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DEAR GOD PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING

THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ PLEASE DO NOT STOP I NEED TO KNOW HOW THIS ENDS THERE IS SO MUCH HERE IM BEGGING YOU

Pimp & Whore

And so, the Pimp and his newly diseased and slagged-out Whore wife drove off into the sunset, perfectly happy with their new roles - just being what they each wanted to be since childhood! It's so wonderful when people's fantasies come true!!

Well written but...

Although this was well written, it does not really fit into the catagory of erotic literature in my mind. I also find the way it was split into two parts odd and disjointed. Beyond that, I had a hard time following past and present, which only lessened my enjoyment. Oddly though, I think this story had undeveloped potential to actually be something interesting but it just never happened for me. Despite my criticisms, I must say that I think the writer has talent beyond what was portrayed in this story so I will have to check out some more of their writing.

Thank you 5-Stars

Coaster2,

You are an excellent author. I typically search the new listings for “Romance” stories followed by “Loving Wives” stories. Until your Legends Day “Trust Me” release I hadn’t discovered your enormous talent. Since that time I’ve read “Accidental Hero”, “Once Upon a Fantasy” and now “Act of Necessity”. I plan to start at the top of your list and read through all of your other posts. I like the longer stories a lot more than the one and two page “Wham-Bam-Thank You-Mam” variety. I hope you’ll keep contributing to our reading pleasure for many years to come. I just ordered a new Surface Pro tablet so I can continue reading away from home. I rated all “Act of Necessity” chapters 5-Stars.

I also got hooked on Harddaysknight, Lady in Red series. I think you and he are the only two Novels and Novellas authors I’ve discovered.

Another Great Chapter

Thank you for finally adding another chapter. I check back regularly to see if there is anything new. I can hardly wait for the next installment!

Great Story

But there's a few Thing's to Clear Up . Does Alice's Husband ever find out and what of Miguel. it would seem he should be Taken Down. as for the other 2 Husband's I would Mug Tom and let him tell hubby #3 that he suspect's John was the one to Beat Him. Send a Shock wave through all of them. then get together for another get together and see who goes after Wendy.

Thank you...

You have a real talent for story telling, thank you for sharing that.

Tom D

Really Like Cindy and Jock!

What was done to Jock is sooooooo messed up!

Not sure how you recover from that. I suppose having a new large family and a job you like and a beautiful woman that wants you in her bed would be a huge help, but still such a shock!

Thank you for another amazing chapter!

AND STILL SHE DAWDLES

but now its solo time, TK U MLJ LV NV

Great

I enjoyed this story very much.

Boyd Percy

Not Your Best

Not even close. I was even embarrassed for the main character (Felicia). I am a guy and as I read this story, I kept wanting Felicia to grab this bitch (Madison) by the throat and have the fucking gumption to take back her life and fuck the consequences. This was not submission, this was orgasms masking degradation. Jasmine, u mentioned a big fantasy of yours was being fucked and dominated by a black man or woman. You must also have low esteem problems. This story sucked and the half page disclaimer you have was apropos. U are my favorite author but this was fucking black (no pun intended.)

Incredible. I want to be there.

This story keeps getting better. You know how to make sex come alive.

Nice thriller love story. Awaiting the conclusion.

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