better than a many of stories on here.... Really good. Thanks very much, TTT.
I'm glad PatientLee pointed me to this story. I don't think I've seen a more gripping and yet erotic story anywhere. I'm off to read more of your works.
'people next store'
Shouldn't that be 'people next door'?
Not the only story I've seen that in, so is that a common speech to text glitch?
till your past and present catches up in the future. TK U MLJ LV NV
You discribe him as living a hermit life style, why did he have two chairs on his portch?
You also did not tell us how she found him.
i really enjoy your writing.
I like the smut, but you get more in-depth about high school and the college application process than is really necessary.
Better than the wimpy JPB ending but this chapter didn't really follow the previous story. It seemed to jump from 4 people getting along with him to 4 people trying to kill him in his front yard. This ending might have worked if the story would have taken a little longer and developed the story line but this was too abrupt. Gave JPB's story 1* because of the pussy ending. Gave this one 2* because the bitches got what they deserved, but come on; 4 loving people to 4 trained killers in 2 paragraphs. Just too fast.
Not that it makes any difference at all, but my take on Hephaestus is that his lameness came from his trade, a smithy disease. Bronze is made of copper and tin, but the earliest form of bronze is an alloy of copper and arsenic, and smelting it produced arsenic fumes in the smithy. Arsenic poisoning in low doses can cause peripheral neuritis with loss of function in the extremities. Arsenic bronze wasn't used much after 2,500 BCE, so I've always thought this dated the roots of the Hephaestus myth to before that.
So, just as the mad hatter refers to an occupational hazard of working with felt 500 years ago, the lame smithy, I suggest, also references an occupational hazard. No OSHA back then.
The best brother sister incest story yet. Damn, if only I had one such sister 😁
Your story was wonderful on a couple of levels and it was all joined together seamlessly. Like it really happened. The quoting of the song lyrics was a stroke of genius! Well written and thank you.
There were only a few details that needed clearing up. What ever happened to their supposed friends who covered for her? It stands to reason that they were persona non grata after the party. How his pouring the beer all over the carpet and basically calling the guys wife a slut and him a cuckold wimp didn't serve as a wake up to her I don't understand. How exactly did she know that he could go back if she stopped seeing shithead? Had he told the children about what happened or had his wife? What were their reactions I wonder.
One last thing, since he put the album to burn, he should have or could have told her "why are you saving it, the marriage means nothing to you anyway since you've torched it, and I am gone so let it burn!".
Still overall, it was one of your better stories. Thanks for the offering....
This entire series is one of the best I've ever read, period
I have to say it was alright, I am not into 2 guys doing it but it was alright
I though this story was very good
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