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Loved the story, BUT

I enjoyed the story - a lot. However, that said, I was a little disappointed. Given the locale of the story, The Grand Canyon, floating the Colorado River, I was hoping to get more of a feel for the canyon itself, to feel like I was there. There were a few little tidbits of the river and canyon, but very little. More descriptions of the river and the beautiful scenery, along with the sex, would have made the story much more interesting and fun to read for me.

Thoughts on all of you submittals .

Disregard the negative posts. Your story line and ESL issues are fine and add to the personal nature of the read. It has been a while since you last posted. Add to your compendium of stories.

Hot as hell, but Nikki is a Sociopath.

I'm less certain about Justine, but she's definitely on the spectrum. Either way, I suspect Paul is eventually going to deeply regret ever meeting either of them. But in the meantime, I've no doubt he'll enjoy himself immensely. The cow doesn't generally *expect* to be turned into steaks, after all.

Close

Almost lost it a few times

Great story

I don't know if the author is an artist and i know nothing about art, but the way the teacher instructs would encourage me to take the class.

Gina C

Fun and Sexy!

Great story, loved the "photography" session! Thank You!

Minor editing issues, but overall enjoyable.

Loved it!

Very sexy and mostly believable story! Particularly love stories involving photography, Thank You!

Art is great!!!

Great story, most of the scenes were great, especially the couples... What a way to spend a summer month... Thanks for sharing!

Continue

I have to admit that I was not able to get satisfy on this chapter, but you did it with Justice on saving them!
I like #1, #2 both, #3 sex with all, #4, #5 playtime with all.
Mr. Sullivan just not ready for him yet.
But more emphasis on healing love, love & acceptances by all!
I wish you luck!
Thanks for these stories!

Pardon my french

Great read, nice story, but please, if Marie is french let her french be correct. Mon amies should be Mes amis, Certainemant should be Certainement, etc. But hey, french is not your mothertongue and this comment comes from a guy who lives in France.

Loved the build up and setting.
I'd love to see more of these characters ! Johan

Fav author

You are by far my favorite author as I keep coming back
to read your stories. My only complaint is that just as the
the story is really getting good, it's over. Please keep
submitting stories though 'cause you have such an amazing
imagination!!

I'd love to see a description of Gavin: dark hair? hairy chest or abs or pubes?

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback! I will be adding more soon!

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