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An Erotic Masterpiece!

OMG! I had a hard time breathing when reading this story and it took me forever to finish it. By the time Kal carried Sara off to his bed I had already come twice! So I had to take a break and come back later. Even then it didn't take long again - I came repeatedly and that has never, ever happened before. It is an amazing story, the best I have ever read. It's so romantic it made me dizzy and so sexy, too. Thank you!

I won't bore you with the grisly details

But you did. Where's the sex. Come on. Know your audience and write for them. You're not, you know.

I think the sex here was an afterthought

Sorry, I don't usually bother with critical reviews but this was just bad. Badly thought out, badly written. It's like the sex was an afterthought on the end of some long racist diatribe. And the sex was pretty badly written too. I think you need to go back to the drawing board here my friend. Entertaining, not. Sexy, not. Stroke story, not. Epic racist rant - you got that one nailed down but that's not what we come here to read, unless it REALLY fits in with the plot. Here, it has absolutely nothing to do with the sex.

@ spankthis

I was writing Ryan in my head long before I met the 'real' guy. Sometimes life gives you what you want and what you need at the same time. :-)

@ brijeon

Thank you for your comment. My goal is to finish a story before I start posting, with only some editing to do. That's much easier than to run up against writers block in the middle of the story or to lose interest in it and never finish. I've read too many stories that were never finished and know how frustrating that can be. Again, thank you for your comments. Hopefully, I'll be able to put something up before the year is out.

Thanks, Anonymous! It's always especially gratifying to hear that one of my stories had a strong emotional effect on a reader, so I really appreciate you taking the time to write in. I'll cross my fingers for you to find someone who can make the fantasy real!

Based only on the story...

...too brief and no real detail regarding the story, but apparent stabs at racial groups that only appears random and distasteful. Government commentary again, with irrelevant social commentary that doesn't add to the story. Awful.

Yay an update!

Great update, just wished it was longer. Keaton don't know when to quit.

FANTASTIC STORY - more YOU MUST CONTINUE

Absolutely fantastic story, you have to continue with more chapters, let's see what's install for Janet & her daughter Sophie.

Oh Wow!!!

All I can say is:
http://media3.giphy.com/media/tDuG8eSRaV356/20 0w.gif

WE need more if this story , Please!!

Most white men would love a women like Jackie for a wife !! please write more!!

on

Awesome stuff.

As somebody who has a huge thing for cum inflation, but isn't into furries, tentacles, or guy/guy, your work is a god-send. I know this is a niche interest, but you're making at least one anon very happy. Keep up the good work

Keep writing. .....

.... as this story has a lot of potential. As for anonymous. Clearly you did not read any of the story, because if you had, you would have notice it's about a sexy white man & a gorgeous black woman who happens to like same sexy white man with one arm! Do you really think every person who falls in love with an amputee has a fetish? How shallow can you be!!

Keep writing. .....

.... as this story has a lot of potential. As for anonymous. Clearly you did not read any of the story, because if you had, you would have notice it's about a sexy white man & a gorgeous black woman who happens to like same sexy white man with one arm! Do you really think every person who falls in love with an amputee has a fetish? How shallow can you be!!

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