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Another very good short story that takes place within about 15 hours. Well written and erotic with a good ending. Another story that begs for a part 2. A must read!
All Comments/ReplyI love what the slut wife and sissified husband have become. Their relationship is very kinky and twisted.
All Comments/ReplyNice story, normally 5 stars. But like so often nowadays, it is ruined by chastityshit, so only 4 stars..... yet.
All Comments/ReplyShane you didn't have a proof reader. After so long I doubt you'll read this comment.
Or write the 4th chapter.
I might take the liberty and create it myself.
Miss Knead needs finishing off after 14 years of just hanging around. We'll see. You'd like my latest series they are such...
All Comments/ReplyGreat story. I wish it were longer and a bit more descriptive, delving into Kimberly's thoughts and motivations - how she rationalized what was done and why she was OK with it - but a great story, nonetheless. The worst problem is where he removed her "lace black thong" and a few...
All Comments/ReplySathurnFox, Oh, definitely. No matter what happens with Lynn in the future or how redeemed or not she turns out to be, the harem will definitely be involved before they let her anywhere near Arthur emotionally (and probably physically).
All Comments/ReplyThank you for your quick response, and I glad you seem to be on the same page about Rani needing to at least start to approach this as a relationship.
About Lynn, not totally sure which way you are going to take her. But I looking forward to it. So far you seem to be writing present...
All Comments/ReplyThis usually happens when the cock is not all that really matters.
Sometimes girls just want to have fun. lol
All Comments/ReplyI’ve been enjoying this series. The flow is a little staggered but I suspect it’s due to the time between chapters. I hope you continue.
All Comments/ReplyThe mention of Thomas sent a dread feeling up my spine. I got into this more than I expected to. Good writing.
All Comments/ReplyAnonymous, that's harsh but probably fair. I do fall victim to telling instead of showing. I try to catch these moments in editing, but to keep my deadlines I sometimes have to sacrifice some editing time. There's only so much time in the day to write, edit, etc.
The pov is a bit...
All Comments/Reply@Anon - thank you 😊 Emily
All Comments/Reply@Anon - thank you 😊 Emily
All Comments/ReplySo hot
All Comments/ReplyI still like the series, but the writing quality has fallen a bit. Everything is overly explained now, telling not showing in a sense. Also the perspectives were a mess, starting with Kelly then sort of just morphing into a universal (but mostly Arthur) POV. :/
All Comments/ReplyGreat start, can't till she becomes the Dom replacing her.. mom..
All Comments/ReplyJust rent her pussy out to the kink Crowd, that she was friends with....
All Comments/ReplyGreat story!
All Comments/ReplyWow I was so glad to see the renewed work on this story. I have been a fan since the beginning and have all but given up on it continuing given the gap. The progression in this release was great and I can’t wait for more.
All Comments/ReplyClyde seems more like a roommate than a husband.
You claim they’re married and other than breakfast, there was nothing in their actions to reveal they were married or even in love.
If you take the references to Clyde’s chastity cage, we could be forgiven for assuming she was divorcing...
All Comments/ReplyOmg I love it
All Comments/ReplyLotte is a cardboard cutout who whines when her motives are reasonably questioned or when a grown up dialogue is required to help Hector develop his role willingly. Hector needs to man up as a voluntary submissive and actually submit. His inconsistency is starting to frustrate. Bea...
All Comments/ReplyYes, the already very high standard of the earlier parts is fully maintained. Actually no, it might even have improved. This is simply magnificent.
All Comments/ReplyAll I can say is that I need a cigarette after this one. Great read all the way through !! 😉
All Comments/ReplyEmily, your story kept me on the edge all the way through in more ways than one. I love your work, especially the BDSM themed pieces !!
All Comments/ReplyI loved the story right up till she gave in to Robert. That ruined the story for me.
All Comments/ReplyIf I wasn't in a chastity cage. I would be rock hard and disobedient.
All Comments/ReplyHot as hell!
All Comments/ReplyPlease continue, the story so far has been excellent, enjoy how to added the foot worship and her climax
All Comments/ReplyTwo years in and you're thoroughly acclimatised to the lifestyle. Particularly impressed with the commitment to smoking, I love a bitch to smoke heavily. I've seen bits and pieces by Sammy and Martika around online - a formidable family and can definitely see why you were so drawn...
All Comments/ReplyNo love, no respect, no safe word, just a sadistic bitch getting off on causing pain, suffering and humiliation.
All Comments/ReplyThings take a turn, boo...Just writing it all up. Glad you're enjoying it. A x
All Comments/ReplySoft femdom with a nice, slow build up. Not as much BDSM as I normally like, but the mind fuck and manipulation pulled me in. The network of houses was implausible, but it is fiction after all.
All Comments/Reply@rentturtle new parts coming up soon
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