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Awesome!
All Comments/ReplyNice one. Still, not knowing what happened to her leaves a small hole in the story for me. 4 stars.
All Comments/ReplyOmg. I can't wait for this to continue.
All Comments/ReplyBy definition, this certainly belongs in Loving Wives. I suspect many will disagree, since this category has gone almost entirely to the dark side in recent years.
All Comments/ReplyGoing through her stuff was out of order. Talk about no personal boundaries.
All Comments/ReplyWell done, they have some stories to share in their old age.5*
All Comments/ReplyReally quite excellent. Thank you for sharing it in Loving Wives (I would never have read it in Romance).
All Comments/ReplyThis was an impressive read, a really enjoyable story⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
All Comments/ReplyI see 69 in the near future
All Comments/ReplyLoved it!
All Comments/ReplyI'm worried this is a "one and done" author. Worried because this was one of the better fantasy stories I've read here and I would very much love to read more from this author. If you ever see this, come back and write more please. In any format, you've got serious skill. Saved to...
All Comments/ReplyHuh....she put horns on her hubby...
as it's all fantasy of course the smell would be gone by time their spouses got back...
All Comments/ReplyThe delusional time travel brain farts were painful to read. Sorry! I wish authors would put stuff like that, or full song lyrics they're compelled to foist on us via the story, in italics. It's just easier to skip.
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All Comments/ReplyExcellent
All Comments/ReplyPretty solid story. Note that getting a cheating stbxw or stbxh sacked is stupid, harms your settlement terms big time. wait til after the divorce.
All Comments/ReplyVery nicely done, Fredo. Sheena was definitely Queen of the Bill Jungle. Sorry, five's the best I can do.
All Comments/ReplyA good first story. I like how you put your emotions into the sex scenes. I don’t mind the ending, but it needs a bit more if you are going for a followup. Also I thought it was your room not his. Keep writing enjoyed it.
All Comments/Reply4 stars and I hate practical jokes. Jokes always hurt or embarrass someone. It's no joke to the person being played. Well written and mildly humorous as divorce is no joke either. Our author did a good job dealing with a sad situation.
All Comments/ReplyThe only problem I have with the story is dad should have been at the family table. Wife and parents at the friends table.
All Comments/ReplyGreat story! Looking forward to part 2.
All Comments/ReplyWhat a wonderful take on one of my favorite movies, "Somewhere in Time." The use of the Rolls was brilliant! It was so well-paced and beautifully descriptive, that I found myself right there. This has to be one of my favorite stories of all time on LIT.
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All Comments/Replyso hot, the ending feels rushed
All Comments/ReplyGood series had something for everyone in it. Thanks for sharing. Any more chapters coming???
All Comments/ReplyLike the originality of the storyline, and it seems there is another one going on in the comments.
Big Gov and Big Pharma in cahoots? Does anyone NOT believe that?
Back to the story, I am enjoying it.
All Comments/ReplyWell done,
All Comments/ReplyBetter and better!
All Comments/ReplyMaybe run it through grammarly. There are lots of spelling and punctuation errors that make it almost unreadable.
All Comments/ReplyThis is going to be one of my very favourite stories! Your writing is superb, the way you describe their daily activities, diving, swimming, lying on the beach, the photo shoot, sailing back from the Merc’s, the rough weather, the sex, brings back so many happy memories. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
All Comments/ReplyCan't wait for book 2. I don't know what direction you're planning to go with it, but I Ellis drops his horrid fiancee and asks out Carly instead.
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