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Everything but...

There are the literal presentation and psychological explanation, and there is even an introductory 1-line summary (which sticks out like a sore thumb). Only poetry is missing.

might need retittling

not a haiku - wrong form and wrong syllable count

2 VIMLESS TARTS

with unbridled egos, TK U MLJ LV NV

IF BONNY ANNIE COULD MEET CAPT SPARROW

they could both go straight and narrow upon the Seas of Jolly Roger, TK U MLJ LV NV

eloquent erotica

yes, cuffed behind your back is a good position for you to remind you of your place of subservience. you are a vessel, an instrument, waiting to be instructed. kneel

very sensual

and rather gorgeous - such beautiful colours.

Feels.

Your line breaks are exactly where they're supposed to be. Anyone who reads poetry understands this.

All the feels.

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Your line breaks are terrible. You never put the last line of the previous paragraph into the next paragraph. It screws up the reader.

A lament, sad but well written. The illustration was unnecessary to feel the emotion.

Very nice work indeed!

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