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One of my favorites

I've always thought this story was one of the hottest I've ever read. Well written, too, as all of your stories are. Would love to read a new chapter if your up for it, even if it's been a long while since this story was first published.

Whata yadda yadda! Great story

Fun, at so many levels.
Please keep on keeping on with these.
Love the pics too. Terrific.


At this point it's more just having the TIME to work on anything. I work during the week, and by the time I come home working 10 hours a day, the last thing I want to do is sit in front of the computer and then it's only weekends I have time. And then I need to be in the mood. Writing is a hobby, so unless I'm in the right frame of mind, something else may take, work around the house, friends...whatever. But I don't plan on dropping's just where I can fit things in.

Currently I'm working on a commissioned (PAID) story, so that is my first priority at the moment...but Cerise still has a couple chapters I'll be adding...just no ETA...


would have been a whole lot better if the leges weren't so skinny. they look like bird legs.

Your model is just gorgeous.

My cunt was dripping yet I couldn't stop reading! Fantastic story.

Looking forward to the next chapter

hopefully you can use pics for the story, good luck

Well I liked it, but i really hope that if you do a next chapter that it will be better than the first, not that the first was bad, I just think that it could have had a big more ... Um that's it so yeah good story

Don't stop

Hey I love it but don't stop here by all means turn this into a series give it all you got tie up any loose ends and have fun

Not the best English and the pictures are unsuitable (you show us, while pussy licking and ass fucking scenes, pictures from a chick with naked breasts, that makes absolutely no sense).
Whatever, better than some other stories and I couldn't write better myself, 3/5 stars.


Would really like a follow up to this story with more nude and sexy pictures of Vanessa, maybe even with another woman similarly attired.

Sorry I forgot to tell you my preference.

Daughter's Initiation into Seduction, is the way I would like to go, but please include Beth, Katie and the other girls in it.
Just love your "WICKED" mind.

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