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WHERE'S THE SMUT?

Did you forget something?

sad

doesnt make it hot to have a young damaged girl hurt even more by a heartless asshole could have had a mentally healthy girl do this with a guy who cared or even one she knew was an asshole actually hotter to get a normal girl to do this then a damaged submissive one sad people dont get that

Love It!!

I worked at a haunted house many years ago and while we lived in a small town we still had a local college nearby that we had loads of fun with. Really enjoyed this story!!

What a crock of poo. Her husband was away fighting for us and she moves another man into his house,his bed and Fuchs him for over a year . She then takes his children to Canada for Christmas and is awarded a place in his family.Then swears his children to secrecy. I don't know about you but that women needed to be dumped in the gutter.Then the shower scene,her giving him oral,all I could think of was how often had she done that for frenchie. I would never have kissed her on the mouth much less have sex with her.This could never have been forgotten.

issues

1. if she fucked sucked 12 on her bday basically a train there
2. if she is 21 and he is older they dont go to school with a principal

THIS STORY WAS NOT GROUP

THIS STORY WAS RAPE. THE FACT THAT SHE WOND UP LIKING IT IN THE END IS BULL SHIT IT STARTED OUT AS PURE RAPE AND BLACKMAIL. THERE IS KNOW OTHER WAY TO PUT OR SAY IT. IT IS WHAT IT IS.

Really nice

You did a great job of describing the events from the physical standpoint, but also showed us what you were feeling so very nicely. Well done! J.

SHOULD HAVE DONE CLEANUP ON ALL HOLES AND HER BODY

Become her cuckold pump and eat all that com. YUM YUM YUM

Thanks!

Just wanted to say thanks for all the lovely comments! I'm playing with an idea for a sequel, so keep your eyes peeled for more on Jess and Co.

It would of been a 5 if she returned the favor.

Just unfair...

I wish there was some way that I could give this story (say) 38 stars instead of the five were limited to.

I'd been away from Literotica for a good while (stories seemed to have stagnated, pretty much repeats of tales that had been posted for years, etc). Thank you maddiebarry for restoring my faith in this site. Keep the good work (as well as my penis) up...

I need part two

Major female blue balls here...

Excellent

Very hot, very realistic, well written. I like the way it ended, that was very realistic too. On a side note, I've been to Aruba too, its fabulous.

Almost didn't read this.

I want to write like this someday. Yes the sex was great, but it was the presentation the writing, that got me excited. Well Done, but I'm sure you've heard that before.

Absolutely supurb writing

Every now and then I find a wonderful story buried in LE. I enjoyed it immensely

Chilley

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