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Amusing, Entertaining, Confusing

Too much of a good thing can be fatal.

T***e were a couple of blanks I'm not sure I was able to I******y

Mm, so fucking lewd.

Damn!

I have caught up to you. I hope that there will be more?

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm

That was a beginning no middle no end.... looked like this was opening only. What happened

LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. THE STORY IS EROTIC. ALSO SHORT SWEET & KINKY. YES, THE STORY IS VERY REALISTIC, TOO.

The 3 main characters are masterfully justaposed creating a situation where Pam & her husband discover things about themselves they totally haven't been aware of.

ATHE STORY IS NOT ILLOGICAAL!

When i was in my early 20s, my girlfriend and me were house-sitting a cottage in Niagara region. A media personality was staying next door, a man in his late 30s. He invited us over, he had a swimming pool, hot tub etc. He treated us very friendly, & was polite. I felt so inferior in his presence, i admired his self-confidence & manners. He asked my permission for my girlfriend to apply suncreen lotion on his back & the back of his legs. He then asked if he is allowed to put the lotion on her back & back of her legs. He was teasing her thru me, by always asking for my OK. The 3 of us were cracking jokes. When i left to go to fetch more beer, the two of them were in hot tub sitting beside each other. My girlfriend was topless. He insisted that i had to join them. I was in my shorts. I was looking for my trunk. He said, "just come in naked. There is nobody else here..." He politely directed me to sit beside my girlfriend on the other side. She was sandwitched between us. I was getting a major kick out of the situation. I was sexually aroused so much i thought my dick would explode. My girlfriend said: "Gentlemen, will you excuse me i have to use the bathroom."
He said, "it will cost you a kiss to each of us. Deal?" She French kissed first me, then him. She got up... her totally naked, beautiful body was at full display... i found her more attractive then ever before... i knew i was about to share her... i had always admired her body. Now i felt i was warshiping it. I was totally mesmerized by the situation... the moment she was in the house, he moved next to me. "I hope you are OK with this. I will invite you two to stay here tonight... i enjoy your company very much... i mean both of you." He put my hand on his fully erect dick. It was big & firm. "I find your girlfriend irredistible attractive. As you can tell. You guys must stay." I knew i should have removed my hand from his dick right away but i dod not. I was paralyzed to the point i was ready to pleasure him if he just hinted anythithing to that effect. "Please YOU tell your girlfriend that you want the two of you to stay overnight."
We DID stay overnight.
I MUST ADMIT I FELT KIND OF CHEATED WHEN HE DID NOT ASKED ME TO CLEAN HIS DICK. Perhaps i should have offered.
After that night my girlftiend was better & better in bed, she was way more confident... She started to discuss other guys, like she likes him, or this one is fuckable, that one is good just for one-night stand.
She began cheating on me. She fell in love with another guy & we parted ways.

I HAVE NO REGRETS IN REGARD TO THE NIGHT WE SPENT IN NIAGARA REGION.

More detail and longer chapters

I love a story that gets right to the point just as anyone else; however, a little more detail into who the brothers really are, what they do, who their mate is and their first meeting is recommend.
I think if you added more detail and lengthened your chapters you will have 3x the amount of reads, votes and favourites.

Besides that you have a good base for a great story, keep writing!

Fiddlesticks!

You had to blow it, having Jim suck Jon's cock!
The first section got a 5 star, second got a 1!!!

Great start

I’m still fun I do like your writing style and you are one very sexy author. I gave it a 5 and, while there is always there is room for improvement let’s face it, this has one purpose and that it to turn people on and it sure does that. Well done.

Excellent BI story

You are on track for putting this in the Bi category. I loved reading about it and it made my cock pretty hard. I can't wait to read more stories from you.

Spelling

You should learn to use a spell check. Don't you know the difference between lions and loins?. PROOF READ BEFORE SUBMISSION!

hot

well written and very hot! maggie loved this as well ,her panties were not on for long! more please.

Great story with a good laugh

Loved the story, but loved the horse back riding trip. Had a tough time stopping laughing. I could picture it. Keep up the great work.

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