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Excellent erotic theme of cumming attractions.

***** Five stars. The story was a masterpiece. All the intensity of the sensuous combination of a hot beautiful transvestite bitch with luscious titties and a long cock. The two kissed and sucked each other with complete abandonment. I was thrilled with the way the story went.


what a great story really enjoyed reading it. such a good writer keep up your great work


A truly hot story. I couldn't keep my hands off of my cock and balls


As someone who loves playing Skyrim daily since 2011, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I hope you write more.

wonderful story. I wish I could be in her place. can't wait for the next chapter.

Hope this one continues

I'd like to see them start ticking things off their bucket lists if there are followups. Always great writing, thank you!


Ten stars!

A couple of illustrations of Marcus would have been great, maybe we will get to see him in fully feminised form only.

Loving it!

This series is great, I can't wait to see how their kids get fully involved and wouldn't mind seeing Ms Wilson get knocked down a notch or two!

Hot, Hot Story

You two have made my day once again. I love this story and do hope you continue writing and showing what is going on. Adding more individuals to the mix is great. Maybe not for Jesse, but for everyone else.
Rebecca you are the best with the art work and Sadkins, you are one hell of a writer.
Please don't stop!!!
A great thank you for the great story!!!

Longing for more

Your doing a great job both of you, I am so wet after reading this wishing I could be in her shoes for the poker game. Being a total submissive myself to be her would feed my body and soul also my sublife.
Your submissive fan

new chapters

I was just informed that the next chapter will be posted on March 3rd, We are both are very happy you're enjoying the series.


Another success

I realize you wrote all of these some time ago, and that they are being posted gradually, so it's rather pointless now to say this, but I was hoping for some more of Kevin and the cheerleader. Maybe that will appear in Chapter 9, along with Mrs. Wilson begin turned? Anyway, this was yet another enjoyable installment, and as always, although I do not take it for granted, great art work!


Great seduction great graphicss please keep this going

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