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Interesting. I would have ended it after "You shed the skin I tame" because that's the best line I've read today, made even better following on the heels of "You smile with all my joy."

I don't think "You...Are...Me." was necessary since it was implied by the title of the poem, and it felt a bit anti-climactic after the dramatic affect of that killer line "You shed the skin I tame."

Enjoyable read, Darksymmetry. Thanks for posting it.

Glorious :-)

My corpulent ass thinks this reeks of awesome, and I am greatly enamored of it.

this gets 5 for the BDSM ......

even if the aesthetics is quite pedestrian ........

Hh

Funny!
By the way you don't use "big or ostentatious words", actually I think you always chose the perfect words!

That was really nice.

And very poignant. Most excellent.

An evocative, emotionally vivid poem.

Thank you all

To erects

Something about this piece was bugging me for a while and I couldn't nail it down, I think you may have found it, thank you for the input!!

hmmmm

Delicious., I do have a slight quibble with the use of

"My pet"
Laws of unintended consequences at work.

WHERE LIES THE SUB-UMBRA

to unlock the valves for a piece of sand, TK U MLJ LV NV

SEEK AND YOU MIGHT FIND

but do no look under rocks. TK U MLJ LV NV

FOREPLAY AND ACTING DATE NIGHTS

paves the way for wicked fetishes. TK U MLJ LV NV

Terriff as usual

I would say you have two poems here. I'd edit to a stop after the word cider, fix the next line and end there. These are the strongest part of the poem and the most universal. The rest is more personal and pleasant but the first part is the heart of the matter. But of course what do I know? Carry on Aussie!

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