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A competent and enjoyable story, fierypixie1987

You write well -- it is a pleasure to read your work. Please bring us more of it! Five stars.

I'm in love ...

... with this story. Thank you Sam, for this wonderful happy ending. Yours forever, Fanny

I've been reading, and trying to like, Mary's story since the first posting. While there are many good points, there are still issues for me.
I cannot like David. This time, the first part of the chapter is unsettling to me. The threat involved with the cage is ugly. The way he forced her use of the safeword was reprehensible. Both show what I consider a poor master. One I would not serve.
Anytime a story suddenly introduces bdsm participants among people known to the characters, especially multiples, it usual becomes rediculous rather quickly. Suddenly, they are surrounded by kinksters in every aspect of their life. Next comes endless submissions to any and everyone. There is fantasy and then there is just silliness.
Based on Mary's thoughts you have provided, her submission has the odor of desperation, not desire. She is agreeing to anything he wants primarily because he has shown interest in her and she doesn't want to be alone. I don't feel a strong desire for submission from within her.

Husband Spankings:

Adding the part of your husband's spankings was a real turn on for me as I'm a spanko too.

One of my top five short story series of all time !!!!

After 60+ years of reading a very wide variety of stories, I make this as one of my top 5 of all of the thousands I have read. Excellent plot and pace, well developed characters and a great balance of erotic scenes, romantic interaction and realistic settings.

Definitely a 5+ !

Please continue with the series!

Re: Verbicide

Another interesting chapter, Chimera! The ending was surprisingly sweet. The dialogue between Tom and Sky was very good. The sex was satisfying.

Verbicide - in some ways I agree with you. The relationship depicted in this story is one that can only exist in fantasy. It depends on Tom having an intimate knowledge of where Sky's mind is at (as shown in this chapter, where it felt like he'd been reading her diary during the initial discussion) as well as events working out 'just so' in order to keep Sky coming back. In any real world enactment of this, the female would be sent running never to return. She'd be right to do so too. As you said, Tom isn't practicing 'safe' one tiny bit. But in this world of fantasy, Tom can be near prophetic and we can all shiver as events dance almost directly on top of the line without actually crossing it. It's seriously dark chocolate, but it's a delicious chocolate all the same.

I do disagree with the comments about lack of character development, however. Sky's habit of not even giving her friends real names makes them feel very two dimensional. But one of the reveals in this chapter was that that was done deliberately as a means to make the primary characters feel more real. The lack of depth in the side characters makes the growing depth of Sky and Tom stand out that much more. I was intrigued when I realized it had been deliberate, and it turned a weakness into a strength. Last chapter, I would have agreed with you that the side characters didn't seem to have any depth to them. Now it comes off as being Sky's interpretation of her world, which actually adds a whole new level of psychological depth to her character. Is she well rounded? No. I'm don't think she could even be considered to be in good mental health. But she sure is interesting...

I think Sky's narrative must be viewed with a critical mindset. Some of the sex with vanilla man felt gentle to the point of satire, or perhaps to the point of being a caricature. Something tells me that if we could compare the "actual events" of the story to Sky's narrative retelling of those events, we'd see that Sky's narrative was skewed. But I think that's one of the things that makes her character so interesting. Sky's world is gray and flavorless, except where it's intensely colorful. Her labeling of the people around her demonstrates that she views these people in terms of what they mean to HER, and how they are relevant to her. Verbicide called her sociopathic, and that IS sociopathic behavior. But nobody said the protagonist of the story had to be Nice. To me, this the tale of two people who somehow managed to be functioning members of society while still being rather mentally unbalanced in their own way, and how they found and hooked up with each other. Along the way, the reader is treated to a story which carries a vibrancy and intensity which benefits from the primary protagonist's otherwise uncolored and bland view of the world.

All of which bring me back to the point that I'm SERIOUSLY impressed with the author's skill in terms of the internal and external dialogue of this series. Well done, Chimera!

lol Ashesh9. We have our Byomkesh!

Good use of perspective and inner voie

Hi Kantarii

Thank you for you comments. Sorry it has taken me so long to reply but I haven't been the best lately. Unykorn

It's hard to know the when the story is transitioning from Ancient Greece to modern times.

Seriously Intense

"You are writing the characters and happenings in a way that is reluctant and scary and with more than a dash of jerk, yet...also thrilling and exciting and happy" - Anonymous Comment

This. So much this.

This story is some deliciously Dark chocolate. It somehow manages to remain intensely erotic while dealing with things that would be dangerous and scary in real life. It makes for some spectacular fantasy. Props to the writer for skirting so close to the line without crossing it. Also props for some very well done dialogue, both internal and external.

SUPERIOR BLACK COCKS

OOOHHHH, I TOTALLY ENJOY PLEASING BLACK COUPLES AND SUCKING FRESH SPERM FROM BLACK PUSSIES...

Wow!

I don't think the phrase "please, sir" has ever been more erotic.

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