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Teachable moment

The glosa, a Spanish poetic form, attributes another poet's notable work and attempts to create a variation of it. This clearly was the case here because you recognized Cohen as the poet. That's not plagiarism. Other readers could or would have done so too. If you check your ego at the door, you got a lesson here in poetry appreciation.

Just to let you know, I've been there, done that too in a manner of speaking.

To Anonymous

It's obviously a Glosa, why don't you put your brain in gear and learn about Poetry forms before shooting your mouth off and making yourself look stupid. But what more can you expect from someone too gutless to leave their own name?
From UnderYourSpell by the way ........ it won't let me log in!

what toilet wall

did you write this shit on?

are you laughing

at the reader or are you making a statement about the mundane? Yet, it seems you are attempting to paint a picture of photographic conquest? Best to avoid this sing song stuff unless you like singing that song. But your choice dear "first," but why not deal with submission as you have forced us to do reading this entry? Below is a poor example of where you are headed with the flower approach to verse. We all look forward to more serious erotic effort from you. Please accept this comment with a laugh.

Roses are red, please use your head.
A damp camel toe is better you know
Then one that is dry and beckons you nigh
Violets you see mean little to me
But legs spread so wide will call us inside
Roses are red, please don't crap in our bed
Or on our dear poetry site, please keep it right


is Have You Had Enough. TK U MLJ LV NV


the more times change the longer they stay the same. TK U MLJ LV NV

sexy poem - 5 (and that's what erotic is all about)

some imperfections but still pumps emotion from the reader. Whether Old English adds or subtracts is a question, I'd strike it and stay modern. (example-
"doth start race", "does lift and she does" ) but the lines
"And I laugh
And I giggle
Cause that's this woman's fine riddle
It's no g-spot
But I found her little weakness" are lovely lines, as is the title.

well -5

done - more detail would be apreciated

Reeks of passion

Didn't know you could still pull it together, but you did. Maybe this is enough and like a flaccid member you should slink into that good earth and call it a night and let silence rule.

nice thoughts -5

as for Gods, the Greek pantheon were notably homo erotic, Greeks preferred men for sex turning to women for reproduction... Of course two guys kissing does upset some people, too bad! Time to grow up folks. Like lots of stuff you gotta try it before you condemn it, and as for cock sucking it should be a required school subject so every guy gets a chance to suck his school chums chum, then the girls should learn as well. Of course pussy culture should be equally lapped up. We are animals folks, sorry to inform you but we is!

Made me chuckle

A fun play on an old theme.

one of your better

submissive poems - is it the anal or the humiliating language that excites you more? It would be of interest if you would write about your mental state during these sessions or fantasy sessions. Getting inside your head rather than inside your ass would be more artful and thus more poetic.The "Ho" language is sharp and jarring but perhaps your reality. Keep it coming and deal with whether you cum from Patty's anal penetration? that is rarely the case, most subs are forbidden orgasm most of the time and only allowed to cum as a rare treat or reward. If this is your thing go for it, if and when you have had enough you may move on or stay a sub forever.

Roses are red

go f*** yourself

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