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Wrong category. This is nonconsent/reluctance, not BDSM

As the title says. You've put this story in the wrong category. It starts off with a kidnapping and her cooperation is coerced, where it exists. This is non-consent.

I want one!!

Need one of those places here. Great read. Couldn't put down.

Once again you hit it out of the park! Brilliant story! Brilliant series!

Deeply sensual. Deliciously Kinky. Acute discernment about erotics, psychology, desire, love and kink. Just read this series.

iffy

I don't really see it being remotely possible. Maybe I am just not that guy. I did enjoy the story quite a lot regardless. Keep it up.

Well written - good character descriptions - good use of Dom and Sub - anxious for more.

Thank you... mine too... :-)

Well written. Fun and sexy at the same time.

I love it!

Please do more and longer! This is my favorite story on here!

Exciting idea,but the authors boredom showed through

When she told him to put his cage on,and there was no remark about the key. Also,why was it not on already? The author was bored,the idea remains exciting,but as Nabokov said about Nymphs,not every girl can be a Nymph,and I fear that without a selective breeding program we will always be short of the right women. Selective breeding of the right women IS exciting,but who among us could face the prospect?

Consistency

I know it is a minor point, but the appointment time was wrong. In part 1, it was 5pm. Now, it is 4:30. I prefer authors to keep track of the details.

Nothing really happens to her and why care about reputation here

People having sex in public and in a store and it is not illegal or big deal and this girl is worried about losing her reputation, much less about her own brother doing the blackmail? The writing is good and the sex situations hot but this is more like a self indulgent fantasy(from a sub?) where nothing really happens and the heroine is not so much doing anything she does not want as saying, thank you for blackmailing me, thank you for humiliating me, thank you for all the sex, thank you , thank you .

Even by revealing that she is bisexual, every possibility of reluctance or tension which is essential to actually have a story is discarded before hand. This is by no means non-consent, reluctance, BSDM or whatever you want to call it. The first person style does not help either since we cannot know thoughts and motivations of the other people. It is just a self indulgent role playing fantasy.

You got potential and can write OK. Just be daring and write a real unwilling character story and you may have a story. Keep writing!

Ah, the beauty of discovery. Well written and highly erotic. Keep them cumming

Fun Holiday!

Short but great start!

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