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Good first story, but...

...you should get an editor to review your stories before you post them here. This was a good story, a hot one, but there were errors that a good editor could have fixed. The errors didn't ruin the story (which *can* happen), but they were distracting. I gave the story four stars instead of five because of that. It was a good story as is, but with an editor, it could have been great.

In sum, a good first story here at Lit. Get an editor, and your stories could be great. Thank you.

Ch 4

There will be but trying to take it outside. Hopefully it will be finished by the weekend.

Writing anonymous comments praising your own story doesnt fool anyone

Will there be a Chapter 4? I hope so as I would love to see what can happen to her in the back room again! Thanks!!

Threesome

Well, not only are you a good writer, you can write a hot story, leaves a body begging for more. I love it that Cathy came into the story which puts a whole lot of spice in it. I hope the next chapter is coming out soon!

Goodness, that was fantastic

Dear K Vijaya,

You were fantastic and the story was. Love you guys. Keep fucking. You may like to read my stories too.

iloveall

Glad you're back!

I've missed Sue and her slutty stories. This one seemed pretty quick, rushed perhaps. Regardless, can't wait to read more!

Exciting New years

Kat your stories are wonderful, how you take us along with you to experience it with you.
Jenny

Too technical!!

Your stories have a weird vocabulary.

Any chance of another girl joining?

WHAT A VILE STORY

NOTHING SEXY WHATSOEVER ABOUT BEATING WOMEN....TOTALLY DEGENERATED HOG WASH....

Love these Hotwives

Looking forward to the next instalment, maybe will be reading this story to my partner

Other women

I wonder if the other women could go without cumming in scenes like this?

Love Hotwives

A very good story, I hope to read more soon

Very sexy

Lovely story. Does Robert fuck Helen the second evening?

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