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Hey, that's pretty good--

This was pretty good, but the punctuation and word choice was off/awkward in a couple places. 4/5!

Me too!

It was really interesting to read about this dysfunctional family. There are a few typos here and there, but overall the quality is ok. One thing that strikes me as odd is how Emily's depression was cured with a kidnapping. I would have liked to read more about what went on in her head to change from "I killed my friend" to "It wasn't me, it was them". And also how her wanting to die from right before the kidnapping changed to her wanting to stay alive after being rescued.

So cool....

Just loved this story....Sexey..heartfelt...please wright more my friend....impressed💜

Needs a lot of work.

It's hard to believe two people wrote this story and for it to come out this poorly. Awkward use of terminology, run on sentences galore, and incredibly poor punctuation and grammar. Could be a good story if heavily edited.

At the Undertakers

Interesting story - not read anything like it before - but I enjoyed it....

Nice Twist!

Didn't expect te ending! Well Done, :-)

Ah yes, I do recall reading this some time ago. Most impressive! Thanks for the link. EB

What A Story

Excellent. I would love to read a sequel so I can find out what happens to Nancy. I am sure the succubi just want to have sex with her. Unless I am mistaken, they usually only kill men.

Bloke dies at the end, eh ?

More Please!!

I've already read all of your stories. This is by far my favorite. Please post more.

Yes

I loved it fun sexy and supernatural, i would love to hear about another encounter

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Please is there now
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Well done

I enjoyed this story a lot.

this story was sexy and creepy, don't think I've ever read one like this before; good job! I actually would like to read more.. hopefully you can continue

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