Short and sweet, but hot. I like the detail about looking into the camera. You do a good job capturing the panicked flurry of thoughts that stream through her head. Looking forward to the next chapter. Five stars.
Another super hot encounter! Pippa, you have a way of finding the partner you need in the most unlikely places. What a remarkable set of circumstances happen so you are introduced to Eric, and his spry personality. And his unique physical attribute that gives you such pleasure. What are the odds you will find a satisfying lover in the middle of the deep forest? Love the way you describe the natural surroundings as well as the extremely erotic way you describe how you mate with this older yet quite energetic man. The way the attraction develops into your offering yourself to Eric is exquisite. And hubby John is there with you, joyfully helping you heighten the pleasure with your new lover, making this new shared relationship blossom in a most fulfilling way. Really sexy, exciting storytelling, thanks!
I say put the lay in layover, with the co-pilot earning another new set of wings, and G & friends getting up to getting down through the night and next day, meaning an extra day for the flight crew to have some hands-on landing strip training… then wrap chapter 2 up with the return flight where Mia ever so briefly drags an unsuspecting Karen into the party, just long enough for a good song & fondle, before heading back to the no-cockpit for some more voyeurustic pleasure and sexual tension
Wonderful story, would have loved for the notes to have continued for a little longer to tease out the erotic tension before the finale, but still very much enjoyed it.
I love that now we have a sexual husband and wife, such a great idea. I also like that wifey (don't remember if we ever got her name) will be drinking Maya's milk in her coffee. hope somehow she gets it from the source, maybe Maya could complain about needing emptying and needs help. also wish Maya and Michael would start having intimacy in front of the wife, that way the games could grow more than hiding. Good job here as with the whole story so far.
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Love the playful aspect and the gentle build, felt very initmate.
I simply loved this - subtle, nuanced, erotic and conjures a real life experience - you write brilliantly
I love this story and would love to read more to this story.
Short and sweet, but hot. I like the detail about looking into the camera. You do a good job capturing the panicked flurry of thoughts that stream through her head. Looking forward to the next chapter. Five stars.
Another super hot encounter! Pippa, you have a way of finding the partner you need in the most unlikely places. What a remarkable set of circumstances happen so you are introduced to Eric, and his spry personality. And his unique physical attribute that gives you such pleasure. What are the odds you will find a satisfying lover in the middle of the deep forest? Love the way you describe the natural surroundings as well as the extremely erotic way you describe how you mate with this older yet quite energetic man. The way the attraction develops into your offering yourself to Eric is exquisite. And hubby John is there with you, joyfully helping you heighten the pleasure with your new lover, making this new shared relationship blossom in a most fulfilling way. Really sexy, exciting storytelling, thanks!
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I say put the lay in layover, with the co-pilot earning another new set of wings, and G & friends getting up to getting down through the night and next day, meaning an extra day for the flight crew to have some hands-on landing strip training… then wrap chapter 2 up with the return flight where Mia ever so briefly drags an unsuspecting Karen into the party, just long enough for a good song & fondle, before heading back to the no-cockpit for some more voyeurustic pleasure and sexual tension
Loved it !!
Love the pace actually. It feels as authentic as it could get for an erotica. 5 stars
Amazing story - loved it!
I've seen my wife get fucked by half a dozen men at swing parties. She proves herself to be a cock whore.
Needs to be edited. Hard to read but 3 stars. Thanks
Wonderful story, would have loved for the notes to have continued for a little longer to tease out the erotic tension before the finale, but still very much enjoyed it.
Lovely scenes and flow of your story; you’re very much inside the cuckquean’s head!
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Such a great chapter. I'm afraid Tim will hurt his friend Mike by fucking Kerri. These secrets do not last forever.
I love that now we have a sexual husband and wife, such a great idea. I also like that wifey (don't remember if we ever got her name) will be drinking Maya's milk in her coffee. hope somehow she gets it from the source, maybe Maya could complain about needing emptying and needs help. also wish Maya and Michael would start having intimacy in front of the wife, that way the games could grow more than hiding. Good job here as with the whole story so far.