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Wow!

I had something similar happen to me in college. The only difference was I didn't get to watch it. I could only hear what was happening. I never told my girlfriend. Your story was hotter than the real thing!

Hot SEX

That sex scene is hot!!!

Good story.

Kit, put more paragraphs in your story, they make it easier to read.
Thanks
Mr. K

Watch out for the cold nose!

It seems a Labrador retriever's nose and a woman's pussy are about the same height, so where does the dog put his nose? Funny how that works.

The rest of the story is interesting, too. Thoroughly enjoying this series.

Re telling?

I read both and although I see some similarities I find so much that is different I don't know if it's the same story any more. They are both great for different reasons. Quale's is shorter and to the point, yours goes deeper,but takes almost too long to get there.

You're the best.

Magmaman, You are still the best writer on here. I love the authenticity (realness) of all your stories. Thanks!

Hardly in a closet

I'm satisfied that you were as horny as me during your happy ending. You will have a few young men ask you out after this acidental exposure. If not call me I've always been a Ass man ask anyone if I'm a ass. Oh I love your breast as they are, never consider them any less beautiful than I do !

All Parents are Not Alike.

Really??
She gives her BF a blowjob with mom and dad right there beside them at the pool?? Really???
----------------------------------------R EALLY
As we grew up with a similar lifestyle Dollie's mom watched us fuck and masturbate each other. Her mom often cleaned off my penis after I shot all over. Her dad wouldn't even allow Dollie to wear short skirts yet we saw him and mom fuck often.
Still we didn't give each other oral. But would have had we known at that age it was fun.
These stories are childish but they are written about high school aged boys and girls. Things like this do happen.
The story line has become stale but hopefully it will get better again. Perhaps they will find another place to shop and skinny dippin will be on a boat at the river.

This could have really happened!

We know this is just a fairy tale but in many ways it happened to us often.
The only real difference is my wife's dad was a slob and had no idea what was happening with his daughter. Along with me as her boyfriend, her mother and I dressed Dollie like a slut and showed her off over many years.
None of us owned a pool but had many secluded small lakes to play at.
We never spent near as much money on mall clothes but Dollie was exhibited at malls and other shops in the same ways. Even a few Country Clubs became playgrounds.
We enjoy your stories because we know it can happen and your way of writing makes things appear real..

Fantastic

Lovely crisp writing and extremely erotic....trust me,you DO have a flair for writing !! Rated this 5 stars

Will look for more from you....please one suggestion -> there are nasty readers out here who will read your story and bad mouth you. Those people are retards,so DO NOT pay any attention to them,but continue your good work

Wear you wearing the saree lower than your navel ? Do you always wear saree below navel ? Do you wear deep back blouses too ? These details were not clear and a little details about your looks and sexy attire would have enhance this lovely story....hope you will put these details in next input from you

Thanks

Great!

I like your version better.

Torment as they liked ....

Careful .
There are laws about this sort of thing .
Jail sentences . Career endings .

Sin would be "péché" in French, peach is a fruit

Woohoo

I'm honored. Thank you very much. I appreciate the vote of confidence.

Nurses

Dear Orie,
Excellent read. It's crying out for a sequel but as you wrote it May 11 maybe we aren't going to get one.
Can't fathom out weather you are male or female. For the tenderness in it I'd go for female but males can be as loving and kind.
I don't normally read a 5 page story but because 235 people had commented it obviously had substance but 3 pages max for a sequel.
Liked the fact you bought in the female monthly, we all know woman have periods and you portrayed it so well. So much better when those days are over for both males and females, normally the kids have left home so a double whammy.
I worked at a hospital on maintenance for years and as the NHS is 85% females it's a haven for males of all ages. Keeps me active.
I was having an affair with a much older married lady. I'd had some banter with her and we were quite friendly. I was called into her ward one night after midnight and she made me a cuppa while I was fixing the Nurse Call system. I had to disconnect the sound while working on the system and she helped me by setting them off at the bedside. When we had found the faulty one and repaired it then reinstated the sound she asked me if I wanted another cuppa. Needles to say I said yes and went to the staff room. The other two members of staff had to stay on the ward and she told them she was making me a cuppa and taking her break. She made the other two nurses a hot drink so we had the staff room.
We chatted for a while then I opened the conversation to a more sexual nature. Doreen picked up on this and the banter started. Doreen obviously enjoyed the banter and continued it and it must have been thrilling her although she was over 20 years older than me.
Doreen asked if she could make me another and keep her company. Said yes but needed the toilet. Doreen said use ours and put the seat down and wash your hands. I cheekily said do you want to knock the drops off. Doreen said and looking me in the eye said no I'm out of practice. With that I went and Doreen made the tea. When I came back Doreen said she would go.
I looked her in the eye and said do you want a hand with the paper work. With the eye contact Doreen twisted her head and walked into the toilet. When she came out Doreen was holding some fresh toilet paper and half jovially said want to check. As they say the air was electric. I said yes and took the paper and put it down and stood up. Taking Doreen in my arms we kissed. Then kissed passionately. Running my hands over her back caressing her Doreen said I'm married. So am I, I said and getting excited moved my stiffy on to her tummy.
Moving my hands to her bottom Doreen responded by moving with me.
My hands raised her uniform so I had access to her knickers and with no resistance proceeded place my hand inside them and caress her bottom. Doreen started to breath heavily. This was an invitation to go further. I moved my hand over her hips and Doreen moved away to give me access to her tummy and the front of knickers. Moving the palm of my hand lower to her virgina I made my way through her pubic hair to the entrance of her virgina which was now very wet. That's beautiful I stammered. Marvellous Doreen said and don't stop with that I found her clitoris and stimulated with my finger. Doreen soon climaxed and said been a long time since that happened. Doreen reached round and played with my penis over my trousers. Doreen said what are we going to do with this, I'm not letting you take it home to your wife. I mumbled have we got time. Yes Doreen said the nurses aren't aloud off the ward can you make it quick you know I'm well lubricated. Of course I said now take your knickers off while I undo my trousers. Over the coffee table do you said. Go for it Doreen said. She had quite Granny draws on and white. Doreen bent over, I got behind her and in no time Doreen put her hand between her legs, grabbed my penis and placed it at the entrance to her virgina. All I needed to do was hold her hips and push. Doreen moaned while I started making love to her. It didn't take me long for me to come inside her. Doreen said that was quick. I slipped out of her.
Doreen wiped herself with her knickers then handed them for me to clean my penis.
I zipped up and Doreen let her uniform drop. We kissed tenderly and Doreen said I'd like to do that again more comfortably. So would I, I said. how soon? Doreen said I'm off till tomorrow evening, are you sleeping in tomorrow Brian. I replied yes, I could pop round as soon as the wife goes to work about 9. Good Doreen said my old man will be at work all day and wrote down her address. What are you doing with your knickers Doreen I said. She said I have clean ones in my locker, you can have them as a keepsake.
With that I left a very happy and contented man. Our affair is still going on in and out of the hospital.
For an oldie Doreen is very sexually adventures I'm pleased to say.
Keep writing.
REgards

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