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you keep bringing on the surprises

really enjoying this,has good pacing, emotional rollercoasting, love, independence and needing each other. Thanks forputting the sex in but for me I didn't need it so much as the story as taken its own path

genuis didnt see that coming

here I was thinking we were going to move on to the HEA with Seth. We know though Dillon loves Seth and wont waver

ive said it before about that woman

so seth better hurry up and get his ass over there

dave is a good friend

I liked how u put that I there, so Dillon knows he can be a sexual being again and that he realises he can love and b loved, realy enjoying this

disgusting and never again

This story at the end where Brett leaves luc to get beaten on is so horrible that it made me throw up u should have never wrote this awful story do not write a sequel nor a prequel to this at all u should have never even come on this site to write this disgusting piece of garbage u call a story

Amazing

Just one word sums it up. This story is amazing. No author explanations required. The build is slow and that makes it so much beyyer. I'm loving it and I'm glad ! you're back. 😁

sneaky bugger

short, snappy with twist at end, liked it

Truly never a dull sentence...

I can not get enough of the dominant teen and the sub-mid-twenties office worker.

Wow.

I don't know how I feel about this story. It's kind of like an oxymoron, a beautiful tragedy. I was expecting a happy, positive ending like your amazing story, "The Human Condition", but sadly that did not happen. But hey, that's how life is, not always ending with a "happily ever after". But this story just shows how amazing and talented you are as a writer, you swayed my emotions and wow I don't think I've ever loved and hated a story as much as this one. Nevertheless, I must thank you, this story was beautiful. I know it's been over a decade since you lasted posted under this account, but I just want to thank you for the amazing stories you've written. I hope you still write for others, because you truly have an amazing talent.

Keep going!

This is more than what I imagined would happen! It's great that they finally saw each other naked, enjoyed one another's manly beauty, and sucked each other off. They are growing in their relationship and becoming a couple. I love them both, and I love your beautiful descriptions of their bodies and their loving. Tony seems a beautifully haired man -- and he enjoyed that Daniel enjoys his hairy body so much. Like Daniel, I do enjoy a hairy-chested man! Keep this story going!

Some authorial footnotes, diversions, and confessions

1. For a relatively uneventful story with two emotionally subdued leads, this one's really twisty. I'm clearly still badly out of writing practice. It feels like juggling on a high wire. I expect it'll take me a good while to finish the next installment.
2. Older men can still be very sexual, and very sexy. Larry, this is my apology if my portrayal in "Backstage Romance" ever inadvertently made you out to be anything less.
3. The protagonist of "Sunday in the Park with George" is an asshole. I'd take Doug over George any day. At least he cares about his lover's social life.
4. Alex is Korean American, but as that isn't really relevant to the story I'm telling, I haven't been able to work it in for fear it will come across as tokenism.
5. It's true, female composers are still outnumbered by men two-to-one in the workplace. Unimaginable in this day and age.
6. Some readers complained that they missed seeing Timothy Spencer get his comeuppance in "Backstage Romance." Shawn's audition scene is included here in part for them.
7. It's bad of me to keep making poor Jeff the butt monkey, but he's just so adorable when he's getting put in his place!
8. Besides, it's about time Larry got an opportunity to administer some tough love.
9. Aaron McBride pretty much embodies my physical ideal. Like Doug, I seem to have developed a thing for baritones.
10. All roads lead to Austin.

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!

Please can you make a part 2 and maybe even a part 3?? I've read this story way to much I need more to it. Maybe in part two it goes more in depth of just how much he becomes the woman of the house and maybe even Trey walks in on his father dominating him and then Trey from then on treat him like the little sissy bitch cock whore he is. Please write more! I've busted sooo many times to this story! PLEASE I NEED MORE!!!! ;) ;)

No effort to check on Vy? I can understand a level of detachment when living in survival mode, but it seemed she was at least minimally within his emotional walls.

Eric? I can see the pull towards one of the few people to ever seem to want Rain beyond a quick encounter, but Eric worries me. When he really feels Rain is his, I can see him being abusive. I hope I am wrong. That was kind of cruel of you to have a Knight in Shining Amor (Dylan) just ride through and keep going.

Bring on Chapter 3!

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