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Got my attention

Paragraph seven is EXACTLY what happened to me. I was 20 or so and attending my very first stag for a friend getting married. Shortly after the party started a VCR started up and the porn began. It began with a sexy blonde on her knees, taking a cock in her hand, then her mouth and then she proceeded to suck him dry. My cock was rock hard in minutes. All the guys were very vocal, "Wish that guy was me", was what most were saying. I, too, joined in saying, "Wish that was me"; however, I was wishing that was me, kneeling and sucking that guy off, and yes, also wishing it was being video-taped. After she drained the first guy, there was a steady stream of cocks for her to suck. I couldn't stop watching. Friends asked me to play cards, I told them no, I wanted to watch the porn. All night, I sat there and got very jealous of the blonde who got to suck off all those guys. I'm sure if any guy at that party had walked in front of me, dropped his pants, I would have been on my knees and after swallowing his load, I would have have blown every guy there. If I knew then, what I know now (how much I love cock and cum), I would have shown them all that I was born to be a cocksucker and not missed many years of doing what I love to do.

This story really makes me wish even more that i had realized when I was young that I was gay. I had been married twice. I am not proud of it, but I cheated on both of them often. I now know that I was looking for something no woman could give me. When I was 48 I sucked cock for the first time. It dawned on me that I had been gay all my life and just didn't know it.

Tonight's read.....

This was just what I wanted to read before bed. I'm looking forward to an additional chapter. Great story, thanks.

Lovely !

Gentle, tender, human and lovely.

Don't quit your day job yet

This is honest constructive criticism, if you really are trying to get better, this needs to be addressed.

* The story is tedious to read.
* Choppy sequences and dry dialogue that continuously slips into 3rd person. (btw, who is this narrator?)
* I don't really feel for these characters, you lack the ability to emotionally invest the reader in their lives.
* Even the hook up descriptions are boring, like Mr. Rogers trying to read porn to a lethargic audience.
* The whole thing is rushed from one situation to the next, as though you became bored with it and just wanted a passable conclusion. Is this a first draft?
* Please, read your story aloud before you post as it will help you to hear what it is lacking.

Can't wait

I can't wait for the next chapter. This first chapter really captures your attention and I really look forward to finding out what happens next.

True romance

so romantic erotic such fine detail.2 lovers meant to be.

Love is of two kinds: natural love is one which expects something in return.
Divine Love expresses itself in loving service without expectation of any return.
Love helps you to see God in everyone, everyone as Divine.

good story

nice detail

got me hot & hard

TY

good technique

"When I move my dick up against your throat, stick your tongue out as far as it will go and swallow at the same time."
Good technique to deep throat a cock, I'm going to try it with a big black cock. Nice hot story. Thanks.

wet

my panties like a goof fag

LOVELY STORY.
TY

:-}

I've missed a few follow ups too. :-{

Bottom would be under jack

I would let jack fuck me all. Day and nite I would dry his balls out in my ass

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