I came twice before I finished reading
of a poem. The pace and the unfolding of the model's teases and the artist's torment are delicious. Well done, which ain't no surprise to me. xo
While I agree that this is not what I would normally think of as erotic, I think it has it's place among the collected chotskies of erotica,
I find it heartbreaking and heartwarming as well, providing a glimpse of the pain but also the pleasure before the loss. I find myself refusing to believe after what precedes it that 'love no longer bursts' but perhaps that is the great catharsis of packing away such things. You have a wonderful way with words.
Elegant and evocative of time and place.
As lovers who give our all, we have all been there so many fucking times.
Keep writing those wonderful poems. You have been blessed with heartfelt ability to put your feelings into poetic words.
I like eat pussy and ass and I like lick pussy and ass +919610113359
Nice, perhaps you should consider remodeling to a 6 by 8 or larger shower and join in the fun.
Lovely, sexy, erotic. Tricky, too - the near-rhymes subtly, sweetly play with your ear.
So good it makes my nipples tingle. Sexy as ssssin.
And it gets even better with each new reading. Glad gm pointed it out in PF&D.
get what you want
KEEP IT COMING
I'm sure a lot of people will have to translate it but it sounds a lot more...exotic than the translation.
I was thinking about how someone made me feel when we were together and how everything else lost its luster when we were apart. About how those moments before we parted were tragic and saddening and how I knew I'd be consumed by the time we'd spent together before.
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