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I hope the author continues this story

I would like to hear more about Jack and the girls. Does Jack get Debbie and Cathy pregnant? What happens with Robin? I hope that Robin and Ron break up and Robin becomes a permanent member of Jack's bed.

Has the scent of reality

I was involved in such a relationship as the male lead if you will. I would like to say that we successfully pulled it off. But as a realist I wonder at what cost. my experience was real life, this is fantasy. I hope your story continues, I hope it has a happy ending, and as a man with a high kink factor, it would be fun for you to maneuver this story into a 4 some. And yes I say that as a man with experience in that scenario as well.

Loved it! Great concept, though a little more detail to the sex and sensations would have been nice :) good job either way.

Loved it

I've had many mmf's with my ex-wife and loved every one of them but adding another guy to the mix would have been like heaven

Good Read

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Thank you

Incredibly Hot

What can I say, well written and incredibly erotic. The best thing I've read on here in a long time.

Thank you, CityWoman!

The initial burst of activity has been over for this one, but I liked writing it. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the note--Val

Not Bad!

I really enjoyed this! Couple of minor things to note though - you really need to pick what cup size Ashley is, because she keeps changing randomly between B and C. Also, perhaps some of Ethan’s internal thoughts could do with italicising for clarity.

Nice!

Absolutely terrific.

I loved everything about this story. Five stars from me.

Hot Story!

Hot story and superb writing. Plus, love the watersports!

Really like this female point of view

Great story. I'm eager to read the next installment. Thank you.
Malcolm Jensen
squashmaven@gmail.com

The love of giving

Like the story this could go on looks like a new friendship in the making

Not as good as your others

The wife's reaction to the infidelity is unlikely in the extreme.
The only way it would track, is if she was already cheating on him and then that means their marriage is just fiction.

Keep going

Don’t listen to all the so called experts on here. You obviously enjoy your writing so don’t let them put you off with their negativity.

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