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Yep

I made plenty of mistakes in my earlier works which were pointed out to me and I attempted to correct in later efforts. Not clearly delineating time jumps is one. Even a gap of a few hours I now try to use [***] if I'm sticking within the same sub-chapter ~ which I mark with {a few foreshadowing words} within a given chapter.

Ugh ... I wrote this chapter just under three years ago ... I can still hear Rio grousing "Get off your ass, Bitch, and write the next damn chapter," because you know how patient she can be.

James aka FinalStand

Sexxy and drammatic!

A few minor splling issues but I effing loved it! I NeED to know what happens next!

Great story!

I really enjoy this story and have been following it since the beginning. Great work, keep it up.

What!!!!

Come on!!! We need more don't stop you got it going good. The QB ends up watching his girl fuck 7 guys at the motel.His loss.Lol.just kidding he gets to fuck. The others.

Slow start to great finish.

It was a daunting to read at first. But great sex scene ending.

Time gap - storyline

Their appears to be a time gap between this chapter & prior...a few weeks?! Gaps in an otherwise good continuous story, now broken up!? Oh and your main characters have one major fatal flaw!

Clips vs Mags

Glocks have Magazines. Some rifles have clips which feel bullets into their internal magazines. Someone on the street would screw that up, but not someone who just passed the type of class Elsa and Cindy just passed.

Hot

I would have loved to have been in that crowd to watch both shows. Both of you with Andrea and you sucking your husband's cock

Chris

Brutal. What did she do to disserve being gang-raped, and why was she willing to accept this treatment?

Yep what a good one

What a great read, thought it was quite long but worth the time reading it plenty of good described sex and a bit of background to go with it, well paced and thought through.

Proof reading...

" "Ok, thats me to, so who gives me a dare?" Questioned Peter "
("that's me TOO")

"I'm game if your game...."
("YOU'RE")

"across the pool, Lauren poured the vodka into James's mouth..."
("Across the pool...")

There's others too.

white sissy

I'm 21 I'm a sexy white petit boi with a big phat smooth juicy tight bubble booty the fellas say my ass looks like a video girls anyways I live with two big black daddys there room mates n I'm there bitch there both big mean tattooed ex cons n that's just my type both r packing d has 9 inches fat as hell n t has a thick 81/2 n I love when we get high on meth n they take turns beatin my ass up Nuttin better than having my ass blew full of nut while gettin a throat full at the same time

hmm...

seems like bonny/vastie is ready for another ban...

Such a great read

Such a great read, well paced and thought out well described and well written .

5+

More cuck stories! Annony fucking love this don't let him fool you!

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