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WOWWWWWWW

I am speechless to say anything bad about this story. I have read all the chapters and haven't commented on them till now. This is a well thought out story and deserves more praise than only 5 stars. The characters are well developed and it is good to see you get each character to have a place in the story.
The idea of rape is not a pleasant idea to write about but you did it superbly. Now to see how each character that was involved deals with it is a very well written part of this saga. Kudos to you Musicfreak for handling a not so hot topic in an adult erotic tale.
Thank you for continuing your Lunaris saga. I liked that series very much and am glad there is another series to read that corresponds with it is fabulous. You are an amazing author and story teller. I am glad you are back to writing such great tales.
I can not wait to see where you go with this from here. Thank you for sharing with your readers.
ACLASSYLADY

I hear you @musicfreak

OK let's see what happens next. Yes I did notice that he does like control...shame poor thing😊 and he has what some of us dont have....a conscience. Luckily for him; Taron is the understanding bf.

after 3 months, he and Ron were diagnosed with HIV+

@I_am_Midnight

Yeah, he's trying to. It's not so much that he still truly believes he raped Taron, rather that he has a sort of internal conflict within himself. Kevin is a person who likes order and control, someone who likes rules and the way things are supposed to be. It's that reason why he's wary about having an interclass relationship, and also why he's having difficulty accepting what he had done to Taron. It's the loss of control that he has trouble accepting, and it subconsciously manifest itself as his weird memories and nausea. It's just his personality trying to prevent something he didn't like happening again.

Hope that clears that up. Don't hate Kev. He's just a young teenager who's struggling with his inner demons. Give him time. He can't just forget it like that, it will take some effort. Besides, it won't be much of a story with they didn't har some problems right? Lol

Great Story

I was 12 when my first time occurred with a 14year old cousin. It was the first time I tasted cum and was hooked after that. Nothing like the first one...always in your memory.

Get over it

He must get over it this "rape" now. Its boring. He after all didn't rape Taron. Why beat yourself over something U didn't do? He's the one standing in the way of his relationship going forward.

I like

I've like every chapter of every story you've written. Being a Asian top and realising what you've written, you are definitely right... I am not gay, I am just a guy giving the gay submissive boy what he not only wants , but needs from me... copious amount of my baby makers.

You're back!

Please, please, please keep this coming. I would love longer chapters, but if not please keep these short ones coming. We need more romance around here.

The dogs will be a wonderful way to keep bringing them together. Canine bonding and intuition are strong. They make good matchmakers.
Since both men (and pups) like the outdoors it would be nice to have them camp out overnight in the future.

good

Well-written. I like the way the author uses "penis" and "sperm". Let's see more from this writer, please.

Praise

Amazing, truly, the ending struck me like a chord, very good story

I have a reverse story

My neighbor was a black man and one day while watching porn on my computer he rubbed his crotch against my shoulder. It didn't take long for me to replace my shoulder with my hand and in a short time he had his pants open and his cock in my mouth. Loved it. Sucked him off a bunch of times.
Sadly, I moved away and now it is all phone sex. Still good, but not the same.

Ehh

This is one of the most interesting stories I have ever read but... Its called the boys in the box only mentioning the box in the beginning if it was true to the name I would have expected more from the "box". Other than that I love the storyline and the plot

damn

super hot story! read the whole thing fast, shot multiple loads because of it.

definitely want to read more about Alex ;)

Well done.

Story flowed nicely and was very erotic. Keep up the good work.

fucking shit!!

Was I the only one who cried a little when i looked up the author's last date of submission? This story is amazing!!! The downside to lit is the secret nature of the authors-if Stephen king dropped dead tomorrow, we would know and understand that the dark tower book ten was probably not going to happen,or be written by someone else. But in the lit world, we never know what becomes of our favorite authors when they do not post regularly. We will never know how our beloved characters fare. And this story is proof. There's not even sex in it and I want know what comes (he he he) next!!! The character development and plot are phenomenal!! I love how mars is all sweet,and i hurt that he is lonely. I want to know why the bones call to him,and what he actually IS. I wonder about the captain,and mars' partner, the pissed off phari. Max is SUCH an enigma! I was saddened at Tina's death,and overjoyed that she would not be alone in the wait. Valdburg!!!! This is such a great read,and I am miserable that it may never completely come to fruition. 5 tear stained stars.

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