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Epilogue

I almost forgot to follow up here to say that I did eventually post that epilogue to this series. You can read it by clicking my name to view my stories, or using the following link: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-swim-team-ch-04-e pilogue

realley sexey written i want more and more episode

So Sexy!!!

I really need to go shopping for diamonds sexey baby. I think my wife would look so sexy showing off her shaved pussy in a bar! i never forget my demand please write more episode .
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Nice

I really enjoy stories that don't always follow the same predictable storyline and ending..

Re: question

That's not the kind of story I'm going for. I'm trying to keep both Elise and Kevin as likable characters. While Kevin's put up with more than most guys would, passively watching his friends fuck his girl would obviously be too much. Kevin is overly trusting and will believe Elise's stories but I'm sure he'd break up with her if he had actual proof she was cheating.

Elise really does love Kevin and isn't looking to fuck his friends. She's just naive, very sexual and tends to get caught up in the moment. She often crosses the line but either rationalizes it afterwords or really sees things as no big deal, not worthy of mention. For example she thinks texting nudes to other guys is fine, and also doesn't care that Sara send Kevin pics. She even has her roommate send Kevin nudes. Why would she care? It's no big deal.

Will Elise get caught cheating? Probably not. I want a sexy story, not one with drama and consequences.

Has she already cheated? Depends on your definition of cheating. She honestly feels she hasn't.

Lovely, erotic story ...

Now, looking forward to reading the next two parts.

Thank you ENF for such a vivid, perverted imagination.

~smiles~

Ooops...

I found a few typos I need to correct. I'll upload an edited version. That takes a couple of days. Sorry about that.

I'm curious, what do you think the phone call might be? It actually took me a couple of days to decide myself. I'm currently writing the next chapter and things are getting shaken up.

Great read

I do hope there's a sequel to this.

sensational story very well told, super hot!!

Leaving behind any comments on the story, it seems incredibly strange how a 'new member' posts seemingly the next chapter to a long running series by an established author on here, only for then the 'established author' to come along with a very similar next chapter to the saga.

Shy Exposure's piece seemed odd, as the first story by the author. It immediately looked like something Viredae would write, using Viredae's character, I fail to see how Shy Exposure's story was anything original, almost seemed plagiarized and simply wouldn't pass as a first story, it was a story from the middle of something else.

Something is clearly going on somewhere...

Not Sure who is more guilty of plagiarism here, Luna is definitely viredae's character but using ShyExposure's story and uploading it as your own is kind of cheap..

question

are these stories a build up to a story of elise caught cheating with the roomates & kevin breaking up with her or are you gonna cuckold him or is it gonna stay with flashes only ? just asking because i liked reading them &i would be really dissapointed if she cheated & than kevin being more of a wimp than he already is forgiving her

Solid Story

Your narrator is a likeable character; I think a lot of people would be able to relate to him. Very enjoyable to read about his encounter with Beth. I agree with other commenters that the measurements detract from the story, but it's still a solid read. (And I liked that Beth didn't give the *perfect* blowjob. Sometimes there's accidental teeth scrapes or rough ball handling. It makes the story more realistic.)

Thumbs (and other things) up!

Nice, slow build, lots of understandable paranoia and the terrific guilt of being so turned on while watching your sinful spouse getting her lusty rocks off. I was taken in the whole ten yards. Excellent work.

good

Like how it escalated. But it need second part maybe with mom and her friends. spanking will be good to. More playng with his butt pleas

A) This is not your story to post in the first place, it's mine.

B) I updated MY story, so it's not the exact same.

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