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Feminized cock sucker

He goes to the NFL and becomes a feminized cock sucker. Sucking the entire team and some. Others. Wear French maid outfit at NFL parties. Eugene is his manager.
Mark Parish
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Awsome

I had a similar experience and really had a lot of fun taking it all in. Soooo hot

Part 2 please. This was hot.

Beautiful

Hard from start to finish,part 2 please.

Please part 2. My cock was hard as a rock from the bathroom until he erupted a hot load up your sweet tight ass.

Please explain

Do you have some biased opinion about anal sex... I want to read that Nick and Pete shared that beautiful thing called making love.. You have the ability to make me feel all emotions so well, but you just don't get me going with the sex... I don't want to read how Imre and Kavalry had sex, they ARE NOT THE MAIN CHARACTERS... You are so good at creating a developing a plot.. And a character... But I wanna fucking se Nicholas Goodman fuck his Petey GOOD, why do you find it so difficult... Anal sex has not happened to any of your main characters in all your stories.. I Love me a Love story, but please go Fucking try a Mills and Boone book and try again.. Jane Austen is a great Author but Books like hers just doesn't fit the fucking site..

Deceptive?

Not sure how you could call it deceptive to have this story here for free but the sequel for free on Amazon? I've seen several authors from this sight go on to sell their work on Amazon! But even if you don't want to go and purchase the next book or books, this story was awesome on its own, did it have a HEA ending? No, but not all stories do. Get over yourself and enjoy what was written here, if you don't want to continue the series than don't! Simple as that

Loved it!

Damn I love that story! Love hearing how his hungry was bred twice and how the cum was running out of him when his friend left. I wished that were me being bred!

But Why!!

For fucks sake mate. Why on God's earth can you not allow at least one of your great stories to have a FULL happy ending.. You always have to fuck it up... That, just isn't love.. If Nicholas Goodman really loved Peter Dorsey, then they would have been enough for each other.. I know you don't want to be like the rest of the writers, but please don't fuck up a beautiful story, just because you want to be different.

Based on Life

Wow, you captured my true life modeling experience, until the gangbang. I worked as a figure model for classes and artists during university which led to working as a stripper for a entertainment company. The strip and lap-dance part is pretty close to what I've experienced working a few parties. Working a CMNM event is all about hands on. No sex though, against company rules. A hot read!

Part 2 Please

Update from ModusOperandi

Hi All,

Firstly, thanks as always for the comments and emails and the overall support of David and Jeremy's story.

@Belle2327 The next chapter should be up within the next 24 hours.

@Mbese Let me know how you go with your double choc Tim Tams. You can get them in all sorts of flavours these days like caramel, white chocolate etc but my faves are still the originals

Lastly, a general reassurance that David and Jeremy's story isn't about to veer off on a sleazy tangent with David turning into a sexual predator. Their story certainly gets sexy as would be expected from any two people newly in love.

I wrote of David succumbing to temptation to show he isn't perfect. Like the rest of us there are times he lets himself down. I highly doubt there is a person alive who can say they haven't. I'm sure we've all told a lie to save our skins or paint ourselves in a better light. Or, perhaps, said something we shouldn't have in anger. Or let someone we care about down. Broken the law by speeding or driving when we know we've had a touch too much to drink. Maybe hooked up with someone we mightn't ordinarily have hooked up with because we've had too much to drink, or want revenge on an ex or are just plain horny. The list of possible ways and means where we don't always act to our own internal moral code and compass are endless. That doesn't make us all bad, weak or immoral people. It makes us human. Even good people can have a moment of weakness, laziness, or bad judgment.

My point is, I guess, that David and Jeremy are very real to me. They are wonderful to have in my head. They are funny and flawed. Sexy and stubborn. They are kind but each has a temper. Passionate and smart, yet also clueless and still growing into the wonderful men I know they will eventually mature into.

LOL so after that late night essay I hope you guys won't give up on David.

More chapters please

Can you finish this story?! Dying to know what happened next!!

Caught

We were caught by my aunt when I was 16...she walked in just at the moment my cousin was cumming in my mouth...I thought she would have been mad and upset , but she just said we should do it in my cousins room rather than the den...she left us with a smile ( seconds later we were in his room , my cock down his throat...and many times after too

Girlfriend?

Blech. Go bye bye, lady

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