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Calling for musical volunteers with talent

Will you write the musical score Tazz.
You're better placed than I am in LV
TY

Thank you Annette

I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem Annette. Thank you for your comments

Beautiful

Your short but delightful poem tells the entire story and all the important points are there for all to appreciate. Thank you.

Thoughtful and respectful

Love the poem, very well constructed and thoughtful, truly sensual. xoxoxo Annette

Part of the pleaure of this poem for me at least was in the short lines that seemed like a throbbing tempo. Like Piscator, I may have more to write about this when I have the time to read it agsin.

Can't wait for Thursday

This works well - I'll have to come back to figure out why.

att. greenmountain self described genius

You think the plums are shit ball? If there is anyone around here who is a shit eater it must be you - go back to green mountain where shit keeps the country green.

why is a female without a yoni

always pursued?

A girlfriend always offers a welcomed hand-deserves 5

Literary Erotica

Isn't that what Literotica stands for ? Well I'm ignoring the Literary aspect and giving this poem a 5 for Eroticism.

Too true - but then the cycle renews

THE METER ON THIS POEM

puts rappers to shame, TK U MLJ LV NV

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