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Great, Hot Story - But.

This is a great story which is very hot and well written. But, there are are some issues - one is very serious. I do not know if you read these comments after this extended period of time, nevertheless I feel strongly that for the benefit of your novice readers' safety it must be corrected. NEVER HANG ANYONE BY THEIR WRISTS TIED WITH ROPE!!! This can do serious damage to the nerves in the wrist which is irreversible. And, even with the appropriate hanging cuffs the long period of time that you depict can do other serious damage to the arms and shoulders.
On a less serious note, the 3-foot lengths of rope purchased at the sex shop are ridiculously too short. Tying someone with doubled strands of rope is much preferred, but even using a single strand 3-feet is too short for any suitable bondage. 🙂

Part 5

Hello readers, sorry for the silence!

Part 5 has been submitted, it should be posted within 48 hours. Part 6 is being written now :)

Excellent!

I'm not normally into girl on girl, but this was just... excellent!

Another thought

Yeah, I believe it is his wife too. But wouldn't that be a shame. I like the ideal that she's out fucking someone else and it turns out to be his daughter's friend in the outfit. Perhaps his step daughter could increase the blackmail when his wife finds out that he's been with another woman. She could even try to convince her mother that he's not a cross-dresser but likes to fuck other women with them wearing her clothes. Perhaps; Using her wedding dress as a fabric to wash off his sweat and her, (his daughter's friend's), cunt. The thought of the daughter being more devilish and the mother not knowing is more of a turn on then her dominating her mom.

More than Hot.

As a straight male can say it is a tribute to your writing that this little story is not only hot, but also so appealing with its characters. Enjoy your craft.

Finding the core

I read erotica to discover the many stops on my organ -- in the orchestra sense -- and aside from Pro_Ball_Player -- am seldom fully satisfied. This piece I think will take me there after many readings: from smut to literature. Way to go MoFo!

Good Stuff!

Another WELL WRITTEN, HOT story from this prolific, talented Literotica writer!

After years reading such stories, it continues to amaze me that some people come here, read or ignore the disclosure about the story's content, and that IT IS A STORY, E.G., a WORK OF FICTION! Then, get their panties in a bunch...WTF???

Such stories are an excellent way for people to spice up their boring, vanilla sex lives in a safe environment. If this is not your cup of tea, then PLEASE, don't drink it!

Please, please, please Sam ...

... let them have a happy ending? I love Melissa and Stephen.

Cannot get enough ...

... it is my favourite bed time reading ...

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loved it!

Simple but erotic tale, well done!

Lovely Intro

Well written ... can't wait for the sequel. This story could run and run.

That's hot.

I like this story a lot. Very succinct. Told me everything I needed to know about the encounter while still leaving room for me to fill in the details with my mind. 10/10 would read again. Thank you, Mr. Hawthorne.

going to jail

Dont people think before they write some of this stuff, he runs to get the key you know they are in a apartment complex, little kid come out of one of the aprtments down the hall presto instant sex offender, they must move away and stay away from kids the rest of their lives and he will have to register as a sex offender the rest of his life.

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