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A strange innocence....

Cool insolence
Lazy decadence
Laid-back somnabulence.......

OF COURSE I LOVE YOU

now strip and spread,,,,,TK U MLJ LV NV

Nice poem young lady

Don't even listen to morons who suggest you become an escort

Nice Work!

I'm liking those rhymes
delivered on time
Amusingly created

You should open a sperm bank!

A nice poetic "job" that one would be happy to find written on a bathroom door
if the door was large enough and one was constipated enough to read the whole thing.

closet pain sluts

are so worth the time,
if i were a women
my ass would be thine

ONE REMEMBERS MOST PROFOUND

while the other files in the memory, TK U MLJ LV NV

I like the contrasts of the typically masculine and feminine images, GP.

Thanks for the feedback!

It can be a challenge to avoid cliché without falling into obtuse language, I'll keep your comments in mind.

lots of guys love trannies

why do you need a master? or are you just so kinky you need to be controlled or punished for being yourself?

cute

ta boot--What is a cub of tea?

The question one should never ask

gets answered.

Some bad lines " opulence of her end" and some good ones,
"She slid through the blankets
Pale and dangerous as a snake."
Don't know what it means but sounds good.

ANTICIPATION IS A GAME

of patience and hope. TK U MLJ LV NV

brief is good

breath "shortening" is bad. it's almost as bad as dick shortening!

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