Such a sad story. Todd will really be the man left out. Brett really doesn’t care about Todd. He has only showed him affection when ordered by David. Also did you catch that David told Brett to make sure that Todd didn’t think he was being left out. He is undercutting their marriage at every step. He makes it sound like he is trying to get Brett comfortable with the situation but what he’s really doing making them the main couple. Sounds Colin was his slave and David made him approach Todd on his death bed to guilt him into letting David fuck Brett to ease his grief. This writer is really portraying gay men is despicable way.
Reading this hot slutty story had me feeling like I was looking in a mirror a few times while remembering what we had to do to have our fun back then. It may be easier now, but that lack of access in some ways made the hunt for sex seem even more exciting. I can't wait for you to share more.
It was a bust for me the second you wrote both men were 68 Did you really think readers would find it erotic to read about sex between 2 senior citizens.?
Disagree with the other anonymous. Things like this actually happens IRL. I've personally known a much younger and a scrawny dom who has dommed numerous muscular beefy guys older and bigger than him. The incest factor may need suspending disbelief but the domination aspect is very realistic. Either way, having more than 1 dom in this story would absolutely not work. Ethan as the sole dom is perfect. Author, please keep it going, this story is amazing so far.
And you are so right about the religious experience. They led by fear and condemnation. I was pulled out of a pew, BY MY EAR, because I turned to look at the clock at the rear of the church. How dare o do that, when the priest droled on in Latin, for over an hour! I’d never willingly step foot in there again!
Good P.R. Work!!
I have to write this! I’m from Staten Island, and I went to Curtis! I couldn’t believe what I was reading when I started your story. My family has been there over a hundred years, my grandfather built many of the buildings near the ferry, he was a mason contractor. Now, back to the story: please don’t leave it there. Let’s read about him fucking, too. If you want to get in touch, respond here, and we can trade info. Thank you!!! Joe
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Well written without all the overused cliches. The story drew me in immediately: I loved the scene of the son in bed listening to the sounds of his father getting fucked. The gang rape toward the end would have benefited from more description, but that is only a minor quibble. Ending the story with the father jerking off watching his son getting fucked was just right with a tantalizing hint that he would be the next one to enjoy his son’s ass. Excellent. I came twice and now have to clean up the area.
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Just re-read it. That closing line is perfection!!!!!
Such a sad story. Todd will really be the man left out. Brett really doesn’t care about Todd. He has only showed him affection when ordered by David. Also did you catch that David told Brett to make sure that Todd didn’t think he was being left out. He is undercutting their marriage at every step. He makes it sound like he is trying to get Brett comfortable with the situation but what he’s really doing making them the main couple. Sounds Colin was his slave and David made him approach Todd on his death bed to guilt him into letting David fuck Brett to ease his grief. This writer is really portraying gay men is despicable way.
Reading this hot slutty story had me feeling like I was looking in a mirror a few times while remembering what we had to do to have our fun back then. It may be easier now, but that lack of access in some ways made the hunt for sex seem even more exciting. I can't wait for you to share more.
It was a bust for me the second you wrote both men were 68 Did you really think readers would find it erotic to read about sex between 2 senior citizens.?
Please continue this series
Love it that he is conditioned to serve any friend of Joe without question. And so hot that the doctor has a standing order for Friday night sex.
Disagree with the other anonymous. Things like this actually happens IRL. I've personally known a much younger and a scrawny dom who has dommed numerous muscular beefy guys older and bigger than him. The incest factor may need suspending disbelief but the domination aspect is very realistic. Either way, having more than 1 dom in this story would absolutely not work. Ethan as the sole dom is perfect. Author, please keep it going, this story is amazing so far.
And you are so right about the religious experience. They led by fear and condemnation. I was pulled out of a pew, BY MY EAR, because I turned to look at the clock at the rear of the church. How dare o do that, when the priest droled on in Latin, for over an hour! I’d never willingly step foot in there again!
Good P.R. Work!!
I have to write this! I’m from Staten Island, and I went to Curtis! I couldn’t believe what I was reading when I started your story. My family has been there over a hundred years, my grandfather built many of the buildings near the ferry, he was a mason contractor. Now, back to the story: please don’t leave it there. Let’s read about him fucking, too. If you want to get in touch, respond here, and we can trade info. Thank you!!! Joe
OMG!!!!! loved this post HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In my 60's . want to suck a magnificent cock. Need to satisfy a man , want cum to taste ,swallow. i want to truly make another man truly happy.
sanantonio11@charter.net
Please
Well written without all the overused cliches. The story drew me in immediately: I loved the scene of the son in bed listening to the sounds of his father getting fucked. The gang rape toward the end would have benefited from more description, but that is only a minor quibble. Ending the story with the father jerking off watching his son getting fucked was just right with a tantalizing hint that he would be the next one to enjoy his son’s ass. Excellent. I came twice and now have to clean up the area.
Hot story! We need part 3.
Fun D/s dynamic but as for a marriage this is an abusive relationship with no love.