of my ecstatic bare back .......
killer lines , Fiona : 5-ed !
excites the ID. TK U MLJ LV NV
she is dominant is she not? the mentor I mean. grrrr... intriguing
applause ... lol
Very erotic and lovely, Mer. It sounds stereotypical, I know, but in general I think gals write erotic poems better than guys do, yours truly included. At least that's been my experience on Literotica.
The quickening - that special moment of rapture build up between two souls before release.... hmmm sweetness...
How does this man yet unmet evoke such an intense response from within?
I was editing a comment I made after reading your horrific " poem." But it jumped away when I was editing it. I had also read one of your stories and viewing the picture you posted. I am convinced you are seriously ill and should just leave quietly and commit yourself to some friendly place for the profoundly disturbed.
...and still admiring it here
While reading this poem, I was taken away by the fanciful arrangement of words that describe her level of devotion and affection. An instant classic.
This poem had a hypnotic trance effect. The cascade of words resonate and encompass the harmony of their relationship.
This poem could easily be put to music and become an award-winning song! The content is both pleasing and sensuous, which says a lot about the author.
revisited sans the round table squires. TK U MLJ LV NV
on how they are kind to one another. TK U MLJ LV NV
A fantastic compilation of words that capture the true essence of both Dominant and Submissive roles, particularly the part highlighting the controlled orgasm. Well done!
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