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penis and clitoris

Charly apparently has both ovaries and testicles although the testes are not described. (S)he both ejaculated and secreted vaginal fluid.

A hermaphrodite does not have both a penis and a clitoris. These come from the same tissue. A pens is present in the place of the clitoris.

Most hermaphrodites have either ovaries or testicles (pseudohermaphrodite), the 'penis' can accomplish penetration of the vagina with an orgasm but s(he) does not ejaculate or s(he) ejaculates but the vaginal walls secretes only minimal lubricant.

The presence of a penis and a clitoris on the same person is relatively small.

Story still a 5.

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great story

This is a great story and I cannot wait until next chapter.

Started well........................

............but turned to shit when group sex started. Should have gone in to group sex to start with, NOT Romance, then my time would not have been wasted.
BTW Chapter 2 is missing!
Perhaps just as well.

Did ...

... you go to school?
Did you actually attend any English lessons?

Get an editor!

This is full of errors

"but ass naked"

"He wore is straw cowboy hat and sunglasses and was swishing a bourbon and coke that was almost entirely coke as he entertained the ladies floating around him with s story about our snorkeling disaster."

"I kind of laugh when I think about all the ruled we had when we started.“

And many more.

Wow!

Wonderfully written. I was captivated! This takes the cake for erotic literature.
Keep writing.

Got me hard

Great first story. I could imagine the scene and wished I was there.

I really love this series and I am getting so impatient on waiting for the next chapter. But I understand how family issues are so please take your time! I just hope you aren't one of those ones that finishes a series & then completely stops to leave us hanging. I'm going out of my mind here wondering what's going to happen.

40D is not 102 lbs

Just so you know, 40D is a big girl. Someone who is 102 pounds would be a 32D! Just to keep it real. :)

So hot

I don't normally comment on these stories but that was one of the hottest ones I've ever read.

It's a shame the previous anonymous commenter missed the title's symbolism. I thought 'aural fixation' was perfect.

give me more! please?

Such a wonderful addition. I truly hope you will be continuing Jean's spin into sexual delight!

deep ha ha right

of course the slut is deep an after her operation she will just get looser an looser. good thing don getting other pussy soon his wife will be useless sloppy old slut she already is a whore and a terrible woman mind fucking poor don , remember the mental conditioning as well as still drugging him passing out after cumming a few times i get but more often its happening so laura is not the loving wife she seems to be .

Gets better as it goes along . . . .5*

I wasn't too sure about this story in its opening stages--Barb seemed too eager, and this looked like just another one-dimensional sex story with little character development. Barb is a little mentally off-kilter, to say the least.

But no! This story gets better as it moves along. The characters become deeper and richer in thought and experience, and the emotional gravity between them is powerful and touching. This is a wonderful story.

I also liked the references to food. Not many people pay attention to the fact that we need to eat in between sessions of fucking, lol.

UNIQUE

CONGRATULATIONS. You have created a beautiful story in which to tell us about a fantasy world that many of us wish existed. You could do with a bit of editing -- especially on the use of the preposition "to" and the adverb "too." OVERALL, I agree with other reviewers who think this story is AWESOME. THANKS FOR SHARING

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