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Left me feeling dissatisfied

Ending was rather climatic. How could you pour so much descriptor behind the motivations and inner thought processes of the characters, not to mention the sexual actions themselves, but make the ending so lackluster with little to go on? Its like, wham bam, thank you maam, and the art ended once you got your rocks off. Completely ruined it for this reader.

Well done great story

Wow !! what a good short story there was just enough excitement and pleasure to make me feel what the girl was feeling.

Well done don't stop writing stories like this

re recent comments

My wife's tolerance for pain had always been a known factor outside of her sexuality. The awkward approach and discovery of her masochistic side was largely unspoken. We both knew she was ready for pain and humiliation but I could not give it to her. That's not in me. In the next chapter, we'll see my wife's tormentor take liberties not expressly given to him. Will wife protest? Will I protest? Wait and see, dear readers.

Missing Tags

Good story, Severus. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

However, I think you should have included the tags: slave, slavery, slave girl, enslavement, collar, and/or barcode. You'll probably get more readers that way.

certainly not bad!

I enjoyed it, but would recommend revising sentences with condicional phrases, which was not used most of the time...

Damn

I can't find anything to nitpick and all I can say is I enjoyed the hell out of this story.

Easily One of the Very Best

This is easily one of the best things I've read on this site. You had me boiling with tension throughout.

Also, I liked the fact that it CONSENSUAL non-consent.

This is Insanely Good

"I had never felt so angry. Nobody does this shit to me! I had quite a lot of experience with BDSM, but I was Always the one in charge! I was always the dominant one!"

So, first she's a Dom in danger of being subbed...

"The mere existence of such a retreat like this made me sick to my stomach. Becoming a willing participant in the perversion was downright unthinkable. I wanted no more part in it."

Then she's not interested in playing the game any more?

I'm interested in seeing how that tension is reconciled in the following chapter. This story is really drawing me in.

As I read the story I saw myself

That is a very hot, very sexy story. I'm eager to see what comes next.

Loved This

Loved this story and Workplace domination and would love to read more on both. But hey that is up to you whether you want to leave them hanging as stand a lone stories, or expand on them.

Rgds Al

Bad Form

Marion broke a cardinal rule, Jane used her safe word and she refused to stop. This just isn't done.

So tender

Dancing slowly around the hurt, with the hint of the sparks to come.

Yes

That is how u treat a whore

Which bridge?

Driving over the Waimak bridges will never be the same.

Interesting start

I immediately get suspicious of coincidence in story settings like this and expect that things will flip so that Ben is actually Nikki's target. Looking forward to finding out.

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