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This story is OK as it goes. Nicole's workmates are absolute bastards in my opinion, but we are to believe that Nicole enjoys being abused that way. I would like a happy ending with the boss's wife. I realise it's just a story.

fff's & xxx's size breasts?

Excuse me, I stopped reading then. No stars.

I enjoyed your story Fluid, but as you can see it got kinda beat up by a couple of commenters.

One of the things you might have done is fill in some of that blank time between she he gave her the replica and when she was in his bed room. Here are a few of my ideas.

1. She could be driving home and without thinking she has her hand in her pearse caressing it and imagining what it would feel like when he slowly entered her. Taking her wait as he slowly fills her. You should be easily able to expand on that idea with your very good writing skills. She is startled by a horn and realizes she narly ran a red light.

2. When she is home she puts it on her mantle until her girl friend knocks and she has to hide it in her bed room. All the while looking at it she was thinking of the that thick, hot cosk opening he, stretching and filling her as she has never been filled before. Again you write well so do so.

3. The replica ends up on her nightstand and she always gives it a good night and a good morning kiss. Thinking about how this young man with the magnificent cock might have her naked in her knees as he presses his thickness between her lips. His hands in her hair guiding her slowly down the length as she thinks about how it will feel between her lips and hoping he will enjoy it when she presses thot length against the roof of her mouth and hoping the soft roughness will thrill him. Feeling herself getting wet thinking of feeling him pulsong between her lips filling her mouth with his youg cum and flooding her senses with his taste.

I urge yuo not to be a lazy writer, you are way too good a writer to do that.

Mike

Wow!

A great read and worth every one of the five stars I have awarded it.
It would have been six stars had it not been for the distracting typos. Please do your due diligence and don't rely solely on your spell checker.

Gawd yes please write more

I'm an sissy. I've seen ads for being turned into an sissy, but I thought it would not work or just some porn but after reading this and if this is real then I'd order one turn me into a sissy that I was born to be, to be on my knees, obedient, to please, to worship, to be the sissy that I'm.

Great stuff!

Very hot! Can't wait to read more!

THE WORST STORY ON THE SITE.

JUST YOUR TIPICAL BULL SHIT STORY YOU MOTHER FUCKERS ARE SO FULL OF SHIT ,THE FIRST THING THAT WOULD HAPPEN IS YOU COCK HOUND DEVON WOULD FIND HIMSELF WITH A BULLET UP HIS ASS AND MEAT WOUD BE LOOKING FOR HIS COCK OH IT IS UP HIS ASS WITH BALLS.WHAT BULL SHIT.

wow

Love your tale eating cum from a filled cunt is my favorite. eating cum any way is my second favorite

1*

policywank is a DUMB CUNT and a WHORE. she should be a slave in a whorehouse. that would teach her! Rate this shit accordingly!

Not my cup of tea, but rhetoric and grammar were generally good.

Except for, ". . . a small puddle now circling it's base." The use of the apostrophe causs this clause in the sentence to mean, " . . . a small puddle now circling it is base." That of course makes no sense whatsoever, and causes the reader who has a 1968 vintage high school education to get completely distractrd trying to figure out what the hell you meant. (I no gen x an gen y n millenyls wil hav no idea wat i ment --sins they dont teach spelling in skools anymore, but for those of us who are literate, it really is jarring as hell!

Well...

If you completely ignore the fact that Paul is still in love with Gina and clearly clinging to the chance of getting his marriage back, then yes.

possible directions

Very much enjoy this series. There are many directions this could go; Brian should be graduating soon and won't have to worry about being exposed in the locker room. He could further acknowledge his beta nature. A totally smooth, hairless body would enhance his feelings of shame and submission. A European vacation could find him performing for an audience in a German sex club with another sexy twink (which one will kneel first?) or falling to his knees before a burnished ebony black cock as his own rises shamefully.

rose and Brian may want to visit an exotic Caribbean location where cuckoldry is the norm and white submissives like Brian publicly worship black cock.
The final question; is Brian ultimately destined to become the beautiful small-breasted shemale Brianna, or will he happily remain a submissive cocksucker in thrall to Rose?

Funnier than hell!

He would have taken one look at her, turned around and left. This is a man that is just days away from being divorced. Rather than have any submissive ideas, he still would have been full of anger. The minute he was out the door he would have called her sister and told her about what his ex-wife was offering. Mikey boy would have known about 10 seconds later. Even for fiction this was just stupid. Too soon into the divorce. She'd be lucky if he didn't bitch slap her on his way out. The author has clearly never been through a divorce. STILL laughing at how bad this was.

Three alarm fire

Highly erotic idea and very well written.
I am not a fan of episodic stories; however I would be interested in reading where this will go.

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