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policywank is a DUMB CUNT and a WHORE. she belongs in an ISIS whorehouse. that'd teach her! Rate accordingly!

so hot

this was exactly what i was looking for thank you omg so good i love that every time she thinks she's finally getting away with the better option he switches up and gives her something worse ;) jeez. thank you.

Gentlemen, gentlemen...

I am presuming that the anonymous protesters are all gentleman. A twist in the tale does not neccesarily mean the denial of Big boobs and fine ass winning the stud. It means doing something different to the norm. Talkman's narrative has swung between the flat chested wife being cruelly rejected to the witless wife being kept unaware of the illicit sex.

Time to experiment and I believe Talkman has the talent to do it. Perhaps the stud could have his cake and eat it too? Rough sex with the big tits and intellectual stimulation ( not to speak of the big bucks) with the wife. Man, especially a hunky one, cannot live by sex alone.

In any case, let us wait fir a few more days and see what Talkman presents to his readers.

More!!

I love your story. I can't wait till you add more hopefully it's soon.

Finally, new chapter! The storyline is still the best. Keep it up!

Warder's POV

Really looking forward to see things from his side. He is always so terse yet emotional would love to know what he is feeling and thinking.

Still loving it, still can't wait for more!

I really, really, REALLY hope that Lucy doesn't lose her fight, that even though they are now mated she continues to resist him. His line - 'He loved her. He would protect her. She would obey.' - gives me tingles of anticipation for instances of future 'disobedience.'

Good, but would be better if it were longer

I'm a switch, so gender reversed or not, your work appeals to me to the same degree. What I notice is that I enjoy your longer pieces with more world building and plot like Hope and The First Megami more than your shorter work. You have this bizarre world with all this interesting, crazy sex magic. I like the stories that show more of, and more about that broader world you have imagined.

Very dark

This one was good. Darker than I have seen in a while. I think Lit owner must be cracking down or something with more rigid guidelines. Another fave author of mine could not get their work, which was less extreme than this by far, approved. Where do they draw the line? I liked this story a lot, but it's interesting to see some of this, and have some more innocent get rejected. Super hot, but super wrong. I say, keep writing. Just not too much blood please.

I hate raoe stories were niggers do rape

I hate rape stories were niggers rape white women. They should keep raping their nigger woman that no white man likes anyway.

On its way

Thanks everybody for your words of encouragement. I could use them. Getting my wheels a bit stuck in the mud on the next chapter. I know where I want to end up, but the transitions are a tad tricky. Hang tight, and I will submit another soon. I want it to be longer and more, ahem, climactic. ;)

Come on GrantLee! You're my favorite writer on this site & love your Using Jill stories. Why is it taking so long for you to continue writing the next chapter? Are you ill, on a long vacation or dead? Let your fans know? We're anxiously waiting!!! OK?

Wow!

This is the best story I've read in literotica.

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