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It was an erotic read with interesting story lines. Ending pretty extreme for a first time experience for Carl.

Ermmm

Hi.. I love this story. The emotional conflict is epic.. but please.. pretty please update? I would love to read the ending although if real babygirl doesn't safe word or daddy doesn't say sorry I'll cry..

Thank you for the reply.

I really appreciate your reply for my comment. I have read this cunt caning story more than four times. I always come to your page and check for new stories since 2014. I dont want to disturb you by chatting. But i really feel like to get to knw u. And I'm from Sri Lanka. It doesn't matter its totally ur decision not to send emails. Once again i appreciate ur work. Thank you.

Abusive

I find slapping abusive, spanking is fine but hitting on the face is not okay in any way, not to mention how he didn't take into account her wants or needs at all. A consensual bdsm relationship should never disregard the sub, the dom is dominant of course but the sub is part of that relationship and though they give up control should still be considered. It all felt very abusive to me this situation.

I can't wait until your next submission well done

simply a masterpiece

Confused and Slightly Offended

I do hope that this isn't your view of BDSM because the facets of the entire community is safe, sane, and consensual and this story doesn't convey any of that. I am not trying to be rude at all, but I really couldn't enjoy this story because it was wrong in such a big way. I'm sorry

More!

fun story please continue

Qualified Five Star

I gave this five stars with reservations. Golden showers and a strappy fresh from someone's ass really don;t so anything for me. That having been said, the takedown here was elegant. The domme came across as predatory and confident in a way that I really liked and helped me to suspend disbelief. That's something I don't see too often. And I loved when they were talking afterwards. But the physical scene itself - not so much.

I like it.

Great story; I am enjoying the build up. I also like your writing style; your details make the setting much more realistic. Thank you.

Reunited with your story.

It's been awhile since I started your story, so I decided to start from word one. I like the flow and story line so far. Not being a non-con fan, I will trust in you and your writing to entice me to finish the story. I like my "spankings" and "ties" consensual...well, mostly! *; ) So far, so good. 5*'s !

Looking forward to the next chapter. See you in non-con.

Is he ever going to fuck?

So he's come through oral, been sodomized, he's done oral on them, and they've really overdone the tantric femdom thing. He has "the largest penis they've ever seen", but everything he's done would be the same with a normal penis. Sure, visually it's more appealing but now you're almost wasting our time reading.

Penis -> Vagina.

Very good

Great job I'd enjoy see your pictures I'll bet your a good slave slut deanmokbuilders@yahoo.com

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