A COUPLE THINGS I WASN'T TOTALLY HAPPY ABOUT. THAT YOU HAD HIM LOSE THE FARM AND MOVE AWAY. THEY SHOULD HAVE LIVED THEIR LIVES IN THAT TOWN. TO THE ONE WHO SAID HE ABANDONED HIS KIDS I HAVE THIS TO SAY TO HIM. REREAD THE STORY MORON. HE HAD NO MONEY TO SPEAK, HOW WAS HE GONNA FIND THEM. ALL IN ALL A GOOD STORY.
i wasn't able to sleep so I decided to read chapter 7 instead. Good decision, although now I'm so turned on I may never go to sleep without masturbating. :)
That was a fine way to introduce Mei to sex with a woman. So hot!
Great job waiting for MORE! Ch 2 is basically just what ch1 need more great reading and even better story and lead star development. Can't wain for more so had to come back just to ask.
I just wanted to thank you for another very well written chapter. Given the wait time for this one, I can only hope that things in your personal life are doing well. Please keep them coming. I have found that your well written stories are among the best of the best on the site. I in no way mean to take away from others, but I find myself checking each day to see if there is a new chapter posted.
Again, thanks for another well written chapter.
One of the best scenes ever, fantastic!
Thank you very much.
This is Going so good!
OK Sandy is Feels free to call him Dear now, and letting him take pictures, which is more to his power. She has Video's of him, so she can't get to upset, course now he can use this more like blackmail, if he wants, but once again this isn't a Dark story.
making out at school, is a place where no one has a camera, so the more they do it outside of her house, the more control he has over her, which isn't much at all. I do wonder if he'll bring in another girl? you know what if a stronger Female came out, to control them both? I don't think it will come, but if there is a story like that, let me know?
you know, i don't have an idea what will happen next? I don't, i do wonder, but i can wait 2 days for it.
Thank you for a great story!
I do hope she goes to his place.
I read all your work I see almost every time someone bitches about your work. So people help don't bitch. At least this person has the balls or tits to put in down for us to read. Yes it needs some work but be nice about how you all say it, or don't say a damned thing. I'm no Grammer King or Queen I fixed it while I read it. If you can't do that in your head go back to school. My schooling sucked and yet I can read and understand what the author is saying.
Back again with another chapter to this very fascinating well crafted story. The situation with Mickey was as expected. It appears that hell in six loads is going to be delivered to Tri-Star Partners, they just don't know it yet. Keep up the excellent work.
I wish the installments came out quicker but they are well worth waiting for. I've enjoyed reading this action packed thriller. (The fact that it is set in my state of residence does not hurt either)
I know how life can interfere with writing so I'm not gonna bitch about the delay in posting. I'm gonna praise the author instead for his imagination and ability to combine action and romance in a fast paced action filled adventure. In my humble opinion this story would make a good full length book, perhaps the author would consider looking into the market for e-books on Amazon or other outlets? I think it's worth thinking about anyway.
We have had to wait for this very short chapter to an excellent story. I had read the previous chapters in one long hit, now we are having to wait longer than usual for posts.
Not a happy bunny.
after this last chapter and "Pebbles on the windowpane", we need to get this "emotional road" to continue with Ava... I'm worried where this goes, after reading "Bitter"...
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