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More Humiliation

Hi, please include more of piss Humiliation and cross dressing in next story.

Well written.

Just not my personal cuppa.

50 S of G

I am one of the few that has not read nor seen the movie 50 S of G so I have no idea if your story is like it or not. I enjoyed it (except for some grammatical errors) and would really like to read more on this couple. I hope this isn't another story that just gets dropped and never finished. That is one of my pet peeves with writers that leave you hanging, waiting for another chapter that never materializes. So please, don't listen to the nay sayers...if they don't like it, no one is forcing them to read it...stop you from writing more. And please hurry...I hate waiting for the next installment of a good story. ;-)

Epic stupidty

He drove to the Police station. And while he suffered some embarrassment when the Police cut the cage off, his wife was arrested and spent 12 years in prison for assault, battery, sexual assault, spousal abuse and locking him in the cage. It's a crime ya know! At least he got a divorce and kept all the assets. PS - when Mary sat on his face? He bit a huge piece of her labia off, forcing them to call an ambulance. After her hospital surgery, she and David were sent to prison for a number of felonies. Stupid story.

well written , delightful , intruiging story

seems a shame that the Fuckwits & Trolls Vitriolic Feedback
ended this story before it had really even begun.

Welcome Back

You're definitely the best in the fat ass anal category, I've been a fan for years. Hope this means there's more to come. Slave Girl was my favorite, but the others set in real world scenarios are great. Would you ever consider an incest angle? A fat-assed submissive daughter could be epic if told with your creative writing style. But whatever you do, just don't stop! Thanx, look forward to more classics...

wouldn't you continue?

Like, telling the next level of the relation, etc??

Brilliant work

You need to continue this story. It is a fantastic story angle.

takes alot out of the reader .
from a readers perspective , one really needs to be wide awake & sharp of mind to follow all the intricacies of this series of stories

i spent much of the last week reading~rereading :
Thesis / Sorrow / Tales / Touchdown & this series , Sonnet 57

A most remarkable & enthralling chain of stories , with so many unexpected twists & turns. Travels from the Sublime to the Ridiculous & effortlessly back again.

much for the reader to reflect upon if they so choose.

Still waters run deep and one cannot help but wonder if this truly is the End of Jennifer & joeseph's adventures.

i for one , would love to see them take the trip to Russia
what a delightful twist to have joe as sub to jenny/vyera and only her.
and Joe being Dominant to Neena & tracy/pavea.

Joe slave to Jenny : Vyera slave to Neena & Co.
Awakens a Dominant Joe when dealing with everyone apart from his wife.
what a delicious muddle & how would that work ?.

many thanks for sharing.
much respect for your hard work & effort

looking forward with bated breath for your next story
whatever it may be & whomever the characters are

xxx

TwistedOliver

:)

Ignore them, I thought it was pretty good! I look forward to more of your stories

I loved this story! I hope you keep writing. Maybe be time he will be put over the spanking bench and thrashed? ;)

To Bobossweetnessfreak

Yes No more Sir and Saving her both have new chapters that have been submitted. You should be seeing them any day. I am currently working on another chapter for My Secret Lover and that will be submitted sometime this week.

I'm glad you are enjoying my stories even though you are not in the DD/lg community. I like to think my stories could bring people awareness of the community and shed light on it.

Thanks for your support and feedback and happy reading.

More!!

I would love to read more of this new slaves story....please

Great work!

I'm feeling inspired! Keep it up!

Verrrry nice.

I was a bit worried where this story might go at first. The blackmail threat was a natural, but sometimes they play into some NC/R themes. So, I was very glad that you took us where you did.
I think you did a really good job describing his thoughts and feelings about the narrated posing, commanding, humiliation, etc..
Anyway, please keep writing. Whether more chapters for this series, or another Lit story, or something completely different. Use your talent.
Thanks.

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