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So True....

I know what you mean it seems like every time that I make a comment about how horrible War really is; I even go as far as saying that War is UNprofitable. And how disgusting it is I get eaten alive, bullied into thinking I’m worse than Hitler himself. And just short of the devil. I believe that if we did not have War we would be one giant step closer towards peace and making this earth as close to heaven as we can. After all let’s face it War is basically Revenge a large scale. Please no mare let’s not do it. And let’s be better than that. I know for a fact that humans are better than that. After all haven’t humans evolved enough to the point where we could resolve our deference’s and problems peacefully, after all it is depicted in movies and TV shows all the time. Such as in Star Trek and all of the Superman adaptations. I was wrong (no surprise). In the words of Ben (Obi-Wan) Kenobi: So uncivilized. I though humans evolved more than just looks but once again I was wrong. And finally it’s not just War comments it also seems that no matter what kind of comments I try to make I always get burned at the stake just after being crucified.

author's funny place

boy did this come out wrong.
i was drunk when i typed this and i'm more so now.
the courage that could only come in poison finds remorse.
there is this very small box and you wonder if they're reading it even a little bit while you're typing into it.
see those *
they're meant to denote single letter spaces. i meant to tell Lit. but i was drunk. like DRUNK. did i type that? i think i did.
that @ symbol was something i've been struggling with in the 11 years since i wrote this. there are 2 'content's in the english language. i told Lit, flip a coin. which to italicize? in the context there it could be either/both. 'content content'. content in the content. when they're side by side, right? but this is where the numb brown journey led me.
the words have their own music and magic and truth.
in the end we can only reach for brown, the color where all other colors become one. brown, the final color.
and pray that every language will become one.
and that we'll fade into ONE and understand eachother.
but that's a few poems away.
maybe never.
this is crazy talk.
the joy of crazy.
there is a time for shut-up.

Nice...

I like it. It's evocative and flows well.

new best friends are hard to find

THEIR LOCATION IS ALWAYS OF MIND, tk u mlj lv nv

Making New Friend...

It is strange that I happen to read this poem on the day that I might have made a possible new friend on the internet via email. And I tell you the same thing I told her, making new friends on the internet maybe risky but in the end the risk could be worth it. Because by making friends over the internet you could share your similarities and learn from one another of what is deferent. Plus friendship is the first step towards love. I believe that it is also so powerful that it can conquer any and all hate. And misunderstanding. Just think of what this would be like instead of terror attacks and wars every one tried there best to learn from each other instead. MAKE LOVE AND FRINDSHIP NOT WAR!!

Try Try Again.....

It’s Ok to fail just as long as we learn from our mistakes. After all I’m not sure if this fits but, Rome wasn’t built in a day.

What A mother should be....,

As I was reading this poem I was thinking about my favorite childhood book, ‘Love You Forever’ about a mother whom always loves her child uncondesonally, no matter what that child did growing up. And I think that is what all mothers should be. And not whores or drug addicts.

Inspiring Happiness

Exceptionally written with truth.

We All Sin...No One Is Sinless....

I’m sorry this ‘poem’ sounds more like a war speech than a ‘poem’

It’s Like This Poem Was Written For Me..... Think You....

I can relate it’s like just a moment of peace is that too much to ask? I feel as though a certain deity refused to help me, and he is the one that is holding that dangling rope. I just wished I knew what did I do or didn’t do to piss him off so much either in this life or in the previous one, and I would also like to know what fucked up plan I fit in. I’m sick of his shit. Ever seen the first Toy Story? And ever heard of Sid Myers?

10/10 Stars

Beware blithe silent smiles

b.....b.........s.........s.......
Alliterative last line : 5-ed.

Very poignant

& as Mer said touching : 5-ed .

A brimful

An image, a vignette - I like it a lot. Welcome, new (at least to me) poet. Come join us in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum.

Very touching

This is so gentle, so light. The contrast between the beginning and the end.
Just lovely, GP.
(And I assume 'remembers' is purposeful dialect, not a typo? Either way, it does not detract - just made me stop and think again about a weakened, tremulous voice.)

Should Have Lestened To Creed Instead....

Just kidding, I don't condon suicide at all. The phrase: "DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!!" has necver been more fitting. In fact I'll even go as far as to say, that I see everyone that is either thinking about it or attempt it or even has gone through with it a COWARD. I know becouse belive it or not I've been there and wasn't proud of it. But I am proud of the fact that I am survivor of it. While I was in high school each day at school I would attempt to climb those steps, which leads to the roof of my school and jump. But each time that I did that I got scared becouse I know tha is the wrong move, and I also know the consqences of my stupid move.

WHAT'S DONE IS DONE, THERE'S NO TURNING BACK. THIS IS NOT A VIDEO GAME WHERE YOU CAN JUST HIT THE RESET AND START OVER!! SO PLEASE THINK ABOUT YOUR ACTIONS AND THE CONQENCES BEFORE YOU MAKE THEM.

After all the reality is you're NOT A GOD OR GODDESS YOUR NOT INVENCEABLE AND YOU DO NOT HAVE MULTIPUL LIVES.

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