BDSM Comments

Load newRequesting new commentsRequesting new commentsNo new comments, try later

Latest 15 Reader Comments

Sigh

You write lovely prose, I could really see it working if not for the narrative issues.

Sadly Tobias continues to be abusive, continues to be in charge of her despite them both supposedly being punished with this sentence, still having no oversight, still punishing her for contrived reasons and against her will which sounds pretty non-con to me.

Whilst it was a bluff "I will call your probation officer to take you to jail for quiting the program" really caught me, why doesn't he have a probabtion officer, he seemed to be being punished too in the first chapter, I mean you go into it about his lawyer pleading guilty and saying he has control and anger issues. So what program is he talking about because he is one of the people supposedly being punished yet no probabtion officer for him? she knows this, the probation officer knows this, so why when she makes complaints about him are they ignored but if he made them they'd be listened too? I mean she is a lot scarier prospect to piss off what with her money and contacts and the ruin that she could cause to anyones career just by talking to the media let alone actually leveraging her other resources.

Please try and reign in the issues around Tobias because at this point he's starting to come off as not just a jerk but also on the brink of beating or killing her.

2/5 stars

mr bbonz1's most wretched and miserably pathetic psycho erotic fantasy planet?;)

My my mister bbonz1.....what has Christianity come to?!
over depraved,overly psycho sleazeball perverts of husbands would dole out 'Redemption'?! for a cheating the wife owned up about...and tearfully and profusely apologised?!
and the wife he is supposed to shelter and protect is subjected to 14 days of sickest perversions and extremely miserable public humiliations......the process of the husband redeeming the poor prim and proper catholicly brought up or something christian girl(sorry i did not read every yuck line of your story in detail ;):/ ) to make her sexually over brazen?!
and distribute her hotness etc over the internet and where not even at the end of day 14?!!
to add on to mister bbonz1's 'i'm so vain.....i cant help n think every song is about me' syndrome.....the wife gushes over all of these tortures........and despite having parents to turn to.....sticks on to him and the nauseatingly sick love life he hands out to her as though she were made of the fastest glue in the world!!!
this dumbest and stupidest of wives exists on planet earth u sure?! :o or mister bbonz1 is out of this world?.....;) the poor dear being welcome nowhere except on his own most wretched and most pathetic psycho erotic fantasy planet?!;)
nothing else explains so much pent up erotic frustration flowing through the comp keyboard to lit,u know.....u toooooooo erotically frustrated poor poor soul.....a reader would just weep on:(( ;))
please chuck the biblical word 'Redemption' in such sleaze and stop insulting Christianity!! :/u redeem nothing!!!your story utterly lacks any redeeming feature whatsoever!!! :/

My Master

My master treats my as his dog or pig, depending on the day. I love him for this!

my master

my master ties me up in the wood and invites his friend to use my dumb cunt body and fore this I adore Him!!8

More Please!

I hope you add more to the story.

Wonderful

Please continue with this story

You are a gifted writer

This is one of the best pieces that I have read on this site. You are seriously talented. Would you consider continuing this story, please? No matter what, please keep publishing.

I disagree. I like jack. Sending his wife out naked is just what she deserves!! Can't wait to Cumbria to the next chapter.

Well done

Pleasure you truly understand the dynamic involved between a Dom and his sub.
Pleasure - pain one in the same

NS

love this story

Please keep writing .I check everyday for a new chapter.
Christine

When is the next chapter cuming?

so wow,our BDSM queen!! our little Jane Austen!!:))indeed a BDSM Pride and Prejudice!! :))

dear Talyis, ....oh how i count days,hours,minutes seconds to get to read the new chapter of your 'A Secret Even to Myself'!! :)) logging into lit like crazy to check whether it has arrived!! :))
loved chapter 7 way more than chapter 6!! :)
this was the moment Mahin repeatedly failing to hold the vodka bottle against the glass wall with her nose...to which Tobias promises some more severe punishment....but u keep Tobias stuck up with the bottle and nose punishment only!!;)
oh how i fantasize he conquered her now...and gave some loving,romantic but subjugating magical BDSM punishment she would forever crazily love,now itself!!! :)
part passionately savage....part gentle and passionately romantic....you know the drill!! ;)
and after her feisty brand of wildcat resisting to that punishment Mahin melts in Tobias' arms..... and he lovingly threatens to be the worst BDSM taskmaster whenever she is rude,brattish or even talks back.....and she looks forward longingly to those times....and weeks of BDSM ride on between them,smoothly as a limo or volkswagen....
just like the flow of your BDSM writing is Madame Talyis!! :))
a refreshing departure from so many rash and jerky petty car ride type BDSM we read here......that linger only on the domains of pettiest public humiliations of women over trifles...(.and then claiming that is oodles of love and hots for those very ladies and such rubbish blah blah).....by men,and male writers who are not men enough to get masochism or macho kicks out of things that are actually and solidly very very manly than publicly disgustingly humiliating a beautiful or hot woman,or plain woman...whatever!!!;););)

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel