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Short stories can be great. This one isn't though. It's confusing, it doesn't have any proper action, it's utterly meaningless. The idea isn't that bad, maybe you shall consider rewriting it.

Uh oh

I'm thinking tiwice about Snickers! Story was on fire.

Oops...

Misclicked. Thought this was "Scene From a Gynoid Service Station". Not.
So, forget my earlier "short stories" comment, since this has several parts...

Hot

Jealous of Kelly!!!!!

SRP Board?

It was mentioned that the author gave permission for a role play writer to continue the Vassal Academy story on the Literotica SRP board, but I searched on the FAQ page and got nothing. Any suggestions? I searched under “Vassal”.

Alternate multiverse

I like that ending. If only that were really how it ends for our Buttercup...
If that’s how you see Amanda... she really learns nothing... what will she learn?

personally i feel it was very different ,very erotic and very perverted as it should be

for the deviant minded i feel that this story is very well done..of course this is all the work of fantasy and when one reads from thier mind lets say it can not be as real as if it has happened in actual life,,perhaps this story has not reached some peoples dark side.yes ok forced lesbian incest is not every ones cup of juice and i understand that..but to a reader of extreme bdsm erotica there are no bares held..and perosnally i feel that this story hits the mark,,i tried to contact you thirdcoast in the hopes that you would finish the story,keep in mind that there are only 3 people who commented ,,2 against and 2 for it,,now its a tie lol..but if you are not finishing the story because of what people might feel ,,dont,,this is your idea,and i think it should be finished if you have the chance..i wrote to you in the hopes that if you were not planning on ending the story,that you would grant me the rights to do it for you..i began writing horror and police action until i started writing erotica with the same zeal as my horror,,with equal attention to detail..i have written erotica (in my case a mother willingly being a sexual toy for her twin daughters) that is so exceptionally hardcore..that somehow i doubt it would be accepted on literotica..but i ask that you allow me to finish owners manual if you do not,,but then again i doubt that youll even see my comment because its been so long since youve been on but im hoping

Hot little story, and one of the better spanking stories I have encountered. I hope you continue to write and post.

Idea for story

You could have Amanda and Sandra telling how they put their plan to feminize buttercup. The purposeful meeting between Amanda and buttercup. While buttercup is living with Amanda Sandra is selling off,their house so she can move in with Amanda and buttercup is their new pet. Amanda has been putting estrogen in buttercups food, body wash and lotion. Finally Amanda and Sandra on Buttercups last day with Miss Amanda drug his coffe/tea while having tea celebrating his graduating Amanda's programs. Amanda and Sandra sign up Buttercup for plastic surgery and breast surgery and liposuction

Idiotic so far.

It has a lot of climbing just to be second rate. Or maybe third.

Fade to black?!

I assume it picks up in part 2? Pretty please?

Great story

Frustrated by the lack of an update. Pretty please write more chapters, you yourself noted that this chapter is incomplete

So warm and happy!

This is one of my favorite hucow stories since it's so concentual and loving! I love being a sub and pleasing my master, but I love knowing he wants to pleasure me and treat me well. It just makes me want to give more of myself to him!

Don't worry about anonymous comments

I have read that same anonymous comment on several stories. The writer gets off on trying to sound relevant but hides behind his keyboard and doesn't post any of his own fantasies for others to review. His posts bring zero value to the discussion.

Edited

Thank you, I've edited it to fix that overlooked error in continuity! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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