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This is going to be one of my very favourite stories! Your writing is superb, the way you describe their daily activities, diving, swimming, lying on the beach, the photo shoot, sailing back from the Merc’s, the rough weather, the sex, brings back so many happy memories. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
As to "clever premise's" issues, this wasn't a sex or stroke story; it is a love story. And with the prevalence of porn these days, one can know a lot without having the experience! Five Stars for quality.
I loved the story. I loved the writing. You were able to go into detail beautifully, without getting bogged down. (I have experience with other writers who cause me to skip wordy paragraphs. You were far from that.) Thank you. I hope to read more of your work.
While I do think the previous commentor made a valid point, it is still an excellent story. My own first time experience, which was also my partners first time experience, didn't have a lot of careful testing ir exploring either, though we have improved over the decades since. Anyway I look forward to reading more from you.
Clever premise.
But ALL sex is super-rushed. Seems to be in a rush to get to an orgasm without the details of how it got there.
For a virgin she doesn't seem to need to 'get to know' his cock and/or balls. Doesn't need to see how he reacts to different touching/caressing. Surprising. Lacking in eroticism. Really.
Nothing much with her breasts. Her ass. Her pussy. No testing to see what she liked.
And, it's MAITRE D' not MAITRE DE.
Three stars.
Awesome storey, and special because of the location, my favourite places Gt Barrier Island especially the eastern side and Gt Mercury Island Coralie Harbour is my Favourite anchorage! So looking forward to more chapters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Latest 15 Reader Comments
This is going to be one of my very favourite stories! Your writing is superb, the way you describe their daily activities, diving, swimming, lying on the beach, the photo shoot, sailing back from the Merc’s, the rough weather, the sex, brings back so many happy memories. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
As to "clever premise's" issues, this wasn't a sex or stroke story; it is a love story. And with the prevalence of porn these days, one can know a lot without having the experience! Five Stars for quality.
I loved the story. I loved the writing. You were able to go into detail beautifully, without getting bogged down. (I have experience with other writers who cause me to skip wordy paragraphs. You were far from that.) Thank you. I hope to read more of your work.
While I do think the previous commentor made a valid point, it is still an excellent story. My own first time experience, which was also my partners first time experience, didn't have a lot of careful testing ir exploring either, though we have improved over the decades since. Anyway I look forward to reading more from you.
Another awesome chapter, and yes I’ve made love on that beach, great memories! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Clever premise.
But ALL sex is super-rushed. Seems to be in a rush to get to an orgasm without the details of how it got there.
For a virgin she doesn't seem to need to 'get to know' his cock and/or balls. Doesn't need to see how he reacts to different touching/caressing. Surprising. Lacking in eroticism. Really.
Nothing much with her breasts. Her ass. Her pussy. No testing to see what she liked.
And, it's MAITRE D' not MAITRE DE.
Three stars.
Captivating and exhilarating
Would have given 10 stars!
More please!
A bit sloppy writing, could use editing. Small spelling/autocorrect issues.
Awesome storey, and special because of the location, my favourite places Gt Barrier Island especially the eastern side and Gt Mercury Island Coralie Harbour is my Favourite anchorage! So looking forward to more chapters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Great start to hopefully a long series
Nicely done! I enjoyed your story very much. Cheers. Frankie
Great. Keep them coming.
Great story. I too was a late bloomer unfortunately so was my wife so we struggled together and had fun but not regular steady Sex. Still learning.