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Im loving this serise.

Thank you for this. Wow, If i could find a Dom like Malcolm... You have described my idea of the Dom/Sub relationship perfectly. Well done

This is absolutely phenomenal! Please keep it up! With this series or new ones, I'm totally a fan!

gain weight

Have the hot mom foced to become curvy and plump. still hot though. also pregnant

Love it!!!!

Can't wait to read more!!!!

Oooookay

That was weird. If you're going to try and give supposed medical explanations for things, at least try and make it vaguely realistic, even for something that is fantasy. Normally I'm a fan of ball busting but it's a bit hard to focus on that part of it when the rest of it just has me thinking WTF...

So he rejected her, told her to leave, then blames and punishes her for believing the relationship is over and behaving like she is single rather than crawling back and begging for his attention? Without attempting to explain his actions or even apologise, he expects the relationship to go back to how it was just because he says so? That isn't being being dominant, it's emotionally fucking abusive.
Subs are submissive, not doormats who can't tell a self entitled jackass to take a hike. No decent dom would even think of treating his sub like this, fiction or not. It's people writing shit like this that gives BDSM a bad name.

Story Update

I've almost finished part 08! I am going to finish the last chapter, then edit it, and I should have it submitted tomorrow. It may take some time to be reviewed by Literotica before it's posted (possibly 48 hours).

Thanks for your patience, I know it's a long overdue part, but hopefully it's up to standards :)

Part 09 should not take nearly as long to be released as part 8 did.

And thanks for the link to the new forum!

Not my thing...

but you told it well, in great detail. Keep writing!

Great story

This was a great story but would like more from you .

it's to one sied for bdsm remember its controlled by both but more by the sub

nice story but i feel the wife is running to much of the show in this one like she dont really love or respected her husband i believe she is stepping out on him in front of him and he cant say stop cause she wont let him i feel she might be seing someone eles as well please write more on this one but she need a whole lot of pay back on this one
men have feelings as well as wemon so lets see where this goes

Love it

Do we get one for this Christmas?Sure hope so.

I really enjoy your stories,looking forward to future works

Keep going

love the story. I want to see him knock up the mother, and do a variety of other things to mark her as his property, such as tattoos, piercings, etc.

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