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Didn't Get What He Wanted

He did not listen to his Mistress but he will be extremely sorry by the time she is done watching TV and no guarantee she will let him be comfortable after that due to his not controlling his desires. Too bad for the poor guy.

Aftercare? You call that aftercare?

He is nothing but a selfish pig. Please don't even try to portray him as caring.

Not A Dom An Abuser

As I read this I had an issue almost from the start that he would hit her so hard for forgetting the script he expected of her. To piss on her and then use her sexually is sickening to me. He may have degraded her, but he also used her without her having a chance to become clean so he was not bothered by getting covered in his urine either. He is a brute which is the same as an abuser and for the life of me I do not know how she did not lose consciousness when he continued to tighten the belt around her neck. The spanking which he described as doing by using all his strength and continued even while using her also is abusive. Sure there are Doms that spank while in a scene but not punishing spankings that continue to increase in severity or remain as hard as they can give. A Dom tries to read his sub and the fear which I believe would be more terror than fear should have had him stop and the fact she had to use the safe word three times attests to the fact that he did stop but he should have stopped when she said it the first time. I hope this is fantasy and not something you want to do as this is not a true Dom but an abuser trying to appear as a Dom. The title of Dom does not give a Dom complete control as that is what the safe word is for and trust should have been established before there was any scene and it reads like this is the first scene with this sub. A sub will endure a lot for a Dom but that does not give a Dom a license to abuse.

continuety

Your perspective went from being in a virtual game to realism.
Maybe once you and her role played, then you could've met in person.

Thank You

I am glad that you enjoyed this little story and I appreciate your comment. I don't have any more on this particular story line at the moment but I do have quite a few other Scenes that involve mfm with a male switch. I will be posting more of them as soon as I find the time to do some editing on them.

Just to be clear...

If you guys want to read the rest of it, it will only be on Amazon. I do not intend to post more of the story here. It is being rebooted, but elsewhere.

Cliffhanger

Nice cluffhanger. I was gonna be mad if you just skipped to the next day. :)

Good

Glad to see this getting put back up. I enjoyed it the first time and am looking forward to seeing what has been added.

You're wasting our time.

This was badly conceived and poorly written. A complete waste of time that was neither interesting or entertaining. When she slapped her I think she simply threw her elbow into her throat and proceeded to thrash her. Dumb, implausible story.

informative

I really enjoyed the way this was laid out. Was revealing in sharing information for us layman. 5🌟's

Hot

Hot, but needs a bit more description I think. Good tho!

You have a delicious mind!

No text, really, I like what you're doing!

Total Reboot

Hey everyone, just wanted to let you guys know that I rewrote some chapters, changed the story and added extensively to the narrative. There are 19 chapters and ~200 pages to this tale now. As you guys may remember, I got quite far into the story but did not bring it to a close. The whole book is up on Amazon now, so it might be worth checking out.

More of this story!

This is an interesting tale. One of the better written stories I have read. I'm intrigued to know more of her story. Will you be posting more of Caroline's story?

Thoroughly jealous

I want some of that. No, I want a lot of that!
Please, Unykorn, do give us more of their scenes and adventures. This was not enough. Sex between them all was smoking hot. They seem very interesting as people beyond the sex. I want to know more about them individually and as a group. The entertainer being somewhat of a switch especially interests.

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