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Very good but editing would improve

This us a very hot story and the interaction between Ian and Tammy is exciting and believable. Good characters. There are some minor spelling and word usage errors that are a bit distracting. Get someone to proof read for you.

An Absolute 5

Just discovered your stories.
Good vocabulary.
Good spelling.
Good grammar.
A good story well told. Sure would like to have some resolution.
A lot of time has passed. Can we have at least one more chapter.

Good! Keep going!

This story deserves another chapter or two. It has real potential.

Amazing series...you owe us one more!

I read the first story in the series earlier this week, had to close out the window and forgot the title. So I frantically searched through hundreds of stories on Literotica for an entire week trying to remember it! Well, today I found it, and I have just finished reading the entire series. This is one of the hottest series I have ever read to date. There is a reason that all but two of your stories have a red "H" rating! But you may have forgotten you promised one more story in this tale...

Well Done

You write very well as we all feel some empathy for Jim getting himself in such a predicament. The cold hard attitude of the females who do this every day also comes across quite well. Pt. 2 would be appreciated.

For the tiny bits of dialogue you have, at least try to learn to write it properly.

"Mary Ann said "thank you sir George. I hope I pleased you well."
Should be:
Mary Anne said (COMMA) "(CAPITAL "T")hank you (COMMA) Sir George...."
Is everyone on this site functionally illiterate?

These read like diary entries. There's no story, no dialogue, no conflict, no nothing. Pointless.

Interesting Consept!

Love to read more on this subject.

Naked outdoors!

It is so much fun being naked outdoors. Not necessarily getting caught, but the idea of getting caught is so much fun!!! It's addictive!

Bravo

You've done it again. Just wonderful.

I can see and hear each of the characters in the series. Ann is so sincere and willing. Paul is so fortunate to have found them. And what a nice ending. Tied the bow just so.

Thank you for the time and effort.

good story but...

If the sperm increaser really works as he said, then he already has the perfect product to sell... To the Porn industry. They'd pay a lot to have their male stars be able to "put out" like that.
A very entertaining story. Keep up the great writing.
pbow

Fun Fixing

Thank you. I like fixing things on Dollie.

Glad to see Ch 5

What a surprise to find a new chapter after so long. Thanks and please keep it going. Thought this one ended a bit prematurely. :)

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