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Editing and proof reading...

I’m always looking for someone to take the job. I am bad at doing it. I struggle to go back and edit my work. I never seem to have the time.

When will you upload the next story?? Can't wait

Good story

I read part 5 first and went back to read the rest. I think chapter 4 is good, and is necessary to set up the upcoming changes in chapter 5. I have not read much bdsm but I know decent writing. I actually just began training as a sex slave a few weeks ago. My husband had a slave girl fantasy, and has a friend who trains slaves, so... here I am. Scared, freaking out, and aroused 24/7. I will keep an eye out for more chapters.

Today's Grammar Lesson

To vs too:
http://grammarist.com/usage/to-too/

A Proofreader?

Or at least a proofreader. It's a lovely fantasy, however. Do keep writing.

November 2016

was when this, and your other story, posted.
I hope you are well.
Thank you for sharing this erotic smorgasbord with us.
If, for some reason, you have stopped writing for Lit, I hope that you will continue to write, if not erotica then something. You have talent.

so much enjoyed this first chapter. that I was not able to stop rubbing my little sluty clit. dreaming that it was me in that position. can watch to read more

One question

Have you ever skinny-dipped before?

An Author

Methinks the two doth protest too much.
Empathy is required to be an author and I hope I have that at least.

Details add Interest to a good Story.

I am really enjoying this. Yours is a well-told story, with lots of details that really help the reader to visualize Emil's farm and the developing relationship between slave and master.

Needs an editor

I stopped reading after the first few paragraphs

Just do the inevitable snuff movie already.

Love the whole series

I loved the whole series. I didn't want it to end. It's a loving femdom relationship which are my favorite type of stories. Thanks for writing it!

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