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My dear linkznut;

You rapidly are becomng one of my favorite authors here on this site, and your Students Rule stories are one of the main reasons for that! Are you now, or have you ever actually been an employee at a high school? Your prose flows so well it makes me suspect you either once were, or still are an educator. Anyway , keep up the good work, and keep our juices flowing!!!

I really liked this story!

It was very well written and had some great scenes in it.

I especially loved the scene where you had her minister watching her masturbate at the sex club. (I was only in my teens when I was faced with one of my own ministers laughing about something somewhat similar. He was laughing about getting drunk or high every weekend and screwing around with various women; before stating that it was okay since he was baptized and went to church every Sunday, God forgave him).

Now, I truly enjoyed how Kelli’s character developed and could see how it could come about. However, I can’t buy the development of Jack’s character. At the beginning Jack was very hurt, disappointed and even angry at Kelli cheating on him. Besides redemption, he clearly wanted some revenge and maybe to get her to lighten up in regards to sex. But how did he come to enjoy watching her have sex with other people? How did he come to the point of arranging for her to have sex with other people? That seems to be a contradiction to who he was in the beginning.

Finally, to all those people criticizing this work... 1) if you don’t like reading about this subject, go to a different category, 2) I was always taught that if you had nothing good to say, you should say nothing at all and 3) if you dislike the stories you are reading, perhaps you should try writing some and see whether you could do any better.

Writing a good, complete story, with fully developed characters, is not as easy as it may seem!

@ Anonymous

There was a fair time gap since eating. Also, she didn't really gag that much, mostly due to an almost nonexistent gag reflex :D

So much more then literotica

This was incredible and so beautiful. Thank you

Very hot story

This is very hot. Hope you keep up the chapters.

Nice job with the ESP, but negative points for making him a Green Beret— a Merchant Mariner with a Navy Reserve commission should have put him on Seal Team 6! Also, I thought it strange that at their first sexual encounter he managed to get undressed twice... most of us have to have to get dressed before we remove our clothes a second time!

More more!

Please please make more like this daddy!
Ill be a good little girl i promise! I had such a big orgasm for such a little girl :)
Just for you!

Oh my lordie

This is sooo well written. I almost cried when i read the part about the crash. Please write more similar to this

Hugs!
Ashley Kat

I can't find an adjective sufficiently negative enough to describe this in terms of content. Technical writing is decent.

You seem to have a pattern.

You start a pretty good story, but stop before it's finished. What you wrote was good as far as it went.

That's it?

It was a good start, but really didn't go anywhere.

A bit of switch play.

So you were pissed off because she was inconsiderate of your time, with no reward but watching her ass move. You attempted to Dom the situation and reap some benefits. She played your game but occasionally took control. At the end of the night, you both won.

Sex play.

Not bad improvisation. Lots of spanky fun with a satisfying end result.

Amazing!

Wonderfully written and hot. Cuntface deserves every bit of what she got...

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