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I really enjoyed it..

Hated it.

Goes totally beyond suspension of disbelief. You obviously have no idea what it is to be the Dom in a real relationship. It's the Dom's job to think of the realities and consequences of what's happening beyond the immediate getting of the nut. There is none of that here, just an amateurish attempt at a hotwife/gangbang/something fantasy that I sure as hell hope remains just that.

No still means no, even when it's from a submissive. One star, only because I can't vote any lower.

Thank you

I'm going to get a tutor right away.

Love it..lucky pet

Incongruous ?

The scene back at the hotel room near the end of the chapter didn’t make a whole lot of sense to me. Why the mock fight? At one point it was made to look like a rape scene, the conclusion hints at a long term relationship between the two where this kind of thing just happens. That said the start of the chapter clearly infers that what they’re doing is entirely new to them.
Overall it is a very erotic story and although they appear to be new to bdsm I did appreciate her conversation with the other sub.

WTF

Sick, disturbed old hag wanting ro be a hot MILF.

Continue the series

Sir I am a great fan of yours and would love to read more of such stories. Please continue the series as I really enjoy this series

Wrong Category

This is not what BDSM is about at all. This is just one harsh punishment after another for what I see as a tiny offense in a dystopian style storyline, of which I see very little.

Sweet

A great start. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters.

I love what a filty whore you are. My darkest fantasy is to be used by 3 men at once too. I hope your master permits this to happen, and you write all about it.

to the comment below

the exact opposite of a cuck.

is he married to her? no. He just 'owns' her. She's basically his cum-dump. He never mentioned love or marriage, just ownership. she's such a basic bitch, it works. she'll be happy to be his number 10, now that he's proven himself as an alpha. she'll willingly wait her turn...she is a stupid woman that only follows her biology. she's not even good with her instincts, but she'll go along with it. it's all she has. her primal need to serve the baddest hombre. she's at least honest with how basic she really is.

a lot more women put up a facade, and are really just a less honest version of her. not many actual strong independent women.

Great so Far!

Enjoyed the story so far! Very erotic and descriptive. Can't wait for more!

Series started out well

But degenerated into usual totally unbelievable ott nonsense..

Re: Enchanted by her

Thank you so much for enjoying.

It is the first time that our protagonist had ever experienced something like this. It won't be his last, though.

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