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Love it

I haven't been able to put this story down since I found it. It's wonderful. Definitely one of the top five stories I've read on this site. And it explores the kinder side to alternate lifestyles. I rate every chapter that I remember to rate but usually I'm in such a hurry to get to the next chapter that I forget. But this entire story is 5 ⭐️ Good job!😊

Good Story

I liked the story knowing it is your fantasy and that's how you describe it. You start by saying you want to please me more than anything else. By describing the whip that's on the table with the toys, you would tell the readers I have a dark side that just might enjoy punishing you if you don't perform to my satisfaction.

Then, you go on to describe everything about you and nothing about how my arousal grows as I take over your being and use you for my pleasure. After all, my pleasure IS your pleasure. As I get harder and more excited in your throat you know your submission to me is pleasing. I will use you because it excites both of us. Part of my excitement then is going to be pushing you to your oral limits so you should tell your audience how I enjoy making you gag on my erection as I thrust and hold down your throat. After all, it's all about you bringing out the barbarian in me that wants to use you without any concern for your well being. If it amuses me to choke you on my stiff dick, that's what I will do. Remember, there's a whip on the table that beckons to you. The whip will make you suffer if you fall short. Seeing you writhe in pain while tied to the door as the stinging leather rat tail punishes your nervous system will make up for your lack of talent as a slave. In all, you will do your job whether it's because you're good at it or because you get punished for your lack.

not really

not as good as your first one, did not like it when she was tied up

"Where's mummy?"
"Well daddy just sold her to a couple of strangers, but I'm quite sure she'll be back just the same as she left - here's hoping sweetheart!"

Strange bungalow

That has an upstairs he can send her to ?

Flow

Anonymous, sorry you couldn't read. This story isn't for everyone. I'm actually kind of surprised people seem to be digging it this much....
In my own opinion, the real hooks don't even come out until chapter 4, which is still pending approval at this moment..
I tried to make this first chapter easy to read, but... I also wanted to preserve the format in which it was created... I compromised.

Needs work but great potential

Needs editing... the mistakes rip me out of the story. And being in the BDSM category, I'd hope any sequels are slightly longer and have a little more of the BDSM part. BUT in saying all that, good read, got my solo act sorted quickly ... lol :)

Sooooo hot!

This is an amazing story! I love forced milking stories and you did it perfectly!

If I may make a suggestion? I would remove the first two paragraphs. Telling us about depths of their indescribable bonds or bounds is meaningless. This is something you need to SHOW as the story progresses. I would start with:

"Today, as I sit in the park, my mind wanders to when Niki and I first met."

The collar.

Of all the things that go thru the story that collaring is the most important. I loved it

Interesting

In a way I agree with anonymous about the format. Whilst you have a flare for detail, I think it would have read better if the "you" was replaced.

Otherwise it's a nice read.

I'm not a fan of the "you" format. I'm a hetero woman so being told my cock did such and such just jars me right out of the story. I don't have a cock, don't want one and don't want to bury anything in your mouth. MIght be a good idea to change it to "he" and "his". The switching of tenses doesn't help either. The writing is not bad at all, but could use a little editing.

another like me

nice to see another cuckquean here on Lit. . . I hope that you will visit my writings as well. . . I am in a six month contract servicing my hubby and best friend.

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