Same old amyWHORE shit. amyWHORE writes crap with the sole purpose of annoying men. She hates all men who aren't wimpy fags like her cuck husband!!! Rate accordingly!
Not your writing but the premise of the story. How did he find out? Was it a setup from the beginning so he could control and torture her?
The humiliation comes from the subjugation of the spouse. Even though the husband may have latent desires, it is the wife's power of persuasion and ability to coax, untap, discover, reveal, develop, and ultimately fulfill those desires that is the driving force here. He's not going to explore it on his own and no man is capable of seducing him. Only the sweet, hypnotic, sexy, feminine voice suggesting seductively that he can be what she wants him to be is going lead him across boundaries that he otherwise would never approach. It's not about the destination, it's all about her guidance, and that's what he's addicted to.
So she has manipulated him into doing this for her enjoyment. He was sold on the idea that this was something that he unknowingly desired. What happens if he discovers that this is the way (MM) he wants to go in the future. What need has he for her? It's hard to humiliate someone by making them do something that they want to do.
Thank you Sir for your amazing letter. It was so moving it brought my body to orgasm more than once just imagining this. I am truly grateful for the pleasure you provided Sir. I look forward to reading more. An online admirer
I would not miss reading this one.
I hope Eden will be all right. Mama is strong, but this is very hard on her. I have a feeling that Josh will be sharing Peri with Dante. How will Peri feel about it?
Very hot. Very erotic. I imagine myself there, enjoying you, teasing you, and pleasuring you, intending to make the wait worth with it for both of us.
Definitely 5 Stars.
At first it was okay, but you can't get so many letters about jacked up stuff. If you must write about getting a letter get a happy one sometime.
Nikki most of have a Nikki, She was the girl in high school or grade school not the popular one that all the jocks wanted who put out but,she was pretty quite one who was religious and smart who liked us.
She wasn't going away to college like us or she was going a religious school or her parents talked her to enter a convent.
Yes we wanted what every high school boy wanted before going away to school or to the service (a piece of ass) from that girl.
What happened to her after we left, I don't know, when I go home to the old neighborhood on leave or after college and getting a job. I might think of her name then I might not. More than likely not and I really don't care what she may be doing with herself. Now if you married her you may care. I didn't marry her so that subject is not on my mind. Use your good writing skills to write about something else. Someone said your writing is very good sometimes and trying to find out I will let you know when I find something I like.
I'm not going any further than this comment. Although you write well your choice of subjects is not to my liking.
The story took a couple odd turns along the way, but you wrapped it up really well. I still think the long term blackmail succeeds too easily to be even slightly believable, but I guess having a couple women attempt suicide or homicide on Jack would ruin the fantasy. In the end I gave 5 stars because it's a far superior effort to the normal dreck on lit.
This was amazing, very talented! How long do we have to wait for part two?!
This was so hot and erotic and in the moment. I love these types of chats and have had them more than once next to my sleeping wife. Nothing turns me on more than knowing that someone else is just as turned on and excited as I am. Please keep sharing.
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