Will you allay my sorrows? is your best line, melodic and significant -- use it in a repeating chorus
rhyme the last word of the stanza as it provides continuity and fluidity to a song, by not doing so you block the songs integrity and separate the parts from the whole
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
It was very Sexy!
makes me want to fuck her face.... such a lovely reading
That goes against everything that women say and everything that I have read about how women are like slow cookers. Or maybe he for played with her through text all day long
Думаю, что США настолько уже всех измучает, вытягивая деньги с каждой страны в мире, что в итоге будет создан более справедливый союз. Ну а амеры получат под жопу пинок.
Very enticing, Mer. You flirt with the vulgar but manage to bring it back to the touching of love.
but they are older than i. TK U MLJ LV NV
So many good lines.
I'm having one of those...Wow! I wish I had written that' moments :-)
this is really beautiful
Glad I stumbled upon this piece. It was a wonderful poem and your voice was amazing.
5 star all the way!
...and the listen was even better.
Very impressive. Can't get enough of this one.
Intelligent. Vivid. Balanced. Just a wire-to-wire win. Extremely well put together and commanding.
Love the voice too.
Sorry, but I'm not going to down load Real Player just to hear this.
Does anyone even use RealPlayer anymore?
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