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Uh...

Well, first I suppose fantasy is fantasy. But Asian dicks just don't get that large.
Second, an eight incher, nor your own four incher, will show through a woman's ribcage or stomach. Hell even ten inches doesn't do the job. Only way is if the girl is a thin stick malnourished.
At least think about what you write first.

Grammar! Punctuation!

It's obvious that this was not run by an editor.

Loved it

As to suggestions, I would dearly love to see Luke visit Brigid, and this time Fiona sticks around and the sisters reluctantly share their secret. They didn't want him to know, but in the heat of things it comes out, and contrary to what they thought, he is not upset, but is excited. I would be too.

realley marvalous

i need more and more from you please carrey on i love to do this with my two lover
mrs kundan g parakh
sanjay2008_99@rediffmail.com
thanks

Wonderful!

Thanks Silky. I've just found a new favourite author. While I wait for the next chapter, I'm off to read some of your other stories. :-)

Good Story

We Canadians don't commonly use terms like bloke, bloody hell and a few others. They are more likely to be British or Austrailian or a few other countries. Maybe the characters are expats. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great

Another fun Texasfarmboy story.

This story keeps getting better and better.

this one has not got boring and has new twists and turns. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very hot

Some bachelorette parties do get wild. Often the women that seem most conservative are the most outrageous.

Very Well Written

I love how willing she is, sometimes gang bangs can get borfer line in the rape area but this one was very nice, the BBQ touch was very nice that warnig of being cought at any time, plus the variety of sex positions and encounters is great, and that bisexual touch at the end is always an A++ in my book :) Please write more!!

Great story

I had thought about a sybian in ages. Used to watch a lady ride one on a website years ago. Not much fun to watch on a webcam. Maybe better in person.

I too thought the slide into group sex went a little to smoothly and quickly. I know you wanted to get into the sex scenes and so did I, but i felt a little cheated that there was not more "ANGST" (as another commenter noted) over the slide from a straight monogamous relationship into swapping partners and group sex. I'd think they would at least talk a bit about it beforehand. The women disappearing and then turning up nude in the bedroom was abrupt. The men shed there clothes much too readily, I thought, from what had gone before.

Still, I liked the story and look forward to reading the succeeding chapters. I have to limit myself, or I won't get any writing done.

Found your work through Creekman. He favorited you and so will I.

Enjoyed

Can not wait for next chapter. I enjoyed this story on several levels. I prefer professional men myself...especially lawyers and doctors. Four guys is nice...being "airtight" with one in reserve.

You better hurry...

...with the evening's entertainment. I'm loving it!

Good edging story

Good edging story. It kept me in wood throughout and to the end. The story really needs editing to fix the errors in grammar.

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