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Thanks!

Thanks for the feedback everyone!

I liked the poit of view as well!

I finished the story

I finished the story, even after I came. That's high praise indeed.

Anna, you're fucking magic darling! You've got me as hard as a fucking steel bar! xx

You got me just where you want me! Wish you were here!

Great story

This was the first of your stories I have read and it was great. Please write more about this couple.

Excellent and leaving us dying for more as usual!

What?

Dude is wiped, Ida smashed that guys face in.

THANK YOU!!

Clive! My hero!! Thank you for 1) giving me some sort of feedback on my written work and 2) giving me a pro-tip on basic 5th grade grammar! *grin* I like to consider myself a reasonably well written and spoken woman so it actually matters to me greatly that even my silly little erotic stories I write for fun are written properly. So, thank you twice over! I so appreciate your input.

A slight variation of the cuck-wimp formula plot!

CleoRa

I see you are another of the many devotees of the cuck-wimp story model. Hubby sees what is going on, but seems powerless to do anything to halt the proceedings. To top it off, he ends up with boners watching his slut wife and his "good" friend suck and fuck. Hope he has an iron clad prenup to screw them over with. This plot template has been done to death on this site...trust me when I say this....we readers really do not need the same old same old cuck wimp tripe that seems to have infiltrated the psyches of many many contributors. My advice..try to develop some alternative original plots for your future contributions.

I liked it

I agree with the other comments. It was a well-written and well-constructed story, which I thought described the observed action very well and blended that with the feelings of the first-person observer peeping through the slats from the closet.

Most stories of a person watching a partner in an erotic situation with somebody else are in the Loving Wives category and have the male watching his wife. Having a young woman watching her boyfriend is interestingly different.

Short but good. It was an episode rather than a story with a beginning, middle and end. The punchline finish was clever.

Lue

Horny Tale

How does one manage to get into these situations

Hot.

Loving all your stories - audio and written. Hot and arousing.
Small grammar issue: "taught" (past tense of "teach") should be "taut" (stretched tightly).
Thank you for all your stories.

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