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Nice

Smooth, clean writing, nice build-up, scorching threesome. I tend to like grittier stories and this is definitely an HEA romance with some French whipped cream on top. Nevertheless, it held my attention despite knowing where it was headed about half way. Good luck with it - I would think it will go over well at Amazon or Smashwords.

Really hot!

Nice story. Really hot. Reminds me of some fun stuff my wife and I have done.
Just one critique, on the First page when Andre walks in, it should be "look at this sight". , not site. "Site" is a place; job site, work site, etc. Sight is to see.

Holy shit

Okay so I found this story as the winner for the 2016 Midsummer contest so I wasn't exactly sure of what to expect in this story. I almost thought that this was gonna be like a page of really good smut.

Boy was I WRONG.

This was so much BETTER than I imagined it would be. It captivated me from start to finish and definitely helped that I had no idea where the story was going. It felt like more than just an average, run of the mill erotic story -- which don't get me wrong those are good too but sometimes they miss a certain depth. There was such depth into each of these characters, and the story itself was so well written that the none of the sexual occurrences in this story were forced. If you can tell anything about a good story in general it's that nothing is forced, you let the story progress naturally which is what I felt like the author did. I also appreciated how positive an outcome the story had, some try so hard to have a positive outcome they mess with the flow but in my opinion it ended up flowing with the story. Like 9.5/10 would
DEFINATELY read again. No wonder it won first place!

What's next? What's next?!

Unbelievably hot series so far. This could go anywhere: gloryholes, adult theaters, truckstop toilets, blindfolded blowbang parties... Would be epic to see the podium suck-off continue during a school assembly, this time with teachers getting the 'royal treatment'.

I urge you to continue. Your fans demand it!

favorite fantasy of mine

Great story. I would love to see my wife Debbie and gang banged by total strangers and use her for little slut. when she gets drunk enough she is a slut but I have to get her to the point where she will take on 4 or 5 cocks. maybe next week and that the red rooster here in Las Vegas. it happens I'll be writing a story.
keep up the good work keep great story.
ps. Don't let some of these anonymous ass holes get you down most of them are just losers who hide behind anonymous.

GREAT Story!

A wonderful story about reality,dreams and crossing over to where the dreams become reality. Revenge,hot sex,dreams,& romance,this story is a good one!

Very well done. Great story line, and good grammar too - I loved it.

OMG!! Wow!

I think this is easily the best story on Lit!! I am antsy waiting on the next installment of the story! I swear I've known a Brad or two in my lifetime. (snicker) I love your work, so keep going!!

Story end

Not sure why you wrote such a great story then changed it at the very end to a fantasy..hope you expand on this..

wasting my time

Someone seems intent on mixing gay/bi stories in other categories. "Gay" takes precedence over any other category - even if there is a tiny bit of group or sci/fi. Stop mixing! Most people don't want to waste time reading gay stuff if they're not gay. Maybe you need to add another category.

Good read, one suggestion.

The beginning could have been tighter. You could have summarized the initial exercises, hand holding, face touching, etc., instead of walking us thorough them.

Amazing. Continuation required.

A very sexy story. The build up of momentum was good.
Should definitely write continuation. Lots of scope.

Way too many mistakes

Too many very distracting mistakes. Get an editor!

“he made his way into the living room to see his wife Ada laying on the couch”

What was she laying? Eggs? She was "lying".

"It's you birthday”

Hello birthday!

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