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Disgusting

Not only do these kids take advantage of a woman when she is passed out, but then they throw her clothes and room key into the ocean.

Please stop writing, you're challenged.

Poor Jake

If Jake gets excited and raises a hard on because he is naked in public or dressed only in his underwear, maybe he needs a gentle friend who can privately "initiate" him into a casual sexual unveiling. Either a young woman or young man friend could gently pull his underwear off, or take his swimming trunks off, and talk him through this. If he developed a hard on so what -- help him out! Even the two friends of his sister Rachel could do this. And when he does get the hard on, help him deal with it by "servicing" him.

Good stories

Jake sounds like he would like to make some progress, if only the "baby steps." If he is so easily embarrassed, it can't be about the quality of his body, because he seems to be well endowed. And earlier you noted that he began puberty early. Is he a bit more developed than usual -- e.g. hair on the chest and abs, etc? Would love to have descriptions of Jake's body.

Incredible story

This is the second best story I've ever read on this website and I've read a great many. Great work. If you never manage to do anything else in your life, you've made my day today a bit better.

Enjoyed!

Love the sort of stream of consciousness thing going on. First person perspectives, in my opinion, are much more effective for immersion, and the running internal commentary drives it home. Sex was hot, but more importantly to me, the character telling the story was both fun and interesting.

Lovely story

Another lovely story from my favourite author. It would be nice to have a follow up but I'm sure the author would have some delicious twist to the tale!
But please don't let that delay another chapter of Saturday Night School!!

Needs more. Very good. But come on hes gotta nail en both

Needs more. Very good. But come on hes gotta nail en both

Holy Smokes!

Wow, I really missed the mark, with some folks anyway.

I appreciate the comments that actually have something to work with.

I pictured the narrator as a bright, goofy, oblivious, self-absorbed but ultimately sweet guy, very much in love with his wife. That quite clearly didn't come across for some of the readers.

I hope everyone realizes he's totally a work of fiction - bits and pieces of characters from movies, TV shows etc. He's certainly not me. I'm not in my twenties. Alas, no one has called me skinny in some time and I've never even come close to being an exhibitionist.

I did once live in a three family home, but in New Haven, not Hartford. They are close together but I never heard anyone having sex. Pity.

I was poking fun at stereotypical hipsters and concede I might have shoved too much slang and text-isms into the story.

I would never call my readers mother-fuckers, at least not in anger. I was, through, the narrator, laughing at how men always lie about the size of their penises. That's all.

Anyway, for the helpful comments, as always, much appreciated. For the others, I hope you found something closer to your tastes.

T

Very fun

It was great how much she enjoyed it once she got going. And the way she was too far gone to even notice the other customers coming in. I liked that Archie was a little bit older too - excellent wish fulfillment for us older guys.

Keep up the great work!

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