God I was so sad when there are only 4. These are an awesome read. Please put more. I can't wait for the next part.
Keep it coming. It doesn't matter about chapter length as long as the story keeps coming at a pace that keeps everyone interested. I know that you are looking for an editor, but some of those issues can be solved by looking the information up on the internet. For example, use of "me" or "I" and correct use of "their," "there," and "they're. Your work is really appreciated! We all look forward to the next chapter.
I fucking love this story😆😂😭😍😘 I just faved you as an author because you are awesome!
is actually one of the sweetest guys ever. very hot story, but I just loved the dialogue.
Trust your instincts about your chapter lengths. I think they're just right to keep us coming back for more.
Thank you so much! It means a lot to hear how much you're enjoying it! :)
I like to have women in my stories that aren't completely useless in difficult situations. With Lucienne, I deliberately wanted her to be more direct and no nonsense as her natural state, but still able to flex to those moments that might require more subtlety. Also, considering Michael's position in his world, partnering him with someone prone to histrionics would only give him yet another thing he'd have to manage. lol
Thank you so much! I really try hard to keep the entire story strong and not lose it in the end. I'm so happy to hear that it kept its promise throughout - that means a great deal to me. Thank you! :)
lol - thank you! I hate spoilers myself, so I try not to give away more than necessary as I write. Besides, it's a lot more fun if everyone's guessing ;)
Thank you all for your comments and votes - you guys are all awesome! Also just another note for anyone that doesn't yet know - I post chapters on Wattpad first.
Just a head's up - Scarred might be the last story I post on lit simply due to formatting and posting difficulty. I haven't decided 100% yet, but it's a distinct possibility and I wanted to give you all a warning about that.
@Anonymous - Thank you so much! I've put a lot of thought into my world, and I'm so happy to hear others enjoy it! :)
@Iread2relax - Thank you! I appreciate you voting and commenting on both sites! :)
@LilMissNerd1 - lol! Thank you so much! I have to say that as the writer, I'm happy that problem exists, even though as a reader, I know how frustrating it can be. :) Also just so you know, I'll probably be removing Something New/Dragon Touched from this site before I remove it on Watt, since I have to get the mods to do it here, while it's under my control on Watt. I was actually going to submit a request, but I'll hold off a bit longer. :)
@CalyPy - Thank you and thank you also for dropping by and supporting the story on both sites! I very much appreciate it! :)
@cantfightfate - Thank you so much for voting on both sites! I'm glad to be back as well :)
@LarveeJ - Thank you! I'm so happy to hear that my descriptions and plots draw folks in. I try very hard to make sure the story runs logically and with a sense of realness in the characters (not that I don't mess that up from time to time lol). I'm so happy that the way I see it all in my head is translating when I write! :)
Chapter length is Fine. The only reason you have to read so many complaints of short chapters is that people just want to keep reading your story.
SHUT UP ABOUT SHORT CHAPTERS AND ENJOY, PLEBS!
Hey! You! De Swardt! Hehe. Sorry, it was just too tempting.
Finishing stories gets you more sex. Especially if you tend to come up with brilliant ideas like role-playing them, as you said you do.......doG, I wish I could catch my neighbour. Fucking fast little bugger, Anyhoooo. Gonna read some more of your stories now.
About how Eric wanted Cassie to grab his cock, but she grabbed the keys instead. Then, how sheepish he felt after biting Cassie. But I most chuckled about the hair in the drain - not really important when you're turning into a werewolf, but in the practical world, a big problem. Too much hair leads to a clog in the drain - and that's not pleasant to fix. And throughout all of this, they're still endearing. Very enjoyable.
Loved the story line and the characters, just wish it was longer. Would have loved to know what you would have done with Jude and Dresden. Hope to read more of your stories soon.
I just found these stories and read them all to this point.
I'm sorry this one was never finished and there aren't more of them.
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