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Nice work

In blank verse too. Nice combination of love and sex, although I confess I liked this line the best,
The surprise on your face when you realized
For the first time just how wet I had gotten for you

That's always irresistible for a man.

Thank you!

I have enjoyed reading some of your work as well, holliday1960. Can't wait to get back to it! You definitely have a new fan, and thanks so much for helping me learn to navigate this site.

Thank you!

Thank you very much for all of your comments and for faving!

Short and sweet

Makes me wonder why I go to the trouble of writing a whole story. You should set these to music, start a whole new fad.

Amazing

I didn't know that poetry like this even existed. Very entertaining.

Right to the point

Very direct and tempting - nice work

YOU ARE SURELY PRETTY AND GOOD

I am glad god made you I wish I could. TK U MLJ LV NV

I hope

I hope "K" realizes just how lucky she is. This beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes.

Keep Writing

BnB, I had no other way to reach you directly...Go to the main stories page...near the top click on Bulletin Board...down the list click on Authors Hangout. You can read some tips and ask questions there. More importantly, look at the top right of your screen and click on Private Messages...it will take you to a CP dashboard...go into OPTIONS list on the left and click ALLOW PMs (private messages)...I can send you a private message once you enable that feature. It will allow me to help you a little and answer some questions you may have as a new writer.

Beautiful expression

I like each one better than the last BnB...keeping writing; your flow is getting better and better.

We All Need a Make Out (Snog) Session

The exploration of a new love is exciting. Lady C certainly captured the build-up of passion. Is there a British equivalent in cricket of getting to "second base"?

I disagree

I have to disagree with Vapspegeo. I think it is incredible! Keep up the good work. :)

Ha!

Hahahahaha, love it! Well done, my friend!

A Trucker's Road Is A Long Hard Haul

Is that a propostion? ;) I know it is a long hard haul, my brother is a trucker. Stay safe! Thanks for reading and commenting.

TO EXTEND ALL AVAILABLE

to reach a higher goal. TK U MLJ LV NV

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