I loved the story, I hope you continue it.
You haven't thought that after the punishment that Miss Debbie gave him, putting him in a small chastity cage and that only Miss Bridget has the key... for now.

Very interesting that commenters who claim to have so many problems with this story also happen to return, chapter after chapter...if you find it so frustrating, why do you keep reading? Move on...there are so many stories on this site that might be more to your liking, and will not prompt such disappointment.

I was working on a follow on. I just don’t know if I should post. I have her getting brutally killed. Not sure that is within guidelines.

I like your writing. I cannot remember how I found your story but I will keep reading.

Not horribly written, but it does lack creativity. Any girlfriend who agrees to sleep in another man’s bed while her boyfriend is in their room down the hall, you basically already know how it’ll end. The story also has the same plot as most of the other cuck stories: hot girl dating a weak guy and she meets/knows a hot/ not hot guy who is a-hole and makes sexual references to hot girl. She turns him down but eventually discovers the guy has a big package while the boyfriend is out of shape with a small package. Then hot girl eventually gives in and has sex with said guy.

Well, what happens after about 10 years or so? Or maybe 20? Will she still be in demand or will she be a used whore on the streets? Maybe write an epilogue what happens later?

"The taste wasn't... awful..." Right. That says it all about this story.

Why does this story start the way it does? That is never answered. Nor is any trace of "non-consent" detected in this story, which is mysteriously placed in this category.

Anxiously waiting for Part 3!!!!

Does Olga ever pretend to fall in love with the slaves she is training as a way to mess with their heads? It's maybe a way to manipulate them and encourage obedience, especially if she wants someone who will spy on the other slaves for her. Not sure if that works in the current story, but it seems like she has doubts about the way Finley is being trained

I read this story a long time ago and it made my cock so hard I had to try it with my wife and the cunt went for it thinking we were going to loos our home she sucked and fucked a black friend of mine for two months to keep our home. I got a ton of video of it she was so hot and sexy with his black cock in all her sluty holes.

Made my pussy so wet

I notice there are a lot of people who know exactly how this story should be written....

How about if you all just write your own story about someone experiencing the Turnons app, instead of hi-jacking the authors' own story ? That way, you can make your story go in your own direction.

I'm all for the authors right to decide the story on their own.

I read both parts 1 and 2, combined it was a good story with a nice hook in part to to read further, so it 5 got stars. First: here's my "open towel" profile: 51, divorced blue-eyed brunette, 5'6", a tad chubby, nice tits or so I hear from my students, athletic with a nicely trimmed landing strip for you. Us? We were college sweethearts but just outgrew each other, ah also he took up with a younger woman; we have two kids in college but can still communicate. Well I wasn't raped but one of my sons HS friends got a little frisky in the pool, he'd get alot further today. As for Lit, I like reading many different, even odd and random spin stories, but I got tired of extreme comments when I had a few flings prior to our divorce so dropped out. I'll read more of your works another time. A-Z

I am all for constructive criticism. However, please learn that you don't have to talk down to someone to inform them of their mistake.