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Miss Phillips

Enjoyed both parts. Absolutely erotic. Needs a proper cast to play out the roles. Anyone creative would be overjoyed to fill in. Thanks.

Great story!

I enjoyed reading this story very much! Very cool to see mother and daughter punished this way! Poor Kathleen and Emily!

I loved this - all it needs is a sequel

Great.

Keep up the good work. Had me hot as fuck!

Very hot!

Eagerly waiting for the next installment.

Keep writing!

It's hard writing erotica because you have to meet somewhere between telling your story and giving the readers what they want. Bonus point if you achieve both! Check out some of my stories if you like I love feedback :)

would like to hear how turned on the husband got when he heard or the eventful evening

Nice work

Great sections with the spanking and panties.

How right you are--

BDSM is, and should be, voluntary play between consenting players. My stories are intended for people who like to jerk off and think about such fantasies. Taking it all apart intellectually is kind of stupid. It's like trying to analyze why you like cookie dough ice cream. If you don't like fetish stuff, don't read it.

Great Story

Have loved Bella since the first day she walked into Mel's office. Am sorry to see the story end, but glad she ended up happy with Sir Stephen. Good writing!

Not good

I expected sexier... And to have used the Spanish language in a more crafted way... Disappointed!

jennyeatspussy

I only came to literotica.com since I retired and had more time and find that your stories are the best written on this website. I read the particular story in one go, it was only when I looked at the dates of publication that I noticed that this story had taken over seven years to write. I maybe wrong in my assumption, but feel that perhaps this particular story reflected the authors own life story, I know that in many ways it did mine. I married at twenty two after qualifying as a teacher, married a fellow teacher, had children, then after eleven years met again someone, I first met at infants school. We went through school together, played around a bit as teenagers then parted when I left for university. We met again when I was in my late twenties, and resumed where we left off. My husband was teaching away from home at as head of deptment at a new school and I was to join him in the new year, it became apparent to me that I was living a lie, that in reality, I was a lesbian and made the decision to end the marriage. I sat with my husband explained the how and why of things and to my surprise he accepted what I told him. We divorced, and by living close to each other shared the responsibility of raising the children. He helped to reunite me with my parents when they disowned me and when I entered firstly a civil partnership and then finally married Yvonne he walked me into the registery office. Yvonne and I have been together now for nearly thirty years and love each other more each day, but I have to admit I could not have had a better or more loving and caring husband (the male variety), because without his love, understanding and support I would have lost my children, parents and possibily my life.

no such thing

You know there is no such thing as a 'Doms' ( or 'Dommes'), right? No such thing as submissives, either. But there are fetishists. I suppose, however, that egos as hopelessly inflated as those who call themselves Master or Sir knowing full well that without consent, they'd be spending a good part of their lives in jail, don't like the idea that their delusion just boils down to unremarkable and utterly contrived fantasies in really bad costumes with very, very bad lines. And therein lies the glaringly obvious contradiction... doms have NO real power AT ALL, either in the bedroom or out of it. They are unpaid actors in a 'scene' for two (or three or twenty or whatever). Which kind of makes the whole BDSM thing a very funny joke. You KNOW that, right?

Loved this - others are wrong

As much as I love Clark and Juliet, I loved having an interim 11.5 series break on Finn and his animalistic behavoir. Clark and Juliet have all the love and gentleness but Finn has the crazy sexy almost sadistic behavoir that is also nice to see in a master. I think you should continue with both series, maybe making Finn one of his own, or coming up in between every few chapters as a break between the loving and caring sub/dom relationship of Juliet and Clark. Love to see more, you're a brilliant writer and by far my favorite series on Lit. Keep it up!
-Storm, a fan

Great story

Love the humiliation he is getting put thru. Keep up the great work. Can not wait for the next chapter.

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