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More, please

Like it, but can we have some more parts? There's a good series possible here...

My apologies for your anguish

Your wrote:
"English is obviously not the "author's" first language, but that doesn't mean a submission shouldn't be dumped on readers in this appalling shape. We are not your guinea pigs!"

Indeed, English is not my first language, so I might pass my stories through some voluntary editors. But why bother them, if the "author's" stories are not worth it in the firsts place? I thought I'd leave the clumsiness there to let everyone see that I'm not a native speaker.

Now I realize that I'm really offending readers, and will think again.

Great gang-bang. Well told. I could imagine myself there, waiting in line for my turn.

Another 5 Star story from my new favorite author.

We both sincerely say YES

With writing such as this example:
" 'Very. Every girl should have a double strand natural pearl necklace and matching earrings. Diamonds at eighteen might be a little over the top on most occasions, but pearls are always in fashion and they go with just about anything. Also, don't worry, because when the time is right, I do believe you'll see the diamonds again, only you won't have to borrow them from your 'sisters' because they'll be yours.' "

Nancy my hero!

5 star story. I loved where Brittnay cleaned her up! I didn't last.

Fantastic

Loved the story and the fantasy aspect of it!

We flying in heavens of Passion

Rock n Roll
"I wanted Mark to get with Melanie for very selfish reasons; I wanted her young pussy back in our bed sometime soon. I had fallen instantly in love with the small girl. Everything about her turned me on: looks, personality, sense of humor, intellect, and her hot sexy body that had magnificent nooks and crannies to put your tongue or your cock if you were a guy."

right way

Now that is the right way to wake up

Beloved every story is fabulous

Kind One,
For example:
"I mounted Cindy in a sixty-nine and soon enjoyed the feeling of her warm mouth on my pussy, as I dove into her sweet pussy, running my tongue up and down her slit. We made love for an hour, talking and turning each other on as we brought each other to one orgasm after another. Eventually, after a matched pair of incestuous sister orgasms, we went to sleep in each other's arms. The room smelled of female musk."

Fuckin' Hot!

Quite literally, fuckin' hot! Great story! Five stars! You're the best, Britt!

Clit piercing? No

Looking at your profile and your "life experience", I don't see how you could make such a huge error. The clit does NOT get pierced. That would destroy the delicate nerve endings in the clit, rendering it forever numb. ie NO pleasure. The hood of the clit is pierced either top or sideways, often with a small ball resting on the clit providing constant stimulation when movement takes place.
Numerous idiotic couples come in and ask for a "clit piercing" due to having read stories about it and your example just adds to their misunderstanding.

Brilliant

Exceptional, actual literary erotica!

Still don't understand;

The description of the 'loosening up' process brought back ... a question posted earlier about how Dave decided that he didn't care if Alice stuck with the billionaire and never returned. That 'episode' dealing with Dave's thoughts on losing his bride did not delve into his thought processes very much ... and I still don't understand how he convinced himself that it didn't matter if Alice cast aside Dave's love and devotion during the years they had been married.

On what did Dave focus?

What made Alice wake up and change her mind?

How did Owen make peace with Dave and the rest of the group after trying to steal Alice from Dave?


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Cheated

Hey, I really enjoyed your stories, except for one thing: Literotica keeps publishing the same story twice. For example both chap 2 and 3 are the same and chapter 4 and 5 are the same. So yes I feel cheated!

Love your storytelling!

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