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Well written

All 4 of the chapters that I've read are really well-developed and easy reading. The descriptive terms for most of the "antics" were constructed IAW good English grammar. Looking forward to more.

Loved it!!

Great story!! Can't wait to read more from you!!

Fab

Great Story keep them coming

5*

Good story, real photos of a beautiful woman . Thanks!

YES, HOPE MORE STORIES ARE CUMMING!!!

Please write the Threesome and Orgy stories. And how about one with the author pegging Mom and daughter and also fucking Ocean?!!! GREAT writing and GREAT illustrations!!! MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEE!!!

I'm pleased

Yes my slut queen, you have pleased me and I will show how much very soon.

Loved your chapter Master you know how *wet* it made me reading it

Lost weekend

In answer to your question search Rebeccasm in search for members. We are writing this story together. She has posted chapters 7-12. You will find your answers there.

Total slutification

I love your story. Each chapter is an absolute winner, this last one included.
Please keep it going!

the missing weekend

what happen at the weekend with Julie and the parents.

Another amazing chapter

This was another amazing chapter in this epic story. Don't neglect it so long.

Worth the wait

Great chapter. Cannot wait for the next one!

As always,

a good story, but disappointingly short. 2 pages, with "deleted scenes" and pictures... Leaves at least me feeling slightly cheated.

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