Thank you, thank you , thank you!
First off, am so glad that you are over the 'C' word...I cannot even imagine how that feels ...and at the same time pray that you get over all the other issues that are making you feel ...well crap!
I have been thinking about when you would post your next chapter for the last few weeks and when I saw it this morning.....I was like ......thank you god!!!
It's only taken me 5 hours to read it :)
Hope you feel better soon and god bless
welcome back. thanks.........
I JUST SAW THIS POSTING THIS MORNING AND WILL NOT HAVE TIME TO READ IT FOR A DAY OR TWO. BUT I AM GLAD YOU ARE STILL WITH US.
MY CHOICE WOULD PROBABLY BE MAYO, BUT THAT IS JUST FROM WHAT I HAVE HEARD OVER THE YEARS.
AND THEY DID GOOD FOR YOU PILOT AFTER THE FOREST EPISODE.
THANKS FOR ALL THE STORIES, AND I WISH YOU ALL THE BEST. WILL GIVE YOU STARS AFTER I READ IT.
Loved your work as always, take your time and heal. Your health has to come first, if for no other reason than we need more chapters of your excellent writing.
... I'm a sucker for happy endings. There are so many in your story, I could not stop reading it. I'm rubbish at constructive reviews. All I can say is I love your writing.
Thanks, reader. Uschi's a bargain-priced Kindle e-book now, so please head over there!
i just read this almost same story 2 days ago but the only diff was the intro but like the same shit... caretakers, Casandra, chaos, and even a guy named jake with companions, and caretakers, in it from SW_MO_Hermit called Enough its like he finished the story but not caus he redid it
I love your series, I can't wait for your next installation!
First, thanks for taking the time to continue your story.
Maybe it's me, while entertaining, it's missing that spark which usually fills the page in past episodes.
Possibly because the sequence of events feel a little more rushed.
More than likely, it's just me, so trust me when I say it was worth waiting.
One other point.
Reading the comments, I have to laugh at the Anonymous contributors where they can't spell a word correctly or form a sentence, and yet, they think they're gifted literary critics who are ashamed to be recognized...lol
They're not worth the notice except for a brief, very brief, chuckle before being forgotten.
The last bit with Gwen talking about Steve maintaining her honour and all seemed kinda heavy handed
Sheer amount of nepotism was astounding
Otherwise, freaking brilliant. Welcome back!!! Hope future chapters won't have long breaks in coming online
Crap! My finger slid over the Report Story as I swiped. I hope it didn't get through but if it did, this is me canceling that Report. Your stories are always good! I miss the Uschi series though...
Though I thought the opening was a little weak, the last dozen paragraphs made up for it.
Should have quite while ahead!
But if you are editing for publishing, the way she realized Livius was the enemy seemed very contrived. It came out of nowhere.
Everything else was great.
i loved the way you really Spanked the United States inept, corrupt, self serving, vested interest Legislature.
however , it was disappointing that you Beefed up the importance of the UK , France & Germany .. Everyone knows Germany has no real military forces & that the UK & France effectively do whatever the USA tells them to , wether in regards to NATO or the United Nations ...
essentialy America says jump & Britain & France yell "how high"
(that is once they have taken thier Tongues out of USA's anus & got up off of thier Knees)
One thing i would love Gwen to Address / deal with rapidly is the Economic War the West has been engaged in with China since the End of the Vietnam War ,
You know ... the one where we Export Jobs & Import Goods .. in the Forlorn hope that if we create enough Wealth within the Top of chinese society (and other parts of south east asia) and also a large enough middle class there ... that they will also Adopt our Democracy or have it forced upon them by an unhappy populace
The economic War that has totaly Fucked Main street & only made Wall street & the Elite more wealthy & more powerful
50 million Americans living in poverty & a rapidly shrinking middle class
Wake Up World .. Free Trade with Nations that have a much lower per capita GDP is nothing more than Economic Aid ...in the misbeggoten hope that those places will Emulate us & Love us .. or at least do what the fuck we tell them too..
It would also be delightful & really funny if Gwen looked into where all the unaccounted for hundreds of Billions of dollars have gone.
the money that falls into the Black hole of the DOD & state..
the money used to destabilise & overthrow any fucker that won't do what we want or tell them too. if you are really intent on addressing World Peace , thats one rabbit hole that cannot be avoided
(although even the mighty & legendary Steve Hammer will struggle to stop the shit storm & assassination attempts that would follow from looking to hard in those directions)
godbless you .. on the continuation of your most enjoyable & delightfully sweet Carebear Tale .. if only 10% of your alternate world could actually be real
you have two doctors ?
(charlotte & Laura)
will we see one @ CDC
and the other at W.H.O
that would be so cool ...
would love to see Gwen shake up the United Nations & actually have that organisation live upto it's name .. rather than be the global fuck up that it is today .
lots of love & best wishes
please keep up the good work & fun
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