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Just Fuckin Hilarious

You earned five stars from me by the third paragraph on the strength of the imaginative premise alone. Humor stories are the hardest write well. Kudos to you.


I couldn't put it down. I really enjoyed it. I would love to have a sequel.

Great Story!

Twin Daughters Has To Be One Of THE Best Outcomes Of Competition!

Someone else in MY bed??

Hell no. They both get tossed out on the lawn. No clothing, nothing. Not on my bed.

Very funny

LMAO, Nate! My tongue almost poked through my cheek, but luckily I'm impenetrable. (I'm flattered, really!) And I kind of want what Hermey was having there at the end.
Very well done, though I laughed even harder at your Halloween offering. :rose:

Light hearted humor in our own backyard!

I laughed and smiled so much when I read this. Reading about people we know in a very light hearted way was very fun and refreshing. This is well written, easy to read and since it involves people from lit, makes it much more enjoyable. I would recoomend this for people who need a laugh.

The language is ebonics

And that's what niggers speak.you can send them to school for 12years and they still read like a7 year old,if they can play ball (they're allowed to go to college 4more years even though they're illiterate)in the end Ebonics be all they have.Rastus, you gotta love it.


I quit editing because of authors like Mary Brown.

I am rolling around on my floor laughing so hard right now!


Is the only remotely likeable and interesting character in your story.
His family and friends are vanilla erotica except for their innate well pictured shallowness.
I really hope you find him the right companion at some point.
It would be nice if someone like him can remain true to himself as well.

Personification at its best.

Wonderfully done. Many try but few succeed with the disguise & play of words.
You're a great poker player, I presume.
An easy 5.

great story

What a great comic. And nothing gross or disgusting. I wish u would write some more on these lines. Keep it up.

Well played

I laughed out loud, Huck. I was disappointed when it ended so soon, but with comedy it's better that way.

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