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Disappointed

This is the first instalment of a story by you when I can’t give you 5⭐️ It’s a 4 plus which means it has to be a 4. It’s been a classic love story. Very 50 Shades. Boy meets girl (except she’s the dominant); boy loses girl (except here girl loses boy); boy and girl get back together. Throw in some bdsm (a la E.L. James). Cue happy ending. But it wasn’t.

You could have gone for a f/m ending with him happily submitting to her because after all she enjoys being a domme and he enjoys being her submissive. Or going back to the master/submissive relationship she had with Rene, they could have switched. Something they only did on special occasions.

But you reintroduced the guy in chaps scenario. Something that happened at a different time in their relationship years previously. It was a weak ending. A disappointing ending. I can’t understand why the score for My Heart’s Passion is so low compared with your other offerings but perhaps the ending of this episode is why there is such a huge drop in score for this one.

But I will still look forward to your next story.

Yes Amazing

story, at a certain point I kinda knew the outcome, maybe. Kudo's to you

Sooo....

When is the nexy one coming? My cock is HARD and waiting

Update please...5 stars!

Great start so far but I agree that there needs to be more background on Charles and his perspective on the start of their marriage. I get that he was afraid of his baser instincts of D/s with his wife but if he is a Dom why did Ada need to come to him for comfort and passion if he was basically ignoring her for a year? But when divorce is brought up he has no problem showing he is an alpha, seems to me he needs the spanking..lol. But great start I can’t wait to see what you have in store for these two.

Challenge accepted!

I have really enjoyed reading this story. I also notice the challenge penned at its conclusion. I like the flow and style of your story. Thank you.

One of the vest

I haven't commented yet because I wanted to finish reading it all first, but since you asked, I can say I am dissapointed that I am about to read the last one now...
Would have loved if you kept writing more, briiliant work 👍👍

This story was freaking amazing !!!! Pleaseeeeee keep writing !

Can't wait....

Can't wait to read the rest! Keep em cumming! 😏

My second chapter

My supreme and glorious Goddess insisted I continue the story of my slavery to her. I sincerely hope you enjoy these. They are almost totally true. I did make them a little milder than the reality. Evil slut slave grin. Slave Marie... ( * )( * )

really fun fantasy to read

...just wish for a similar assistant. Are there any that enjoy it as much?

Cute but

Cute story but use spell check. Still gave you a 5

What a bunch of sick crap!!!

....""I've always dreamed of being dominated by two women.".... Next time he always dreamed to be dominated by 10 women and next month or year he always dreamed to be dominated by the female population!!! You describe no marriage but rather a slut who keep an idiot called slave-husband for her amusement!!!n If thats your view of marriage then "good luck" for your life!!!

What a bunch of crap!!!

...."sharing intimate details of my marriage"..... not only yours also his marriage!!! Sharing intimate details without the consent of your spouse is a dealbraker!!! A lifestyle as you want to describe is based on trust and love your real story is only a cheap bdsm relationship and no marriage. But I think that not your brain was the mainspring for that story but rather your lechery!!!

How insane have men to be!!!

Your readers are only brain sick perverts who gasp for wank material!!!

Ha ha ha! What a bunch of crap!!!

....." some pubescent teenage fantasy"... Thats your story. Be aware that all that fetish
fancier are people with mental illness!! They need person-centered psychotherapy!!!

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