Some guy has to have been chosen by you!!
"Layers" and then check the nest, TK U MLJ LV NV
I like it! A great start for you first submission to Literotica. Love them redheads. Do keep going!
Not one for knowing much about Greek mythology, I had to brush up on Persephone, sb. Once I did that, things fell into place. Nicely done.
Modern poets sadly forget the importance of rhythm in poems and only focus on rhyme. This is just another of those.
I wish I were again a maid
To feel my lover swift invade
My virgin mouth and pouting lips
Between my eager wide-spread hips
But every night I cry, 'Alas!'
To feel him not within my ass...
Thanks for reading & commenting!
You might benefit from reading poetry as well as writing it. You might get some ideas about structure, rhythm and conventions there.
Made my sub feel lucky for what he's got
Lovely, literate imagery. Intelligent and sexy sonnet.
one a day, like a vitamin is enough for us to read
however a preamble is always nice TK U MLJ LV NV
Vivid imagery. Very good poem.
creates long and loving partnerships/ TK U MLJ LV NV
Hard cocks are always my goal!
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