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Really?

So, she goes to this place to save her marriage, which she now thinks she can do by talking to her husband about getting banged by someone else and going oral on her afterwards. There's a recipe for success. (sarcasm intentional)

@Rockin: Thanks for the feedback

Dear Rocking Right Along (Anonymous poster).

Thanks for the carefully thought out feedback. You are correct, the cheating didn't have anything to do with the core story, and I'll definitely keep things like this in mind in the future.

As to the reason for the cheating: I confess, the story is based on a real person (well, a real daydream about a real person), who happens to be married. So although all the background information and scenario has been changed up greatly, there really is an "Allison", we really have a playful banter between us as portrayed in the story, she's married, and the story is my daydream about her. So being married had some significance to me, but as you pointed out, not necessarily to readers.

So again, thanks. You've helped me become a better writer with your feedback. I realize you may never see this, but thanks anyway.

I agree with the other comments that another chapter is needed.

Enraptured

This was a wonderful portion of this story. I am glad that Mikel is going to spend the last night before they go out fishing with her and perhaps he will enter the so called sperm war. I will be waiting not so patiently to see. I thought that Sven taking Kirsty the way he did is probably the only way he knows how to cope around her since he can't seem to communicate with her about feelings. Bjorn seeing some of went on and chasing after Kirsty put and end to his needing time to deposit his sperm which is a plus for all concerned. Now Mikel just needs to get in on the real action and I think Kirsty will be quite content. Kirsty does need to get the feelings with Sven out in the open though. Keep this story and good quality of work coming and I don't think Kirsty will sneak aboard the boat.

Punishment...

Another wondrous chapter and we are left with a question of what is to be Alex's punishment. I personally would like to see edging come back in a big way. Make Alex wait as long as Gavin did ya know. Either way i am sure i will enjoy it. Looking forward to the next installment

And Then.......

What happened? Too well written to lweave us in mid-air. Let's have a followon chapter - please!

No dear, I love men. Well behaved men that is. ;)

Excellent

Please continue this story it is wonderful. I look forward to the next part.

Hot Story

Your owner has trained you very well. I love that he shared you with his best friend.Keep om writing.

Just keeps getting better!

This is such a great installment to this series!! I absolutely loved how you had Kirsty's last night be with Mikael, and am glad he is slowly opening himself to the relationship even more. I teared a little that she chose him. You divided each of the character's views perfectly!! Such a well done chapter! I enjoyed reading this so much; it made my day!
One request: Pretty please, do not make us wait long for the next one--I am so anxious to see how Mikael and Kirsty spend their night together, especially seeing how Mikael is now welcoming the idea of being even more intimate with her. Tehe!!
I am a little worried about Kirsty spending her time away from her husbands after such a short time of being acquainted with Petrine & her husband. Hopefully she does not go into town alone, or something like that and encounters some trouble. Although, trouble might have Sven open up to her more like the Petrine's husband after scurrying back from the sea? I wanna know! LOL
I cannot wait to see what your talent creates next!! Such an awesome story.

very nice

yes i became a sissy bitch house maid for a lady friend i was at her place and i was there to help her clean her house as i was cleaning i ask her what would you think if i wore a apron she look at me well it would be fine but i only have a old apron but it has a bra sew into it well it you like you take your shirt off i did as told then she put the apron on me then she look well it look fine but it need some thing she then went and got two fake breasts and put them in the bra cups there now that better as i work away i look in the mirror i look like a girl then she ask me to do her wash i said yes here wash my panties and bras by hand then as i was doing them i look at her blue panties ibut them up front of my pants under the apron she came in and saw this that when she ask look i know you would like to try them on but lets make a deal let me dress you up as a girl for the after noon it be just us here any ways i said yes i always want to try women clothes well that after noon i was a girl and i like it when supper time came she ask would i stray i said yes good then go have a shower and the cream soap you can use and then come to my room and we dress for dinner well after the shower i went to her and she dress me in a black bra and black lace pantie thong then nylons then a short skirt and white blouse you could see my bra and a pair of high heels then my hair and make up then she got dress the same way there we are ready to go out to dinner i told i can not go out like this yes you can look know one will care i said yes then well we went to a nice reasternd we sat down and a lady came over lady can i help you yes we have too coffee and to steak then a man said hello lady nice evening yes thank you we eat dinner and i had some water she hand me a pill here take this it help if you heart burn i toke the pill as we left the lady said good night girls come back soon once in the car she told me see know one knew you were a male i said no i ask her if i could do this again some time she said but you have to do some thing for me i told her what when we get home i want to see what you look in a nightie i said yes well after that night i was dress in a see thought nightie then she told me you will become my sissy bitch and slave soon you have tits like a girl just then she show me her dido cock and she shove it in my ass hole it hurt a bit soon i was begging her please keep me as your sissy bitch she said yes and now i am her sissy house bitch

More please,,,,,,

i look forward to reading the chapter where you use wimp and whore together..

FL kinky48186

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