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Qualified Five Star

I gave this five stars with reservations. Golden showers and a strappy fresh from someone's ass really don;t so anything for me. That having been said, the takedown here was elegant. The domme came across as predatory and confident in a way that I really liked and helped me to suspend disbelief. That's something I don't see too often. And I loved when they were talking afterwards. But the physical scene itself - not so much.

I like it.

Great story; I am enjoying the build up. I also like your writing style; your details make the setting much more realistic. Thank you.

Reunited with your story.

It's been awhile since I started your story, so I decided to start from word one. I like the flow and story line so far. Not being a non-con fan, I will trust in you and your writing to entice me to finish the story. I like my "spankings" and "ties" consensual...well, mostly! *; ) So far, so good. 5*'s !

Looking forward to the next chapter. See you in non-con.

Is he ever going to fuck?

So he's come through oral, been sodomized, he's done oral on them, and they've really overdone the tantric femdom thing. He has "the largest penis they've ever seen", but everything he's done would be the same with a normal penis. Sure, visually it's more appealing but now you're almost wasting our time reading.

Penis -> Vagina.

Very good

Great job I'd enjoy see your pictures I'll bet your a good slave slut deanmokbuilders@yahoo.com

More?

Glad to see you returned to Lit. Just leaving you an encouraging note: This story is most definitely worth continuing! Be well!

5*s

I don't agree w/ comment that 2nd chapter contradicts 1st. It's a progression to his cuckolding and conversion to being a submissive cocksucker! Looking forward to next chapter. Hope he remains reluctant to serve the dom but is coerced by his wife who begins to domme him even as she submits to the dom.

Excellent Story

Could not put it down. Second reading! Really looking forward to the next Chapter.

PLEASE, MISTRESS MIKA MARRY ME

It is as if you have enter my mind and written a story on my strongest desire, to be controlled, dominated and trained by a female who is younger and smaller than me. I long to be Carl. Please tell me that he begged to become her loyal servant/husband.

Great story

Very nicely written hope you continue it

Please continue!! I want to know what happens. Very good story.

More

Dis story always turns me on please write more like dianes revenge

More please! I loved the ideas you had for new stories. There aren't enough proper cock-worshipping/male-worshipping stories out there. Kelly is my kindred spirit.

Fantastic

Really great story. Excellent effort. Mika sounds like the perfect Domme. Hope you write a sequel to this. Would be very interested in hearing how Carl settles into daily life with Mika and her Matriarchal family.

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