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I am not a feedback type

I am not the kind for feedback, but this was something else. An amazing introduction to your writing. You would be doing yourself a disservice by not writing another chapter. Well done and good luck with future projects!

Interesting

That sounds amazing. I wouldn't say not to that happening to me.

Superb VIgnettes

After reading "Private Things", I caught up on your earlier missives. What a pleasure! And then to be treated to this one today - fabulous! Please, do keep them coming, they are amazing reads into the hidden world of innocent delight!

A good idea

You should have hem tell all the women he has fucked that are around hem that if they want to be fucked agen they have to be he's slave and they have to swear there life to hem then they go live at a big house sume where nacked all the time having sex when and ho he wants to have sex with

This could be a good story..

Probably won't come back to this but if you do.
1) fix spelling and grammar.
2) Describe whats happening in more detail a bit.
3) Expanded upon the dialog instead of just summing things up quick.
4) i would love there to be a bit at the start from the perspectives of Melody and Cindy as for why they are going to be tricking Steph, is this really just pranks gone too far, or were they purposefully out to get her for a reason [if so what is it]

Great read. I hope to read more sooner than later!

Whoa

Totally not believable and totally hot. Every boy's fantasy is to make it with his hot teacher. James is a lucky guy.

Breathless as Usual

As usual, your stories leave me breathless. I always get excited when I log on and see that you have posted another story. I definitely do not wait until I'm home to read them. More times than not, I am at my office trying to to bite back moans, groans, and growls while wishing, and practically begging to be on the receiving end.

To all your haters, they can take a long leap off a cliff because they have no idea how to read for enjoyment and immerse themselves in any story.

Always a fan Storm.

Hot

This sounds like an amazing experience. The idea of this is absolutely exhilarating. Have you done anything like that since then?

Thanks.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. And as far as the grammar goes. Sorry, I read over these and use an online grammar check, but stuff still slips through.

Surprised

I was surprised at the ending - I was looking forward to seeing how they got to know each other and actually meeting up ......

Thanks Steve

I read this story after seeing your comment in the Public Feedback Portal.

And thanks too to MissSandFighter for such a fascinating meander through a set of thoughts occurring whilst doing 'Private Things in Public Places'. Superb. Well worth five stars if scoring was open.

Lue

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