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Great beginning!!

Please, may we have some more? Thanks for writing this.

Please write more

I would love to read more of this story

Father always cuckolds son and itself is hot

Chapter 3 Please

Beautifully written... waiting patiently for the next chapter.

A Tragedy

First off, I am not a butt-hurt hater who gave this story a one-star rating. In fact, I gave it five stars. The author obviously has a good command of English, and her syntax is competent and fluid. The plot is strong, skillfully charting the course both mother and son take from start to finish.

Perhaps this will fall on deaf ears, but this is a terribly sad story. I realize it's fiction, but there are mothers out there like Amanda who hurt their kids in the pursuit of alpha males who view them as nothing more than a piece of meat. In Part 1, the close relationship between Amanda and Eddie is detailed, and I have no doubt that her love was an important support pillar in his self-image. When she rejects and devalues him - and, let's face it, stops loving him - it is done with calculated cruelty fueled by a sex drive that makes her worse than the most profligate whore.

The author is giving us a realistic treatment of one of life's bitterest truths; that is, the overwhelming majority of women will trample a thousand Eddies to death to get to one Lavrell. That's all well and good. However, I would like to have seen that truth borne out to its inevitable conclusion. Amanda is not getting any younger, and one day the time will come when her physical charms wane to the point that she can no longer pull the type of man she wants. Then, she will need her son's love more than ever, and if he has any self-esteem at all, Eddie will tell her to go to hell. A fitting denouement would have been Amanda begging Eddie to see her again only to be rebuffed to reckon alone with the private hell she has created for herself.

A reply to GengisKhan...

Well, Sir, your points are taken, thank you. For a change, this is actually helpful, in a way, though you still managed to inflict a modicum of insult. You keep asking why, as opposed to what I could have done to be a better writer. Why is unimportant. It is like I tell my kids: "Because I said so, that's why!"
Simply put, the answer as to why are for MY enjoyment, not anyone else's. This is one of my outlets for some frustrations I feel. Am I pissed off at the day? My character has a bad one, simply because it makes me feel better. If I'm having a good day, she may experience one of my sexual fantasies. Of course, the two could be combined, but that is another matter I will not discuss.
The overall theme of the series, as I was trying, and evidently failing, to make, was that the wife needed more from her vanilla husband. Yes, sometimes money, and creature comforts, and tenderness do not a happy marriage make. Every relationship is unique and what works for one may not work for another. If Tony had been paying attention, rather than just being the kind, devoted, and more adventurous lover, HE would still have his wife, likely at his feet and at his beckoned call, rather than his wife, who was so starved for the kind of attention she needed, kneeling and taking the abuse of another man.
The main character is a submissive, and a sub can be a strong woman, but she still needs that dominant hand. It is all about control. Tony wasn't, and Ron was.
Now a question of my own: Where are your own posts? Your own stories?

re: Keep Going!!!

Yes, by all means, listen to the person who's so insecure it can't stand it when some dares to post an opinion that differs from theirs.

All the fucking feels

Morena and Travis made me smile and also made me feel things.... I wish someone really wanted me that much or loved me that hard... well could just be fiction. Hands down my favourite story.

WTF did I just read?

from a strong independent she turns to be waiting for a "strong man" to tell her what to do?
and he end up sharing her?
lame

Usual

racist BS.
Absolute garbage and totally agree with prev commenter in that the revolting comments against the the husband by the mongrel and wife would be tantamount to me saying, then fucking stay with the arsehole and collect your shit in the morning. See how he likes the resposibility of paying for her.
One point, knowing that the invite to dinner was to get his wife in bed why the fuck did he go? and why not tell the arsehole at work that the invitation was inapropriate.
JJ

This is too good not to finish. I have already read it a couple of time and I'm still waiting on the rest. Hurry please

I know you like sex but pay attention

Seriously, i have to say this why do you have your female characters instantly accept sex with the male characters?

The transition between flirting, intrigue, more flirting, followed by some emotion or grand gesture thus leadinv to romance and/or sex, needs to be flawless. However, because you don't add enough detail and romance into the story, especially the transitions, your female characters come off as a slut that will fuck anyone if they are attractive or is well endowed. Also, your female characters tend to contridict themselves and why they act the way they do.

Due to this your work seems amatuerish and ugly like a house without supports colapsing in on itself.

I'm deeply sorry, If I offended you by pointing out any of your shortcomings.

Keep Going!!!

Don't pay the cave troll any attention. I love reading this story and I'll be happy when the next chapter is up!

commented be4

I've commented be4 on how formulaic the black cuckolding stories go;wife mesmerized, instant mult orgasm, verbal mental abuse of spouse from stud and whore wife, inability of either spouse to resist or even verbalize uncertainty and doubt; its tiresome and trite, does anyone write outside of the template?

someone mentioned it was ok until the verbal abuse, i disagree. My thoughts as i read;Are these intelligent white people helpless and stupid when in the grip of their fantasy? I would'nt want many of my fantasies coming true, to dark. The woman (in the grip of white superiority-kidding) is positive she can resist the lure of the big dick and I think most women in fact could and would, but in the story gets drunk, eyes glaze over and she fails. Man is not sure what he wants to happen but goes to house, drinks booze he has'nt seen poured, passes out, when"alert" can't seem to verbalize his concerns and doubts and then passively allows/permits his cuckolding.These people are not representative of the people that work, pay taxes and make america work, they are reps of what I think democrats personify; weak, appeasing, indecisive and passive in face of strength,(except when demeaning and resisting conservatives). Why do jigs always in these stories end up humiliating the husbands of the wives they're fucking, and why do the wives go along?If i was part of this sick shit and had allowed my wife to fuck some else and they started trying to humiliate me(as if i was'nt humiliated enuf going along w/ this crap) it would immediately put me in the mood to get revenge on the two people cuckolding me. Revenge that would definitely include physical pain to both and mental pain if possible(stomping stud in the nuts and throat while breaking wife nose to start.

These formulaic stories stretch fantasy to far into ridiculous BS,. Takes enjoyment out of reading them as does reading about men and women acting as if unable to control their emotions, urges and thoughts. The mystique of the big dick is massively overdone.
Maybe I don't know what fantasy is? Enlighten me.

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