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@ballsucker: Thanks for all you're comments you left for the chapters. Although one confused me considering the chapter content for chapter five. Well, anyway, I will post another chapter. I'm working on chapter seven now as a reply to your comments.

Thanks again! :)


Much love,

TrippyLuv

Wow!

@chrisunder: Thank you! You're the first to mention the fact that there could be something larger on the horizon for Aaron & Slade other than the obvious problems they have now. As for what happens, it's not determined as of yet. I would hate to make anyone sad at the end, but like I said nothing has been finalized. I hope you continue to read each chapter and enjoy them for what they could bring either negatively or positively.

Thanks again! :)

Much love,

TrippyLuv

love the change of tempo

needed some suspense

I liked the story, and loved the idea..even with no suspense to the game.

Shaving

Maybe in part seven the thugs shave his body so he becomes the ultimate bottom

More more more

I am really loving this series ! These two guys are adorable and well written. Like the other poster said I think it is sweet and hot that Owen is the more romantic of the two. Hopefully they will overcome obstacles that are sure to come and have hot sex to boot. Would be hot if Owen is versatile.... Just saying!

Well done first story

You are starting your writing from a strong place and the more you write the better you will get. The present tense is a bit distracting as it is uncommon; however, you are using it well to give a voyeuristic feel. I would be interested in the story continuing. Now that Alec has found a safe haven and support, you can slow down a bit and let us learn about all these young men. Tell us about each individually and how their journeys mesh.

sorry hit one by mistake

I meant to press 5 stars, but accidentally pressed 1 on my Iphone. I LOVE this story! I can't wait to read more chapters!

HORNY BUGGER

Just loved it Andy. Was all of that fantasy or some of it real? Want a Mr Richardson in my life too. Like a Daddy figure. Keep on writing and make it longer next time. Want to cum more than once. X

Pretty good for your first attempt

I enjoyed reading this. Yes, it's somewhat fast paced, but it's your first time writing.

I don't know why people have to be such jerks when critiquing.

Alex is not a slut. He's just happy to be accepted for who he is. He cares for Scott, but wants to have fun too. Why the hell not? The only problem I have is them not using condoms.

I'm looking forward to reading more chapters!

This is a huge disappointment

If you meant for him to be a slut you should just said so. Don't include love in the description. That's just bullshit. Don't lie. Just say that he was kicked out and the guy that saved him from homelessness is encouraging him to be a rent boy without the pay.

For those interested

Related pictures are available at glorybaths.tumblr.com - though with only occasional updates

For those interested

Related pictures are available at glorybaths.tumblr.com - though with only occasional updates

For those interested

Related pictures are available at glorybaths.tumblr.com - though with only occasional updates

For those interested

Related pictures are available at glorybaths.tumblr.com - though with only occasional updates

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