Humor & Satire Comments

Good question!

Funniest story I've read since I was knee high to a toadstool!!

Wow! What a wonderfully imaginative story!

This really needs a part 2 with him writing a hot sex scene involving harnesses and upside down copulation on a rocky ledge overlooking the rim of an active volcano and just as they are getting to the climax there's a rumbling from the depths of the crater. He then gets the edited...

Second pathetic unfinnished story.

All I can say is... bro needed a better lawyer, like one that actually graduated from law school. There's no way that she gets her hands on his house or his inheritance or anything that he brought into the marriage, nor does he have to pay alimony for such a short term marriage. With...

Nice build up to a sarcastic closing! Goood

Amazing. The number of double entendres you got into a single story is nothing story of amazing. And I loved that he never got it. Even if in my head I'm frantically writing the explicit sequel where he does. Five stars!

Ughhh. That was greasy skeezy.

So who's car was it ?

Ha ha ha.

A semi in a semi. Finally, Greta wasn't quite great 😀

Very well done, brevity without sacrifice of story. More than a hint of Saki (H.H. Munro), with the droll nature of the ending.

OML

I’ve only read Terry Pratchett in translation, but this does feel very pratchett-y even too me, great work!

Fun, but Bob should have beat the hell out of Stan once the wife was normal size again and then used the shrink ray on him. Then let the cat chase him. Probably the only way Stan gets any pussy.

Not sure where I find the humour or satire.

Please keep this story going!!

Looking forward to more of their story. Nice job on this.

@Carnevil9, thank you for that wonderful comment: so glad you enjoyed it. Your sequel titles sound delightful... though I have often wondered about The Two Titties, or the Return of the Kink...

That's one fantasy I now have... :) *****

I do love Buck Lick and all the folks that live there!

5

This was incredible. I'd love to see the main character return to that idea of ass play. That part where he's so horny after his cock slaps his ass is soooo hot. With how big his cock's getting, it'd be incredible for him to concoct an experiment where he decides to fuck his own ass,...

Stil, the story was a bit contrived. However, it was Stil an enjoyable read. Four stars worth.

JPB NOT BOB

Dr beulahthemick; Brilliant, Terry would be proud, more please.

WHAT?? NOooo gratuitous sex? NO over the top, impossible sexual performances, completely outside the scope of human physiological potential? No nonessential nudity to distract the reader from lackadaisical literary skills? Just how? How in the world do you expect me to give this one...

5🌟 A shortcut to Sorcery?

Great update, great stoy. Would love more doctor stuff. I don't mind the rough stuff. Looking forward to Candi getting fucked soon.

I'd like the introduction of a man that Candi would enjoy being with.

The wit in this is spot on Pratchett. It was just zinger after zinger. Great imagination, great story!

Clever!

Tough category, but you did well.

🦧🦧🦧🦧🦧 (5 ooks). Well done — the spirit of Discworld lives on.

Damn, that was funny! And unexpected!

Very imaginative and well written. Ook!

Nice story, thanks for sharing…….

Awesome story! Best Tolkien parody I've read since Bored of the Rings. And ten times as naughty!

Now I will look forward to the sequels, The Desolation of Smegma, and The Battle of Five Undies.