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Long set up

But really well written, and I guess Part 2 will pick up right where we were left off.

Fun!

"Cindy's Adventures in NYC" was an enjoyable, easy read, Thanks!

Great first story!

Very well-written. Love to hear more about her adventures or photos of this sexy minx.

Yum!

He should totally get woken up by the sounds of them doing it again. I mean, one more time is nbd, right?

Real

I am really enjoying these and looking forward to more. We are seeing a connection grow between two people that feels very real. It carries within it all the insecurities and assumptions, miscommunications, that happen when two people grow closer and then, again and again, we have the slate wiped clean in powerful erotic union. Really enjoying how all of this feels fresh and somehow free of trappings of our modern day sexuality formed by pornography and 50 shades type cliches. We are seeing a kind of submissiveness in Michelle but it is her own, and something that can and will only exist in that way between these two people, in the here and now. Not some kind of reenactment of prescribed "swoons for seven foot alpha male" bullshit.
Feeling exited and inspired. My only regret is that only after reading the whole series so far did I realise that it is also on Kindle Unlimited and the author could have been making some pennies from my enjoyment. I'll try to make up for it by reading all her other stuff on Kindle. Thanks Jessica Tang VonHarper!

Wow

Absolutely fabulous and incredulous, but I do wonder about the consequences for their marriages. It would be great to experience such a sexy display by a beautiful daughter and her alluring, sexy, much older mother. They're well on the way to become complete sluts. Would be so sexy to see my wife doing some of these things and telling me about it or letting me watch.

Good start

Shame there was no participation...this time?

nice premise

If you have the imagination for it, the CRA premise could result in a long run of short adventures. Stay with it.

Don't compromise on the content!

Hi there,

The English has definitely become better from your previous story to this one. But the hotness scale of the content has gone down drastically. I had rated 5 star for the previous story purely for the hot content and the way you developed the charter of Rajni. And I was probably expecting that bit to become better in your next story. But I couldn't give it more than 4 star this time

But don't let my criticism deter you from writing more. You have lot of potential as a writer. Bring out the slutty side of Rajni through articulate description of her dressing, her thoughts, her emotions and her internal fight between being a homely wife and being a seductive slut to satiate the itch of her cunt

Looking forward to more...

Love,
~ Aakash

Great Beginning

The mystery, intensity, and erotic attention was spot on. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to hear more from a great story teller.

Unique!

See Lots Of CFNM Pics and Videos! Mostly Femdom and BDSM! This Was Fetish In A Cute Story! Really Enjoyed! Write More!

Super hot

So hot and so humiliating. What a great daughter to offer herself to save her dad and family

RE: Technical Detail

I first posted below an Annon. Actually, sir, the KC-135 can and does carry passengers. As I stated below, I was in the AF from 71-75. My first duty station was at Kinchloe AFB, Michigain. It was a SAC base with B-52's, KC-135's, and F-111 aircraft. I flew more than a few times on a KC-135 from Kinchloe to March AFB in so Calif. The KC-135 can be equiped with two rows of (very uncomfortable) jump seats along the interior fuselage. Not the best way to travel, but it gets you from point A to point B.

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