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Nice touch! I think the last time I wrote a poem was in 1979 when my first daughter was born! Thanks. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐'s

Embracing his consuming emotions for her cleansing sensations. Love it.

A raw storm of pleasure. Very nice.

Alone in my bed
Filthy thoughts in my head.
I listen and stroke
As my HotWife and her bloke
Get down to some play
I sense she'll have her way
They begin to fuck
I love my life as a cuck!

Raw, sweaty sex is her drug of choice
She's addicted - she must get her fix
So she goes down to a club
A place that's a hub
For young men, all with lovely hard pricks.

"No, sir, I beg you, please desist,
Don't fill my cunt with cum.
I dare not risk getting with child.
Would you like to fuck my bum?"

Beautiful.

Very well done. Thank you.

The deep emotional power of this poem is stunning.
You have bared your naked submission on many levels.
Superb arousing erotic writing.
Thank you for exposing your intimate authentic carnal craving.

a fine piece ...
i'm gonna enjoy ready ( most of ) your stuff !
take care, stay safe Levi

WOW!! intense 😍

Naughty Daddy, so full of charm,
Loves his young lady with open arms,
He's always ready, with a mischievous grin,
To share his love, and his seed within.

He whispers sweet nothings, as he takes her hand,
Leading her to a fantasy wonderland,
With a wink and a smile, he sets her free,
To explore the depths of her wildest dreams.

Naughty Daddy, a playful fun-filled man,
His love for his little girl, no one can understand,
With daddies sperm, he creates a bond so pure,
A love that will last, forevermore.

She begs no, then grins yes. *****
Sexy.

Risky, sexy, and daring. *****

I felt a slow-burning suspense on this one. *****

"Incandescent seed." Wow.

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