Part 3 was as hot as ever, only I found it quite odd that Anna thought the more private part of her body to keep for Steve alone was her ass and not her vagina.

I just can imagine the work or art. The story just shows the tapestry in bright living colour. Just fantastic. Thanks for sharing your stories and looking forward to the next tatoo.

I really liked it, looking forward to more.

That's strangely weird. I read this chapter in isolation, intrigued by the chapter sub-title. A curious fetish, who knew?! Not I, for one. Now I do. I slung this a five, because, well, it's strangely arousing. I'd better not go to Ikea...

Cute I could definitely read a couple more chapters

Good story. Thanks. You might correct the name switch between Sarah and Amanda.

What's the name of your small dick husband

Great story! I really enjoyed it.

Too bad it never got finishd

Great

It's a good first attempt, definitely rough around the edges. The biggest giveaway of your insecurity is that you felt a need to put a disclaimer at the end on top of the very rough intro. No need to apologize for writing. Whether these are your true kinks or not, you don't need to justify it.

Well first of all your story is great. Really it is. I read a lot of that kind and my my, yours is for sure one of the very best. It's not just smoking hot, it's well written and well built. These are huge qualities.

Concerning your questions, I don't know if I have any advice about what you should make Chelsea do or not do. I most certainly know what I would like my wife to do and not to do, but hey, that's not necessarily the same thing. These are your characters. At most, I could say what I think is reallistic (from my point of view, but I have quite some experience in that particular line... ahem).

First of all, I think the option that Chelsea would finally leave Mark for Dylan highly unreallistic. Obviously, some girls might very well do that; but they would have to be stupid girls (sorry). To leave Mark for Dylan, one would have to think that life (and sex) with Dylan as a husband, or even a "regular" boyfriend, would be the same as life and sex with Dylan as a lover; and it could just not be so. Sex with Dylan is great for one reason, and one reason only: it's forbidden. It's different. It's out of the rules. The day Dylan becomes Chelsea's "regular" (and monogamous) boyfriend is the day Chelsea starts getting bored with him, especially in bed. Because pleasure comes from excitement, and excitement comes (at least for some people) from doing forbidden things. Dylan is exciting because he is the contrary of routine. The day he becomes routine is the day he ceases to be exciting.

To fail to see that, in my point of view, would defininely mark Chelsea as silly, or at least very blind; and she doesn't strike me as a stupid or blind girl. So much auto-analyze has got to make her understand at least that very simple truth: in bed, one can't have to cake and eat it (or, as we French say it, one can't have the butter and the money you pay it with). Specifically, you can't have the security of a routinely monogamous relationship AND the excitement of extra-marital sex. Not with the same guy at the same time, at least.

So I think Chelsea can't break up with Mark. But of course "tricky emotional developments" have to occur. It's most unlikely Dylan and Chelsea won't fall in love with each other. It already shows at that point of the story, of course. But that doesn't mean they would react in the same way to that feeling. For Dylan, it would be quite simple: he would want Chelsea to break up with Mark, and would do everything in order to achieve that. But for Chelsea, things woulnd't be that simplistic. I know (and that I know from experience) that it doesn't mean she would stop loving Mark. Most likely, she would love both (that I know is quite possible), and would want to abandon nothing. And so I think the most reallistic course for the story is that when Dylan realizes she won't leave Mark for him, at or just after the wedding, he will be the one who will break up with Chelsea, because at one point he's doomed to realize that he will be the one who will suffer most.

Of course, considering the way Chelsea and Dylan act, yes, he would probably leave her with a little "parting present" in her belly.

As to the question whether Mark and Chelsea could get back to the monogamous relationship: probably not. They actually both seem to love that sort of spice in their love life and sex life, and won't stop, even though the end of this particular adventure might be much harder for both of them than they would have expected. They both seem clever people: they would know that this sort of cuckolding relation is indeed dangerous, but that monogamy is actually no less dangerous. It can actually be safer for your wife to sleep or even to fall in love with another guy, but telling you everything all the while, than to get slowly bored with monotony, without even noticing it, and then one day to leave everything suddenly because she fell hard for a new guy and had to deal with that alone.

Well, these are only clues and ideas from hard-earned experience. ^^ But I trust you to build a great ending to this great story. ;-) Thanks again!

@anon: "she would have torn his sphincter muscle to shreds and the pain and massive amount of blood would have required an immediate trip to the ER to prevent him from bleeding to death"

There should be a sequel, in which he falls in lust or love with the really cute nurse in the emergency room who treated his injuries from this particular encounter. Nurses are cute and lovable. My daddy married a nurse. :)

Would love to meet Mrs. O'Malley. Great story!

So incredible. I totally want to read more! Please continue!