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Wild ride so far

I have never commented before finishing a story, but I am enjoying this so much that I though I should. I am quite amazed at where this story has gone so far and I am sure that Jayden is going to end up with someone at the end. I thought I knew who at the beginning but now I am not so sure.

Yoshi

Thanks for the response, lctf.

"I have the full (7 or 8 part) series sketched out and while you may be disappointed on some fronts you will hopefully be pleased to hear that Uschi's every subsequent scheme for the other girls will be more contrived and farcical than the last. :-)"

Glad to see you have so much of the series mapped out. One frustrating aspect of online writers who write in installments is when they write themselves in a hole and/or disappear leaving an incomplete story/series. Based on your track record (with your other stories) I wouldn't put you in the above category; it's just nice to hear it clarified that you have the future sketched out instead of "winging it".
And being the measurement junkie that I am, I don't see how I could EVER be disappointed in a series where finding out women bra sizes is the major plot point.

"Trying to go for something a little less ambitious in scale with this one. The long-form stories, though I am still committed to them, are really difficult to keep going."
That's sort of what I was addressing in the first paragraph: writers creating these ambitious story-lines & series then, for whatever reason, NOT being able to complete them. But I've been really impressed with your past work (especially "First Term at Stonemere"; it reminded me of my BE story mentor and friend Al aka Some Sort of Dog's St. Cat's series at times) and I look forward to your next posting.

Enjoying this series!

Glad to hear you have more on the way.

AMAZING WRITING

This story is soooooo good. Thank you for writing it.

Good ideas

Ha! You're already one step ahead of me on a lot of your points. I have the full (7 or 8 part) series sketched out and while you may be disappointed on some fronts you will hopefully be pleased to hear that Uschi's every subsequent scheme for the other girls will be more contrived and farcical than the last. :-)

Trying to go for something a little less ambitious in scale with this one. The long-form stories, though I am still committed to them, are really difficult to keep going.

Thanks as ever for reading.

Bring On The Other Girls!

Possible spoilers.


I'm really enjoying the start of this series (one focused on getting bra sizes/measurements is straight up my alley!)).

At the beginning I was thinking that Roger was going to be forced to hire an applicant who was flat-chested by Uschi (fully aware of the kind of personnel he typically hires) only for her to be as well-endowed as the other office girls (sort of what we saw with Jill in "First Term at Stonemere Park").

This hasn't happened yet (although I would LOVE if Kathrin who he thinks may have slipped through the cracks as the resident flatty is actually one of the most developed girls in the office), but Uschi becoming his partner was great.

I look forward to the various ways that Uschi and Roger get the desired measurements of the other girls. Alice getting the classic bra measuring scene was well-written, sexy and enjoyable.

As he becomes more informed about bra sizes, the physical nature of breasts, nipples, etc. I'm interested in how his fetish is affected: does it worsen or improve his love of breasts.

I wonder if Uschi dumps her boyfriend and falls for Roger and how that changes their relationship.

Putting his spreadsheet on the company file wasn't the smartest thing he could do, so I'm wondering who else inside and outside his branch is going to find out about Roger fantasizing about his co-workers.

If he keeps making expensive purchases for these ladies it's possible another executive is sent to monitor his business practices. This could open his spreadsheet to other ladies and also create the need for a hopefully large-breasted executive to pay a visit.

As a nod to your other stories what if he hosts a seminar to young female students scouting his company job-fair style and/or hosts a bring a female relative to work day (obviously a more appropriate title would be used)? Would they make it on the spreadsheet as he and Uschi tried to get their measurements?

We need to find out more about the company gym. Uschi's sports bra sort of initiated this scenario, so I'm thinking that via laundering their clothes, sponsoring company gym wear, etc. that the gym would be a good source of getting bra sizes...although if Alice is any indication they're probably not (all) wearing the right sizes.

Really enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapters.

Wonderful

A true tale of riches to rags, in the most erotic fashion imaginable. I love the back and forth play between Miss Kathy and Miss Clearmont. I do, unlike the others like the body modifications. At the end when she is taken by Miss Torment and altered to fit her whim, it was incredible. The humongous breasts, the weight gain, the complete extraction of all her teeth was a great climax. The only thing missing was the depilation of her head, which I just assumed would come later, with the other mods. Although most of this story line has been explored, it would be a really interesting read if there was an epilogue for the end of Denise, I would really enjoy that.

Omg! I didn't want it to end. I have enjoyed what I have read so far and looking forward to the rest of the story. It kept me interested from the very beginning and I can't wait to see how this will end. Vaughn's Choice definitely a must read for all book worms. M&M

Lol Tron

I was honestly waiting for Athena to declare that she "Fights for the Users"

Loved this series

I don't usually masturbate when reading but couldn't stop myself while reading your stories. My husband will wonder what has gotten into me tonight when I initiate with thoughts of these stories. Please write more like this one. Inner forbidden thoughts are really sexy.

Sometimes you get lucky just trolling for a good story...

and sometimes "Beyond Belief".

Great Story and writing. Thanks for sharing on Lit.

x

So good!

I'm so glad you're continuing this story. I love watching Peri grow. And Josh as well. Can't wait for more! I hope this series has many more chapters to come. Well done!!

Once again

I have read all of the trail series. I have not commented Until now but I did vote again, i will let you guess at the score.I am in the middle of reading all your stories without comment but with vote. Thank you photomeister for the proper layout I will print that and hang it on my wall.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

Thank you..

I would like to thank you for really good story. I hope this finds you in good health.. Larry R.

One of Literotica's more competent authors

Ellie, I find most of your stories a delight to read, despite the fact that I often dislike your topics such as submissiveness. This one is progressing particularly well. Thanks for contributing.
L

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