it is posted like Movie and TV scripts are given to actors to learn their lines TK U MLJ LV NV
GIVE UP WHILE YOU ARE AHEAD....
I have no idea how it would feel to do what 'Lisa' did in this story and could never do it myself, (too hetero for that sort of thing) but the letter to her husband telling him what she has done raises all sorts of questions in my mind as reader.
For example, what fantasies have they shared and how good are the chances that he will see this as an exciting extension of those fantasies?
What do she and her husband see as "cheating". A couple of comments have insisted that it was cheating. The usual Loving Wives story has a penis entering a vagina as cheating absolute. In that category I have had discussions about cheating being an emotional thing rather than physical. Has Lisa's actions here reduced her emotional commitment to her marriage and to Will? I think not. This letter wouldn't exist if she saw herself as cheating.
And finally, as Author, Lisa, please ignore requests for a follow-up story. Write for yourself, not for the commentariat. If you really want to write a further episode, go for it. But I was encouraged to write a follow-up for a story that was supposed to pose a dilemma and writing the subsequent episodes was painful.
I thought it was a great story. It also raised lots of opportunities for follow-up. You and your hubby reliving and talking about the incident, whether this opens up more such explorations, etc. Keep writing for sure.
In my own case, I'd LOVE to get my wife to tell me more about her imagination, fantasies, former lovers, experiences. She was always very reluctant. I love getting to see to the sexiest part of a woman....her mind.
She is cheating.
Just to say this is only a fantasy, it didn't actually happen. Just exploring how I and my OH might feel if it did!
Been in a similar situation, it was a bit disconcerting to hear, and at the same time extraordinarily intense to listen to my wife retell the tale. Yes, we did a repeat.
The writing was good but cheating is cheating.If it had been him she would have btb him.
Reading this on your now 70th birthday is an honor. Keep on keeping on, kid!
You did not too badly on the history and geography of the regions though I might quibble with some of the projected travel times and the activity of the two empires during this period. Point of trivia for you--The Great Game was the British name but the Russians named it the Tournament of Shadows.
Hope your life sucks the big one from now on. I'll have you served in a day or two.
Have a shitty life.
Nice man. Simply short and soo hot. I really like it
Horny to read, horny to write & the make up sex should be explosive!
At least your story gets across.good reading and great ideal thinking.
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