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Loved it!

Loved it! Erotic gold!

Fatiana Rules!

Her Riding Crop Gives Amazing Pain to the Rich and Spoiled for a Change! Great Humiliation Story!

Love this

Love this story really want to see another chapter, as the previous comment I enjoyed the game most and would hope other similar games would be in future installments

please allow me the privilege to please you

Submissive curious male looking to be used contact me at pitpowder@yahoo.com

:)

Thank you all for reading!!

Well that was disgusting

Angry much? It sure seems like you hate women. Even for fiction this was poorly done. Badly conceived, dialogue written by a twelve year old and actions that made me laugh throughout. Did you even bother to re-read this? It was an example of truly horrible story telling, even for a fictional story.

Cool Story

This made me think a lot about my own fantasies and shows how deep trust is everything in BDSM.

Thank you for taking the time to upload this.

I loved this but...

This is really hot, although I'd replace master with mistress. Makes it less confusing. But either way I came really good from this

Yes, a rewrite

Most of the story hasn't changed, and the story's spelling and grammar were at a good standard before my rewrite, but I still felt it was needed. It was my first novel after all, and there were issues with my storycraft.

Most changes are in the pivotal third chapter and in the subsequent chapters 4 and 5. I'd recommend waiting for the rewrites to be posted. Otherwise you might be confused.

CaringAndDemanding

Yes, a rewrite

Most of the story hasn't changed, and the story's spelling and grammar were at a good standard before my rewrite, but I still felt it was needed. It was my first novel after all, and there were issues with my storycraft.

Most changes are in the pivotal third chapter and in the subsequent chapters 4 and 5. I'd recommend waiting for the rewrites to be posted. Otherwise you might be confused.

CaringAndDemanding

More!

Please tell us what happens at the ranch! She's only just started!

A rewrite?

I guess from the dates that this and Ch. 02 are rewrites and that there may be more, especially as chapters 3,4 and 5 aren't visible. I'm enjoying this a lot. I value the care for her well-being that informs it throughout. To date it isn't exploitive, it is loving and respectful and it shows the promise of being very exciting. I quite like the gentle pace: not a quick sprint to the finish. I can imagine becoming a little impatient if this pace is to be permanent. Thank you. Oh, thank you, too for accurate spelling and grammar. Errors are such a distraction, sometimes terminally.

re: name change

Oh dear! Sorry for that clumsiness and thank you for pointing out with the name, I guess there are limits to Word's Ctrl+F function after all. I have a number of stories I write in rotation with different characters and unfortunately sometimes I can be a little clumsy with keeping track. Still, it was a rookie mistake to make and I hope it won't happen again!

I will edit this out when I get the chance, thank you so much for the useful feedback, and it really helped me out!

Struggling

The best I like about this episode, is a young woman struggling with her sexuality. If someone supposes she is not straight, it is a process of denial, carefully probing ones mind, letting out feelers to trusted others and so on. It is all here and it is beautifully written.

rare in its story perfection

An incredibly rare instance of perspective story-telling by someone who is clearly in the know. All the right things and more!! Thank you.

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