Oh no! The hottest girl keeps flashing me! This is… bad? As usual, I don’t think you’ve ever met a “bitch” in real life, because you’d probably ask her to step on you.
Nice story although I think Rachael getting facials all the time was 'too porn video' & money shots like that are boring. The 'bi' sexual stuff I had no problem with 'cuz I had sex with my own gender long ago & it was great.
A girl's pussy feels a LOT better to me than her butt although the kink of a schincter is arousing in the heat of the moment. Since you were going there anyway I missed Rachael being double penetrated & feeling a second cock fucking her simultaneously.
So I could only rate 4 stars instead of 5....But...we came close!
Wouldn't trust Stella as far as I could throw her and Brian is a big asshole. Wes seems like a likable guy, but he's an idiot of agreeing to let Stella fuck around with Brian.
“ (There were lots of reasons, but the common denominator was, of course, racism.)” I groaned audibly when I read that, but otherwise I have much enjoyed the discussion of consolidation and adaptation. Keep up the good work!
Amazing erotic detail. The two guys working on his cock with different techniques really fired my imagination though I would have begged one of them to finger fuck my ass. I love taking first timers into a new world of experience.
Needless to say, the one took me directly to your other stories.
I did not leave a score. It was, as usual, well written and composed. I could not however read it all. You took the time to write it so it seemed fair that I should try to read it.
I absolutely love your world-building and in this chapter I especially loved your succinct summation of our urban design problems. I suspect you might get one or two people in these comments complaining about putting your "woke politics" or something like that into the story... but don't let them get to you, you hit the reality nail on the head and you're doing an incredible job with your storytelling.
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Oops but fun.
I bet your wife end up being knocked up
Oh no! The hottest girl keeps flashing me! This is… bad? As usual, I don’t think you’ve ever met a “bitch” in real life, because you’d probably ask her to step on you.
Another excellent chapter.
Nice story although I think Rachael getting facials all the time was 'too porn video' & money shots like that are boring. The 'bi' sexual stuff I had no problem with 'cuz I had sex with my own gender long ago & it was great.
A girl's pussy feels a LOT better to me than her butt although the kink of a schincter is arousing in the heat of the moment. Since you were going there anyway I missed Rachael being double penetrated & feeling a second cock fucking her simultaneously.
So I could only rate 4 stars instead of 5....But...we came close!
Wouldn't trust Stella as far as I could throw her and Brian is a big asshole. Wes seems like a likable guy, but he's an idiot of agreeing to let Stella fuck around with Brian.
Here’s another one that I wrote from my guy friend’s perspective. Thanks for your comments and feedback. It’s so nice to hear from my readers.
“ (There were lots of reasons, but the common denominator was, of course, racism.)” I groaned audibly when I read that, but otherwise I have much enjoyed the discussion of consolidation and adaptation. Keep up the good work!
I wonder is Zed a reference to Zeb from the Almighty Johnsons ? That sign sounds exactly like something he would have done
Amazing erotic detail. The two guys working on his cock with different techniques really fired my imagination though I would have begged one of them to finger fuck my ass. I love taking first timers into a new world of experience.
Needless to say, the one took me directly to your other stories.
I did not leave a score. It was, as usual, well written and composed. I could not however read it all. You took the time to write it so it seemed fair that I should try to read it.
Well done. Interesting relationship between the mother and daughter. It'll be fun to see where it goes.
I absolutely love your world-building and in this chapter I especially loved your succinct summation of our urban design problems. I suspect you might get one or two people in these comments complaining about putting your "woke politics" or something like that into the story... but don't let them get to you, you hit the reality nail on the head and you're doing an incredible job with your storytelling.
Dam'n it, Belle...
...why did you have to ruin a good thing? That just wasn't ok...ugh
Too Alliteration happy.