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Love, love this series!

I cannot wait for the other chapters, but am not sure how you will top this one!! This one has been my favorite by far!!! Excellent job!!! SoooOOOoooo hot. I loved how Bjorn's first was his wife; did not see that coming.

How

did James know she needed/wanted to be spanked? A good first start but please answer the question.

Where do I volunteer?

Another great chapter from one of the best writers on this site.

This is an interesting one..

..and in a way I fall between the two stools expressed (puns intended) so far. The tale itself is quite compelling and food for thought. You can't avoid your readers' appraisal simply by saying writing about sex shouldn't be taken seriously. At one point I wondered whether you intended a satire, by in effect showing that the Sisters' ideas made them infinitely more brutal and thuggish than any "pig-male" - perhaps that was a missed opportunity. I too disliked the mentions of piss and shit, but at least they weren't central to the plot. Much more annoying were the frequent omitted and shortened words, which made me wonder whether your keyboard has missing parts - but perhaps you were simply in a hurry. The descriptions of sex, which could easily have become very samey very quickly, somehow didn't - so props for that.

WOW!

This was sooo intense! I found myself holding my breath at times. Your sex scenes are just as vivid as your characters. Your writing has so much depth and texture its almost overwhelming at times. But in a good way! I have been trying to figure out what Petrine's hidden trauma is. I have a few guesses but what could be worse than burying three husbands? Thank you very much for expanding this story. Can't wait for some of your others to be continued. 😁

Not long enough!! Brilliant piece of writing with a great story line. I look forward to seeing how a kitty fits in with the ponies.

I love this chapter! You continue to amaze me - the characters are authentic and I love how you get into each one's head. I am looking forward to seeing where you take her interactions with Sven.

Does Sven have the IQ of a pea?

Doesn't seem so. Reading about fools and idiots just isn't interesting.

He realizes that he belongs to her as much as she belongs to him. A person without a partner is like one hand clapping. Superb story. Was he arrogant or just confident? He didn't take her, he held her hand, and they walked the path together. A beautiful love story.

Badly in need of editing

Way, way, way too long. With so much extraneous material that it was nearly impossible to read. Try again., This was bad.

Extremely nice story

Wish you could keep adding chapters faster,this is an amazing story

RE: There were some things...

Dear MichelMabelle, thank you for taking time and writing me a detailed comment. I really appreciate it.You are absolutely right about my grammar and spelling. I made a couple of mistakes.
1) It was her first time but obviously not his. It is also very clear that they had a couple dates before, so the reader might assume that they talked about BDSM before and "Do you trust me" might have been just a kind of catch phrase that they remembered from the conversation they had. With this I just wanted to stress the level of intimacy they have.
2) Not every room is a clear cut square. When you enter a large room, that is furnished, and full of things, are you aware of everything? Even more so when you have your first get away with someone that you just started dating. Aren't you rather focused on that person rather than every badly lighted corner of a large room?
My aim as a writer is to stimulate my readers imagination rather than force feed them every detail. To make them wonder and think. I'm writing fiction. Fiction is not reality. My main concerns are emotions not practical facts.
I'm really happy you like my story. Thank you again for your feedback, I will take your advice and send my stories to an editor.

a knowing smile

this brings back fond memories of a girls own submission to her first Master

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