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awesome

this is a very fun series

I wouldn't mind a little bit of 'edge'...he he :)

by that I mean having the story jump the parameters set by the husband / wife

the exhibition skewing into the "danger zone"
what if sexy wife is SO HOT the alphas decide to "borrow" her for a few days
with explicit videos emailed of course!
I mean, they'd give her back, right?
eventually, right?

have fun!

Bore off 😂

I can't believe that you're so concerned over the analytical grammar and wording of this story. This story is meant to get you off. Use your imagination, this is just a great holiday memory for me ;-)

Any hope of "Pt 5: 'Andy's fav CO' ?"

A sequel...please

Great story, loved the characters. This is worthy of a sequel or more.

???

Who cares about punctuation errors, stuff like this is worst: he unzips his flies. His pants have 2 or more zippers?

Photo Shoots...

are so much fun and you never know where they will lead. I love them.

Punctuation

Good story, although quite brief. You should get an editor. There were a lot of punctuation errors.

amazing

fantastic writing. not overly focused on detail, but just enough and done in such a clever way that the characters feel real, which they rarely do in these kinds of stories. masterful

Love the consent.

So much of this story was about listening and responding to each other. The characters all respectfully pushed boundaries but were careful about each other's timidness. Gretchen was wonderful at reading her partners. I hope you will be comfortable at exploring the other character's stories because I foresee Gretchen's actions bolstering her friends' independence and explorations. Girl Power is contagious. I hope we see Jenny, Ike, Janelle, Zeke, and Morgan all grow to be sexy and consensual adults.

A Great Series

Wonderfully written and totally erotic. I was hoping some more descriptions of her ass but maybe we'll get that in future chapters...LOL

Superb

Brilliantly written, great build-up, wonderful fantasy - and totally erotic.
Can't wait to read more. Perhaps some more detailed descriptions of the girls' assets!
Absolutely loved it.

Nice.

I really like your style and variety of plots.You appear to have a real flair for erotica and will only improve in time.The reader can sometimes feel the story,imagine they are there and enjoy the tease and build-up.an art, most writers sadly do not possess.However you are an exception and i am looking forward to your next offering.

Hot

Love the story, so hot, not dragged out like lots, it had me so wet, I just wished it was me

Hussah!

Wow!
I can't believe Cori is back!
And I can't believe how much I've actually missed her too!

I just had to rate and post a comment. Haven't actually read it yet but just wanted to say how much I appreciate you taking the time to write and post another episode in the delicious life of our favourite angel.

Thanks!

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