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Wow!

Looking forward to more. Great story!

deserved both the red h and the green e that it got. very hot and erotic.

It's a long story and I started touching myself at the beginning and didn't stop until the end and had two orgasms on the way. Great story. wow.

Well developed story

I enjoyed this story for its detail and its overall development. It was logical and progressed more or less logically. I was ready for the wedding, and I enjoyed learning a little of the life after marriage. In the end, the notion of the story of a courtship was fascinating.

Other than some minor editing for spelling and grammar, the story is complete.

enjoyed

Thought this was fairly well written. Would like to have been in kimmies predicament

Shocking

I know that my daddy would do that if anyone tried to hit on me. I love having my boyfriend around to protect me. But what is weird is that my boyfriend's name is Jacob.

Lucky

Makes me wish my daddy was here to fuck me, but he lives in a different town. I miss him so much, I need him so bad now.

Just. Right!!

You must have been watching my Mistress Jo one time we were at a secluded woodlands. My nipples ached for days, as did other parts Mistress entertained herself all day l o n g!
Mistress certainly knew how to creat her pleasures!

Hot. Hot. Hot !!!!!

Love being bound and restrained, my philosophy is "Ladies ALL WAYS Cum First", never in all my ladies did one complain! My Mistress Jo, always made me clean out my seed and swallow, She called it re-cycling, and it made me recover faster!!

What fun

Oh h h h, such a tender feeling you brought about!

Greatly Appreciated

Thank you so much for the feedback and remarks on this! I honestly love hearing about the impressions of a character. With him, it's always been a matter of definitely portraying his desire for control, but to also portray that he desires Ezra himself, first and foremost. Elliott isn't perfect, surely, but I'm glad that he is seen as *human*. That's definitely very important to me!

I'm glad that the pacing has also worked well. I read over and tweak each chapter what feels to be a hundred times before I post it. Especially when it comes to considering how their relationship will evolve over the course of the story.

Thank you again so much for the remarks thus far!
- J

Thank you for liking the story.

I know mate, she is my favourite, best of every character I have ever portrayed or will do in the future.

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