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So he laid you on your back

put her on top in a 69, started fucking her above you and you licked her clit, avoiding his cock. Anatomy man, anatomy.

Although good it was different

Your writing style in this chapter seemed different from the others. It was great but idk if it was as good as some of the others you've written. I felt u just stated his feelings and didn't really.... I guess describe them...

I finished what u had written awhile ago and i absolutely loved it and was so bummed when i finished with ch15. I hope u continue to write more and find someway to continue the saga for a very long time

Hawt

I really want to lose my V card to a guy making me feel like a slut and a bitch.

Wow

Beautiful writing..look at Dex being so demanding and Adam being so sweet..love them..

awww

Aww i think it was da bitch Mrs. Goldman that said something to the boss.i hope Jackson stands up for him being as he is the one that got him into doing all those things.....anyway can't wait for the next chapter.

Absolutely beautiful

Obviously these people have never read any form of actualy literature or they would understand character shifts. Of course this chapter sounded like a different person -- it was supposed to!! It was from a different point of view.

This story was so touching, so satisfying, and the end was absolutely beautiful. Stop playing around with story sites and get yourself to a publisher. Flesh this story out and share it with the world.

Don't listen to the clueless readers who have no idea what you were doing because they have no actual reading skills. These are people who probably also think that Nathan died at the end of "Dream Boy". Your intelligence is obvious in your writing and the romance industry deserves your talent.

Fill it out, polish it up, make the dialogue flow a little more naturally, and start submitting to publishers.

HOLY SMOKES!!!!

I was crying so hard at the beginning of this one I had to put it down because I couldn't see. You are an amazing writer and I thank you for sharing these stories with us. Hope to see a story about Tyron.
This story had everything and it just proves that if two people really love eachother and fight for that love, it will concur all.

Most excellent!

Very hot but also very gripping at the same time with such an unusual time period and setting. So different from the overwhelming majority of stories here. Before I got halfway through, I was right there seeing it all happen; almost a part of it. That is excellence in writing. Hope to see more from you in this category.

Haha

I think Jackson will tell Mr. Goldsman if Joe is fired, he will no longer be a client or better yet, Joe works for him now..

Please continue..

Sweet couple

I just hope Nate doesn't hurt Eli, he's compassionate, loving, adorable and desperately wants to be loved by Nate. Hopefully Nate will be smart enough to recognize what he has in him.

Brotherly Love

So many of us have fantasized about doing it with our brothers, but dare not speak of that taboo. Congrats on writing about it with such a natural and easy flow. I'm sure it happens a lot more than we think!

Woowwww!!!!

A truly moving story of Love, Forgiveness and the strength to embrace that none of us are perfect but it is truly our imperfections that give us to the strength we need to grab love and hold onto it with all our heart despite fear and trepidation, I was very moved by Shane and Chris story because they wholeheartedly deserved each other and they both needed to face the past so they could embrace the present and cherish their future, I look forward to reading this story over and over again. Your writing is so good because you really know how to capture the feeling of Love, heartache, pain, anguish, despair, passion, anger, tenderness, laughter, tears and of course HEA in the whole story to that it actually pains your heart when the story ends because you just want to keep reading it forever. I Can't to read what you write next!!!!!

any more?

do you plan to write more? I'm very interested in a second chapter.

Why am i just meeting this author?

I loooooove this story. It is deep and i can relate to the characters. I hope you never stop writing. You are so good at it.

Alexander pisses me off to no end, even though I get why he doesn't outwardly show his love. Still, he is my favorite of the two brothers.

I can't read this series as often as you post, hence my reading of the last three chapters in one go, because it hits a little too deeply for me. Honestly, this isn't something I would normally read and keep coming back to, but, like all your other stories, I am completely drawn in, mesmerized, and invested. Thank you for, yet again, giving us an amazing read.

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