Comments on Letters & Transcripts

Very sad ending!

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Shorter than I normally like, but very nicely done. And yes, I would like to see more letters from her to David, detailing her exploits. With and without Michelle. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Exactly what I was looking for. A set of rules

If only it can work out like that in real life!

A wonderful fantasy!!

It is a very touching story that could very well be true. As an author, I enjoyed your description of how she first rubbed herself on him—well done!

Interesting change of pace.

Another professional quality work of fiction and a uniquely-themed story by the talented TnA! This one is like a dream sequence, with obvious illusion to the lure of the Siren of Greek mythology. As the reader, it's hard not to be "lured" by the arousing sensuality of TnA's words!

Such an arousing, hot "experiment"! I love the author's description of every feeling going through the protagonist's body as she's forced to endure the various stages of the experiment. The scene between her and another woman is is so detailed and arousing that I feel like I'm right...

Well, the corporate culture is alive and well in this story! It definitely gives a new meaning to the the term "human resources". Through her believable, well-written and thoroughly arousing narrative, the author expertly let's the reader witness the "ins" and "outs" of customer relations.

Loved this fantasy

Creative idea. Looking forward to seeing who else picks up on it. Extremely interesting challenge to weave that hidden message into your surface story. Very well done. Enjoyable read! Right, now I'm off to read some of your other stories...

The 750 word limit is perfect for teasing little shorts like this.

So many-many, many-many great lines but the tone though is exquisite. Lit’s best imagination by far. I practically laughed with every paragraph.Especially the camera request 🤣 Delightful and delicious writing.

The only message not at all hidden in this letter is that this is simply continuing the cuck bullshit that rules this site. Thank goodness there wasn't much to it so I only lost a minute of life skimming through.

Couldn't agree more, some of my favorite memories are with "smaller" men!!! Sometimes I'll even search out smaller versus bigger.......same with girls, small boobs rock, 34B is perfect, don't want DD+

Huh?

<Sorry> but this went over my head.

He is writing the letter about his friend's affair with his own wife.

He is threatening to publish the story (or kill the friend)

Just my guess.

What a great, unique approach and idea. It has a poetic quality, and the metaphors paint a vividly arousing picture. I always love stories where the author gets imaginative and “thinks outside” the box. Very well done TnA!

Damn. You are such a good writer.

I feel the power of your enchantment.

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It's very delicious to read about an outwardly self-controlled woman to have a secret naughty side that is irrationally out of control.

I loved this! Recognising the place names just made it funnier.

The tone of Letters to the Editor of a local newspaper is spot-on.

Two days later she was served with divorce papers and he told the family that she was cheating on him with a teenager.

No one will believe her that he wanted her to cheat on him!

Very nice

10 Big Blazing Stars for Miss Amy! What a fun Story! LOL Cheating spouses "set up" by the cheated on spouses. LOL What a burn. I am really Liking Your Style. I am going to have to read more or your work. Thank You for the Great Effort! You are doing Fantastic. Thanks Buster2U

I think she'd like that.

After he got the video, he sent it to her family and friends. How did it get onto the internet? No idea!

Oh, the things we didn't do we regret forever!

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This is super. An experiment now and then is always fun to try.

wow!!! Can't wait to read the others.

She made a BIG mistake, crossing over from the secret fantasy her husband (albeit without permission), did with the nude pics. He still kept secret her identity, and by extension his identity, at all times. It remained a private fantasy between them until that point. He never crossed...

This is the clearest, most rational and intelligent analysis of what an appropriate response should be. It puts paid to all the self-serving, responsibility neglecting and pseudo rationale for the absence of a moral compass. He is spot on in pointing out that the "I still love her"...is...

Fuck off Carmel. You and your daughter are both whores

This was a lot of fun! Are you much of a letter writer? ;-) Or have you just had the misfortune to be on the receiving end!? These are so well realised. The puns are amazing too.

Ha! Funny story

aswesome i love this