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More, please!!

This was so good. Please write a follow-up!

More! More! More!

This was fantastic! I love how gullible Ben is. I wish there was more!!

this is one of the best stories here

is your style, i think, or your character's choice, or the way you use the words. Anyways, keep writing, you are remarkable.

Love this storyline so much! Gives us all hope of acceptance.

Have been enthralled by this story. Thank you for providing hope for many of us.

my fantasy exactly

I truly wish that my wife and I did this. I really want her to see me sucking a big cock and get fucked deep & hard in front of her. I also want to watch her get fucked by a big cock and make me her cuckhold. I love the female perspective and stories like this being told by a woman instead of a man. I always dream of my wife thinking the same as you. Maybe I'll let her read this story and hopefully she'll get the same idea. Wish me luck.

very sexy, please write more :D

Plus

I can never find the right words to show my appreciation but your stories are very good, they stick in the mind, they are a little bit different and I am always taken by surprise. Huntch something or other said it very well. It's a white knuckle ride, I did not expect the three dudes to be gay. I expected that Deacon would be super cool tough but get hurt and Jax would, you know the way it should go.
I really hope you keep writing, I think you a lot more to show and I really want to read it.

More

I really like Jax, I like the way he is so self conscious and awkward and intelligent and funny and pessimistically hopeful. Deacon is cool, the perfect top so creative but there must be more layers. That being said I do love the dynamic of Deacon super confident and Jax a wreck. I find it really sexy!

Very Hott

The second part of this story has my cock hard as a rock. I'm wishing that I were sucking Matt's meaty cock.

hot

hardon hot i presume 18 and over

Cock suckin

Yes thought same thing . Thought it was going to be his dad naked like him and they both sucking and ducking each other

Cock sucking

Didn't think it would been a girl was thinking mostly might been his dad naked and sucking each other off.

I didn't swallow either--at first

The first few times of sucking a guy off, I never swallowed, I did take it in my mouth, after the first couple, and spat it out. My army friend, when I was in Germany, was the first guy to suck me, and the first I ever swallowed. Since then it's been natural to swallow.

So Wyatt has made the decision to move, I wonder if there will be regrets. I await Ch 12.

Drama,

drama, drama, & more drama.

You are gifted!

I was so busy, trying to finish one of my chapters and get it uploaded, that I missed this one, even though I try to keep up. I saw where Ch 11 was available, and realized I had not read 10 yet. I guess that can happen, when you're both a reader and a writer.

I loved when Mikey said 'Blow me' and was just what Wyatt wanted. It happened to me once, the guy was actually straight, and said 'blow me' and I told him I'd love to, and he allowed me to.

Kid, you have a real talent for writing such emotional and realistic stories. This has become one of my favorites, as soon as I read Ch 11, I'll be looking for 12 to be posted.

Doug, aka o2byoung

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