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Get over yourself...

Is everyone here a freaking English teacher? Not sure if English is my first language? Really? Get over yourself...

Part 4 submitted

Part 4 is finished, edited, and submitted! Literotica said it will take up to 48 hours to post it. I'm now starting on part 5!

Thanks for the continued support, I hope you all continue to enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing!

Gwen was terrific

I thought the series was exceptional. It sure got me juiced up. I hope Calandria keeps writing .

Get an editor

Then get a decent story line.

Can't even imagine

What the weekend with Josh will be like. Thank you.

A FIGURE OF SPEECH

can suck in readers, TK U MLJ LV NV

Panties

Wet white panties. Delicious x

Sugar Crits :

But he did'nt even pinch , slap or spank her ass ???
Or force an enema up her rectum ??
So how did her ass get punished ?

Yes!

Hope you continue this story.

nice one

one day the farm boss lady call me in the house I want to tell you I just sold the farm but not to worry I brought a small place and you can still work for me if you want I said why yes miss I work for you good then in the morning we leave I ask what about your thing I only taking my clothes I sold every thing well we started for the new place it was a four hour drive once there we look at the place what a mess inside and out well we get unload and I start to clean up the yard well I mow the lawn and fit the fence it was dark now and went inside she yell come here I need help the water pipe broke I get it turn off but I was all wet and I did not bring any change of clothes I was going to drive back to night well she told me you need some dry clothes I told I do not have any well all I have is mine the only thing may fit is this old dress I told better then these wet ones but if I do I will not have under wear on if you do not mind wearing panties well I guess not I be in your dress why not your panties I told as a joke I always want to get in your panties she smile and laugh I old to be your mother I got dress when I was dress I show here look miss what you think I make a good girl she look may be you would well you can help make dinner well I help and after dinner I clean up did the dishes and mop the floor I sat down in the living room she came in well we did good to day I said yes miss I told I should change and head back home to get my thing that when she ask why not go in the morning I could go shopping while you get your thing I said yes that be fine well I going to sleep in the truck no I made up a bed in the spare room and I lay out some thing you can wear to bed when I went to the room on the bed was a black teddy I got undress well I wore her dress and panties why not the nightie and I saw the house robe I selpt like a baby I got up first put on the robe went and made coffee and brought her a coffee in her room she woke up why thank you dear you look cute in that outfit and you brought me coffee just like a maid I look at her and smile yes miss and I bow I do not no why I did all that I went and shower after I shower I went to put my clothe back on and they were gone I went to her do you know were my clothes are yes there in the washer there still wet so I just going to wash them first but I need some thing to wear back in town well we go later come here I want to look at you I sat on the bed she ask did you like the nightie you had on I said yes miss and the panties and dress yes miss how would you like to get dress in them again I thought about it well it just us two here why not you can make me look like a women are you sure about that yes miss I sure you can do anything you want well after five hours she had me looking like a women even with tits I had my nails done a wig put on my head and make up now we are ready to go shopping I told I can not go like this yes you can and will well we got to town went shopping and no one knew I was a man on the way back I told we did not get my clothes dear just look at you are a girl now and my maid I brought you some nice clothes and some sexy girly thing you like well she was right after three month I learn how a girl feel then I told her miss I always want to be your bitch please make me feel like a women that night she toke me and now I am her house bitch boy

Loved it for a first time submission!

Left me feeling like I was in the story! Could use a few tweaks here and there. In agreeance to the last comment I do believe that it's good to incorporate good hygiene with safe sex. This of course being a fantasy, it has no harm. Fantastic work, can't wait to read more!

A wonderful submissive story

Chapters

104. Aphrodite's Curse is really 2 books combined. Aphrodite's Curse - The Quest of Demetrius & The Goddesses Take Control. Book 3, Olympus has Fallen will post immediately after.

Thanks for reading.

Please write!!

I don't usually comment, but your story deserves some recognition. It's one of the best stories on here. I would gladly pay for something like this on Amazon if you were to decide to write full time. Please continue your writing... I check of new chapters every month.

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