong Here

This should be under fetish. Each new portion of the story gets worse and it is not safe sane and consensual.

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