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You more than made up for the unfortunate “cock snot” with “He landed a kiss on me like a right hook.”

Thanks for having your men be unabashedly hairy and for appreciating each other’s masculine smells.

Nowhere near as good as your best stories

Dislike only because of the title and further reference to his mother aw a WHORE. She wasn't and never had been. She got accidently stoned on shit that her asshole son made. The same asshole son who labeled her a "Whoremom"

Not cute or funny............

Someday maybe you'll take a creative writing course and learn how to FTDS. Until then spare us all and quit posting your crap on LW..maybe find a new hobby.

The love shared by a cuck and his slut is truly something special. Yes, indeed, it is fascinating how mental illness influences so many aspects of life.

lol... wow. Literotica supposedly moderates comments, but they approve all of the blatant troll crap. Why?

Keep up the good work, dude. Ignore the haters that only wish women would have sex with them.

All good except for the continuous threesome as they went to various destinations. Sharing her on Mykonos was fun, while traveling together and registering for one room on Santorini was carrying it a bit far. Doing the same the rest of the vacation in more locations was over the top...

Lovely, if too long.

LOVE this story! It has the perfect amount of kink to keep it feeling realistic! I keep hoping for a CH 3.... that one last part that has Chris admitting to his desire to breed Autumn just as much as she wants to be bred! So hot....

Great QT story, 5 stars. Love the characters and poking fun at each other. One question how tall is tull?

Thank you Sir, This is a wonderful story. i am a 60 y/o white boi that wishes i could have lived this story.

A cliched nightmare. The upside is that it was just two pages.

A great fairy tale!

Excellent ending. I was hoping he would take a header off the balcony on the 15th floor but this works as well.

A good start, aside from WAY too many word tense and grammatical errors.

There was barely any foreplay.

Could use a 2nd chapter.

Somewhat of a good ending but not a surprise ending. Not a complete ending but leaves room for more.

Truly, profoundly awful.

One of the best sorority hazing stories I have ever read. There is still the next three weeks we need to hear about, But please do it as a chapter two and not change the tittle. then after the three weeks we need to hear about the "Back to nature" trip. so we are looking at least...

How stupid can a man be? He let's Bill Grant run his life. No wonder his wife's screwing around on him. Anybody but me ever wonder why normal men don't write stories?

I’ve come to the conclusion that I enjoy your stories but ultimately the mc’s always sort of deserve what happens to them. I mean there are so many signs not to get married, yet they sacrifice themselves just to simp a wee bit longer. This one though, I really didn’t think Anna was...

Very good story plot of interracial desires and passion yo to a poetic raw sensations. Will there be a part 2 of this ongoing lust

Mark can stand up for himself by insisting that Dylan stop cuming inside Chelsea, citing the pregnancy risk. Maybe Mark realizes that this arrangement is putting his future linage at risk and that spurs him to action. Maybe Dylan listens for a bit at the request of Chelsea...until...

Another great story from you! You must keep up writing these stories.

Good story but could have done without Anna at the end. It was not believable that she became strictly into women. In real life she would end up cheating like before. It's like most of the writers on here throw out a last minute lesbian romance in a lot of the stories that just are...

That's the silly thing about these stories: a NORMAL man discovers them, gets evidence, and tosses the trash out of the house that day. Boom! End of story! -30-

will you finish (THE LADY IN RED) you stopped in 2019 you have readers who are looking for it PLEASE FINISH IT The story is very good Thank You ZEZK 7474

it was a good story but i only scored it 2*. I felt the story was incomplete and a waste of good reading time because it was incomplete.

It was obvious that it was her husband in the washroom.

However, quite a good story although she seemed a bit dim.

One of my favorites.

One thing that I noticed is that virtually every major character in previous shack stories makes an appearance, either in person or at least by way of a reference (whether direct or indirect). Even Delaney's car is named after a character from an earlier story....

I love the early sister stuff, the exploring and excitement of new feelings and sensations. Awesome sister! I hope to read more!

Yeah.,..the gay sex ruined it….just plain awful

Man, sorry to say but I have to agree with a lot of the others here. You really put a huge millstone around Em's neck with how you made her this serial cheater for years and years. You basically set the hurdle way too high for her to ever come back from something like that and redeem...

What a wonderful story of a 'smart jock' who does really well by using his brain. Hope for him?

Thanks I appreciate the support.

Lost me on the first page. MMC crying. Debbie telling him to join his cheating wife in therapy. Nah.