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Illustrashuns : my pic of the Red Cheeked Muse was different : this pic was for an illustrated Story submission !

WHAT ARE YOU REALLY TRYING TO SAY

too far and can ever.What??TK U MLJ LV NV

Wowwww, Mer !!!!

this is a hell of a beautiful Poem esp. the Killer lines :--
Fate plays us like a hula-hoop
round her waist , hips gyratin' , laughin'
until , exhausted , she will let the hoops fall.

Fave-ed'n Five-ed !!!

we were there

together after your poem and art, oh yes!!!! she was thrilling

oh God yes

strip and whip them both -- great art!

a slap on the ass

"May be quite continental,
But diamonds are a girl's best friend.

A stroke may be grand
But it won't pay the rental
On your humble flat
Or help you at the automat."


Diamonds Are A Girls Best Friend Lyrics | MetroLyrics

Quite the run around, well done. I too liked the illustrations.

Agree that the words speak for themselves...

but I also find the illustrations very pleasing, They are also educational, and not it the usual way here at Lit.

Nice, Ash. I particularly liked the image and word play of "Seated on Mouse/Truck or multiple vehicles."

Very nice, Mer. This is not a criticism if illustration: I think the words speak for themselves.

An excellent read!

The rhythmic structure really gave it a flow that captured my mind.

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