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Yeah I blew that

After the fact name change. Thanks.

Great story - Felt like I was there!

Wow……..what a fun story! Very erotic descriptions!

Very well written

Chapters need to be longer, or more frequent. Very hot!

Third paragraph -

"She Tannisly sat down, ..." - what the heck is that supposed to mean??
Is this how much attention you paid to Proof Reading?
With such a glarinmg example I didn't bother reading any further!
Who knows, could have been a prizewinning story but because even you didn't pay much attention to it why should anyone else??
Personally I was generous - 2*

didn't deserve it

I gave this story a five star because I wish to be encouraging and not negative. But it by no means earned the stars. Anne is rather bitchy. It is really her idea to swing, but her idea is all for her. It isn't ok for him to partake. He knuckles-under to keep the peace and because she threatens bodily harm if he leaves her, but he is the peacekeeper. There is definitely a double standard in this couple's life. The sex, of course, and the 'bring your cheque card'. Not 'their' card and not her card, but his. And the episode with Mina was unnecessary. There was a cultural difference that was apparent and Anne ignored that to get huffy.

very very hotm

I loved the concept... if it only really happened like that.. keep up the great work............................

At least...

At least that was the life they have chosen...And both were equal partners in "crime"...However I think this is "group sex"...3*

Yup, a few typos

Do a spelling and grammar check next time.

But the story was cute... A fun and sexy take on an overdone theme. I enjoyed it!

Lol

This was pretty good tbh

Grammar Whine Moment

cliché = a phrase or opinion that is overused and betrays a lack of original thought.

clique = a small group of people, with shared interests or other features in common, who spend time together and do not readily allow others to join them.

i have just re-read the whole series again for the 3rd or 4th time ,i love it and i hope you continue with it .

penis and clitoris

Charly apparently has both ovaries and testicles although the testes are not described. (S)he both ejaculated and secreted vaginal fluid.

A hermaphrodite does not have both a penis and a clitoris. These come from the same tissue. A pens is present in the place of the clitoris.

Most hermaphrodites have either ovaries or testicles (pseudohermaphrodite), the 'penis' can accomplish penetration of the vagina with an orgasm but s(he) does not ejaculate or s(he) ejaculates but the vaginal walls secretes only minimal lubricant.

The presence of a penis and a clitoris on the same person is relatively small.

Story still a 5.

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great story

This is a great story and I cannot wait until next chapter.

Started well........................

............but turned to shit when group sex started. Should have gone in to group sex to start with, NOT Romance, then my time would not have been wasted.
BTW Chapter 2 is missing!
Perhaps just as well.

Did ...

... you go to school?
Did you actually attend any English lessons?

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