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Fucking incredible

This is without question one of the hottest stories ever. Thank you. And please keep it going (obviously) !

Liked the story, set up of her submission etc. I only have one major complaint. After all the buildup and prep, couldn't you have worked out a way to enema Valerie's backdoor clean? Maybe have Sally do it? I would never have my sub "lick her own anal fluids" (aka...shit) off my cock.

Extremely well done!

Don't worry about the commenters who are too lazy to think when they read! Writing slang is very difficult, and you pulled it off brilliantly. 5 stars and envious applause!

Calm your tits people

Get off his case, he said he submitted it so its up to Lit now. New stories usually come out once a day around midnight US time so if it's not out by then it'll be another day.

This is such an incredible story. I can't wait for each chapter. The next one is no exception. You are a gifted writer. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

💔

The beginning of the story was amazing and well written. I just don't agree with the last part. That is just torture and I feel like after a while she would need more. I know, wanting to please your Master to the fullest is great but he should not have done that. Maybe as punishment for a few days would be totally understandable.
But it was a great story! Your write beautifully.

This is a good beginning, and I encourage you to continue.

You write well -- very refreshing. I suggest, though, not including dialogue spoken by more than one character in the same paragraph. Having each character speak in a separate paragraph improves readability.

More Bree + Hunter

Please more! I need to see how Bree + Hunter play out. Love that forbidden couple!!!

good read

more humiliation add more of the son few of his Buddy's
have drink piss

Thank you Chimera44

for another excellent chapter and for sharing with us your talented writing skills.


DC

The wait is painful! I was hoping it would be up by the time work was over but still waiting. Hopefully its up soon and not another 3 days of constant checking. Get it together Literotica!

My only regret

As far as this story is concerned, my only regret is it never got to the point where John had the opportunity to demonstrate to Kevin, the doctor and the trainer that god is a bullet. I'm on the fence about Susan. Sure she thought she was doing right by her and John, but now she's nearly as twisted as those taking advantage of her.

Awesome!

Gotta love the hater trolls! Dude it's a femdom slavery story, don't read if you don't like! Great series, hope you add more. 5+ btw!!

Im not a doctor.

I have no patience. Been checking every hour that ive been awake since yesterday. I think chelsea the evil cheerleader got a job as the mod and is playing toying with us hehehe. Check out the authors tumblr in the mean time hes got hot posts! Its the same as his name here bottom-all-the-way

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