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Thank you guys!

You are all so sweet to leave so nice comments on my story ...
@first commenter, two chapters left and part of what you desire will be covered ;)
@AKA983 - thanks for always dropping by with lovely comments :)
@anon and Nina talking about Box Shaped Heart. Writing is an exquisite pleasure, and I feel like every story is my child, so it wouldn't be right for me to say that I love one more than the other, lol. But while Collateral is my stubborn and unafraid child, Box Shaped Heart is my clever, mischievous, yet silly and fun child! So glad you guys like it. And yes, Hans needed his storyline, and that's why I gave it to him :)
@anon with the 'a plan' comment - yes, you put it like it is. Jake finally succeeded to speak his mind in front of his brother, and that makes him from still a boy, a man. Thank you for appreciating my story.
@Ozz - ah, sorry for the rollercoaster ... The boys do need it. They are strong, don't worry ;)

Delicious!

Oh wow! One of the best anal-power-fuck scenes I've ever read!

Bottom

I'm a Bottom and I know what you mean about being sucked or fucking someone. Don't get me wrong, It feels great. It's just that I love being the one doing the sucking and getting fucked so much more that I wouldn't care if I never got sucked or fucked someone. Most of my encounters have been from the internet and a couple of them have developed into long term affairs that I get to enjoy taking their loads bareback in both ends. I love getting pleasure and it really turns me on to know that I am giving it as well.

Smoldering Smokin Hot!!!

OMG... I don't want to write a comment for every chapter, but I swear this one had me so fuckin hot my boi pussy got so moist I just had to finger fuck myself. You are doing such a wonderful job being the best girly fuck slut you can for Henri. I love it when guys want us to be super feminine and give up all control. This is one of the few stories that I have read twice and was in total heat both times. Great work...

Pantyhose Anal

My Buddy and I usually wear latex catsuits when he fucks me but, sometimes we wear pantyhose, and he always cums inside me bareback. If I haven't already shot my load, knowing he is filling my insides with his sperm when he cums almost always sends me over the edge like that. We do it a LOT but, if I could, I would always have some of his cream inside me. I get hard for hours after we have sex every time I think about what I have inside me. I usually slip a butt plug in when he pulls out just to make sure it stays in there what it's supposed to be.

Hot and very erotic

Great description of sucking cock, with the mental thoughts of the first love of cock in your mouth very memorable. A real man sucks it and swallows!

Very Hot

Hope to hear more about your adventures. I just ate my cum while imagining a scenario like yours!

My Fantasy

I Have had a couple of long term Buddies that I trusted and, once we started doing it bareback, they always gave me their load deep inside me. I still do it with one of them. Sometimes we wear pantyhose and it feels great to have our nylon covered legs rubbing together. A few times, I have had him tie my hands and feet to the bedposts with some more nylons and we pretend he is a stranger raping me. I don't have the nerve to take it raw from someone I don't know but, the thought excites me! I'm too afraid of catching something from someone I don't know to take his load raw. It's not so much the rape part or the bondage part that turns me on, it's the thought of taking a load bareback from a stranger and and doing something I want to do.but wouldn't have done otherwise.

Black Man

I have never had a black man but, if all the stories about them are true about how big they are and having a huge load, it's something I want to experience. However, I like doing it bareback whenever possible, and I want it to be with someone I can do it with raw and take that huge load inside me.

You da best ❤️

Ah Laura I love coming back and re reading these chapters when you release them just to remind me how good this story is. Hans is a gem and his own story is fabulous so I'd definitely reccomend those who can afford to support you on patreon do.

Is it weird that I'm kind of jealous of those reading this for the first time? Haha. You're definitely one of the best authors on here. And I agree with another commenter, i am eagerly awaiting new chapters ofbox shaped heart (BEST STORY EVER)

Nina x

This is a great story and I love that Mason finally found some who truly deserves him, and I adore Alex and Aiden. And Mason's mom! She's so great and supportive. But I also need to say that I absolutely hate Dale and his entitled ass, thinking that he's right to call Mason a whore when he's the cheater and I hope he'll never find happiness ever. Or at least until he realizes that he's the one who did this and Mason did absolutely nothing wrong. Ugh. What an asshole.

Loved it, Loved it, Loved it...

I would have loved to trade places with David and be Jamal's bitch for the night. I loved how David showed off for the other boys in the shower, and really loved how he took a feminine bitch bottom demeanor when they went back to the hot tub. I love to show off with my man and he loves it too. OMG - My man would have made me do some really nasty stuff if we were at that hot tub. Hopefully you'll write more stories about David and his love for being a Black Man's Bitch.

Be still my heart!

Hi Laura,
The best way I can think of now to describe the roller-coaster of emotions your writing has evoked in me is with words from Shirley Bassey's song.
"I love you, hate you, love you, hate you, love you.
OZZ

Hot

Man, your a lucky guy would enjoy being in the middle

You should have added a mechaphilia tag to this. It's not something I'm into, but I imagine those that are would appreciate being to find these kinds of stories.

You also really should have posted it in another category.

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