Poetry With Audio Feedback Portal

Load newRequesting new commentsRequesting new commentsNo new comments, try later

Latest 15 Reader Comments

a few suggestions

Will you allay my sorrows? is your best line, melodic and significant -- use it in a repeating chorus
rhyme the last word of the stanza as it provides continuity and fluidity to a song, by not doing so you block the songs integrity and separate the parts from the whole


Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

beautiful voice

makes me want to fuck her face.... such a lovely reading


That goes against everything that women say and everything that I have read about how women are like slow cookers. Or maybe he for played with her through text all day long

Looks good.

Думаю, что США настолько уже всех измучает, вытягивая деньги с каждой страны в мире, что в итоге будет создан более справедливый союз. Ну а амеры получат под жопу пинок.

Very enticing, Mer. You flirt with the vulgar but manage to bring it back to the touching of love.


but they are older than i. TK U MLJ LV NV

I completely fell for this poem

So many good lines.
I'm having one of those...Wow! I wish I had written that' moments :-)


this is really beautiful


Glad I stumbled upon this piece. It was a wonderful poem and your voice was amazing.

5 star all the way!

Now that was worth the read...

...and the listen was even better.
High 5

Very impressive. Can't get enough of this one.

Intelligent. Vivid. Balanced. Just a wire-to-wire win. Extremely well put together and commanding.

Love the voice too.

Who Even Uses RealPlayer anymore?

Sorry, but I'm not going to down load Real Player just to hear this.
Does anyone even use RealPlayer anymore?



Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar: