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Loved it.

The knight chuckled. "Correct me if I am wrong, but seeing as how we have the same grandfather, and I am older . . . technically, I suppose, that would make me the rightful regent of Vix." He finished his statement with a wink.

Okay, he was joking, laws of succession can be different in a fictional universe, and also he may not have been familiar with thelaws of succession, but in English law at least he would have been wrong in several ways:
1) She's the legitimate offspring of the King - succession by direct descent.
2) John's mother was illegitimate, whereas Evelyn's father was legitimate.
3) Even if John's mother had been legitimate, being female would still have given Evelyn's father the throne, pushing John out of the direct line of succession.
The story implies that reason 3 at least still applies in the fictional universe.

OOPS, I gave that point a much bigger write-up than it deserves, although some may find it interesting.

Awesome

This is just a really really great piece of eotica.
Kudos on the ending; it was clever, endearing in a cheesy good fashion, and made the rest of the story work.

5* Man Up Time

The author finally wrote a manly story...tough guy! Congrats!

I can't believe this dumb story...

But, I love it. Had fun reading it too.....bill

5sssss

Why

Why have I not read this before? 5* Can't wait for your next effort: 'The can of Spam was tipped on its side'. Begin writing your story......

Not finishing this is just evil.

Well, I'm dissapointed about this story having ended there. I hope you find it in your heart to write a complete series on this one.

Thanks!

Loved the story

Hope you fuck Houston. He loves you and deserved your pussy.

garbage

Very well written garbage about a so called tough guy that all along he was nothing but a cockold wimp.

wow

5 stars. So gentle. So tender. And still adventurous.

I just have to say this, I hate the way this is ending! I don't mind some BDMS but I actually hate this. You are an excellent storyteller and I love most of your other works, but not this one. A good Dom/sub relationship is about trust and I don't condone violence for Any relationship. Keep writing!!

Why

Why did a hermit have two chairs
Why did he give her a beer
Why did he buy her lunch
Why did you not tell how she found him.
Empty

A great romance

I've read this story a few times and it never loses it's appeal. It's just a great shame that there isn't a continuation (at least that I've been able to find).

Phil

Interesting Story All The WAY!

When the other critics write fucktard, & bad story, etc. I can tell they have not lived. They have not experienced how twisted some peoples minds can be. I was in the military, stationed in the U.S., single, when I moved into this town next to another married couple, He had been stationed in Thailand for a year, came back with a falcon tatooed on his back, a Thai tree monkey, and an attitude. Man King, women slave. I personally witnessed him verbally abusing her. When she left him, he went for his gun, I intervened, he was arrested, they divorced. She later told me that he would bend her over the foot of the brass bed and anally rape her. So to those who berate these 2 stories, YOU HAVE NOT LIVED AND EXPERIENCED HUMAN DECADENCE! YOUR WORDS INDICATE THAT TOTALLY!!! I give 5***** because of the complexity of the stories, characters, cheating, and all the other human bullshit!

WHEN ONE HAS TO SING HIS OWN PRAISES

it doesn't bode well for the pair, TK U MLJ LV NV

I liked it 😊

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