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shit

god well writen ... very true and heartfelt ... im trying not to puke... i feel uneasy in my stomach my head spinning trying to wrap around your poem the longer i think about it the more sick i feel... abuse

But Senna:

Where is Politics in a Lonely White Multi millionnaire shooting dead strangers with a legal gun ' bumped' up to semi-automatic status vide a ' legal' loophole???!!!!
Poetically i guess i'm zilch as 12-oh-1 has repeated to me ad nauseum ......no hard feelings ...........OM

Zero politically, zero poetically...

...just silly empty posturing of no consequence. Oh, well, regards (no bad feelings :) ).

Amazing

That is just amazing. I've known someone for whom your words are true, but thankfully I've not faced it myself. I'm truly sorry for your loss, but thankful for your eloquence.

I can relate to your pain, except, the people I loved are there when I close my eyes. Thank you for sharing with us

A quiet requiem

I missed this, gm - it is powerful and sad and beautiful. That single word on the last line is the perfect ending.

A 1ST SIGHT SYNDROME

lets see what in life happens\ TK U MLJ LV NV

This is one of my biggest fears. I hope this isn't based on experience for you.

A GRUELING SEARCH BY AN INDIGENT

for a better tomorrow sans hope, TK U MLJ LV NV

Very thought provoking, Champ. Isaiah, the prophet, seems to be alluding to contemporary western civilization in the last stanza, or at least that’s what I thought of as I read it.

Thank you God

This is a wonderful poem. If only more of us were this brave.

Hands and Feet

I Like this, so much like real life. However, I have to wonder how many guys are aware of how sexy hands and feet are? I personally love to watch them.

WHY HIRE A DOMESTIC

when you have a full time valet, TK U MLJ LV NV

Excellent

great verses with wit and humour too - what more to ask for

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