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Interesting to start, stupid at the end

I find it much more likely that he'd call the Police. After all he was kidnapped and they committed assault, battery and sodomy on his person. He knew Alison so he had them all. It wouldn't have taken the Police long to identify all the women involved and they would have spent a number of years in prison. Why live with the fear and hatred? Why not just get even and far, far ahead by sending them all to jail to be Big Berth's Bitches? Ridiculous ending.

The smile was soon replaced

By a grimace when he thought about how badly his wife treated him. That's when he filed for divorce and left her. He did , indeed, have the last laugh.

VERY special

Nothing more to say,really. Just very special.

You capture well the sensuality of erotic tickling. Nice work.

I had a friend from marines who wanted to be butt fucked after he got back to the states. He would yell hoorah after each orgasm. Kind of annoying. Anyway he got a tramp stamp that says Seimpre Fi above his ass crack. Also I always say if you can't join the marines, fuck them.

Fucking dumb. This pile of shit needs to be disposed of properly. (Toilet flushes)🚽

Swang for the fences and came up short. Long derailed story of nothing really. I ask was there a point? Dog girl doesn't want to be dig girl in the end. Has kids. People move on or die. Ok

Eye roll

Giving birth vaginally does not destroy the tightness of a woman's vagina. Vaginas were made to give birth, they bounce back pretty damn fast.

Also, as previously stated you don't want to poke our cervix. I see that a lot in these stories, it makes me wonder if there are a lot of inexperienced people writing erotica.

Having said all that, this is a good concept and with a bit of work could be good.

YOU NEED A PHOTO

I DONT BELIEVE I WOULD HAVE HAD SEX WITH HER.BECAUSE OF HER BITCHY NATURE I WOULD HAVE TURNED HER ON THEN CUT A TRAIL RIGHT OUT THE DOOR.
NOT ALL SMOKING BABES NEED TO GET SCREWED.HOWEVER IT TRULY DEPENDS ON HOW SEXY AND GORGEOUS SHE WAS?

Back to the drawing board

After figuring out just what does happen inside a vagina, as mentioned below, ya mite tri a spel chek. Just sayin'

Superb

Excellent story, just the right amount of prologue, and a proper fat BBW, so often you read a few paragraphs and she's barely chubby. I like that you readily use the f' (for fat) word and I also liked the open ending. Ihope that you'll be writing further stories. One constructive point, greater detail about the ladies appearance and clothing would be nice. I have my own very first story under-way at the moment

Wonderfully told

As a male, I have often wondered how sexuality begins in friendly female relationships and I suspect I have just learned the answer. You have told a delightful tale in the most exceptional manner. Thank you for sharing those naughty, sexy, engaging and enchanting secrets. I promise I won't tell. More, please, if there is more....I am tghlawyer03@gmail.com and hope my comments are not unwelcome.

Obviously written by a man

When you even bump up against a woman's cervix she jumps thru the roof in PAIN! That's why, even in porn movies where the guy has a giant cock, you never see him jamb it all the way in the woman's pussy. Hit that cervix and the pain and screaming begin. Dumb.

Well I'm going to agree with your disclaimers this time

Liked some of your stories in the past. Not this one. Don't see a southern man, all jacked up, full of hormones and still full of himself, standing still for being brutally sodomized. What I see is him going to the hospital for surgery on his torn and bleeding asshole. Then I see the women going to jail. After all an investigation would have rounded up the DNA on the sheets, all the strapons and all the women involved. I'm thinking a couple of the girls, in lieu of a lighter sentence, would have turned States evidence and told the truth about what happened. Adrian would have done the most jail time. None of the women would have ever gotten into anther college given their felony convictions and ensuing records. I just didn't see Rodney rolling over and accepting the rape. Now this is a fictional story and you could have Martians invade New Orleans and sit down for a cup of gumbo. But this was just too far beyond the realm of plausibility to make for a good read. Maybe next time.

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