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I am waiting

I am waiting for the next chapter. Please, do not make us wait too long. This is an exciting story.

On the other foot

After so many FemmDom takeover society stories, I hope the authors can see how it feels the other way

Great start

This is a very good story line however there are many things not investigated. Scorpio if you are still around writing stories for this forum please consider adding chapters. If not how about Finishthedamnstory?

saraceleste,
I enjoyed every word of this sensuous and calmly passionate story. The D/s dimension of their marriage is realistic and beautifully rendered as a safe space where naked emotions can be nurtured and protected. Good writing, and I hope you share more stories.

almost..

didn't read this out of my extreme disgust for anything 50 shades and/or twilight related. But what a nice surprise!
Really like the premise :)

If I didn't know better...

I would swear you were watching me and my Sir to write this scene.

Perfect!

And like Alex, I could never go back to vanilla.

Nice!

Would love to see more insight into the characters, what the male partner chose to say and why. Enjoyed the concept of her being in display. Be careful of unnecessary repetitions of information, sometimes you can show an audience what you want them to know without stating it matter of factly for them. Keep writing! Loved it!

Check out on of my stories and leave feedback, would love to hear what you think!

Well done!

Very enjoyable even if a little long on the hanging part with a foreseeable ending but none the less a good entertaining story that kept the bulge up particularly during the new slave's punishments and initiation. That part kept me on edge and wishing for more punishment and humiliation by other women for both the new slave and my self. I dream of being made to tongue and suck on freshly soiled panties, front to back by the woman who wore them for several days without changing and caned during and after if I failed to lick and suck them clean of all stains both yellow and brown. Yes, I would easily go along with a Mistress to a place like the Palace and be used and exibited for the pleasure of the superior sex.

More Please

This island of submission would be every Master's dream. The training or at least some of it could be good for new ones to the lifestyle in preparation for their Master. I would really like to read more and see how this Master is treated in the evening. I did notice that one thing that is encouraged is to entice the Master and prolong his encounter for better end results. Masters are in charge and a submissive who intentionally prolonged I would think would face some consequence.

yes

Lovely descriptions and delicious teasing, please keep writing!

Dear anon

I am not sure I would want it cold. Sure, cold makes my nipples stiff, but it seems to make penises unable to function well.

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Lovely

Thoroughly enjoying the story so far but hoping the chapters get longer. Keep it up, love the direction this is heading.

Down the Rabbit hole!

Enjoy the ride, I know I;m goin to reading about it! Great series,5 on both!

Lovely

Well everyone seems to have said it all. I truly loved this series and am said to see it end but you did wrap it up nicely. But man I wish it would keep going, lol. Can't wait to read some of your other work, if you have any I haven't checked yet. You are a great author and I hope to see it in bookstores, with some extra grammatical editing.
Lovely, just lovely. ☺️

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