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*****

So far. Good tale. Some of the pieces are black ice. Author is driving. Looking forward to more.

Who is Fran?

Agree with others that this is a good start! Hope to learn more about Becca's background. Has she always been reserved or relation with Daniel caused her to hold back and now she wants to let loose. And what does Jessi want?

@ @ swingerjoe

Yes, this is a well-deserved virtual slap in the face to every lazy author who submits a paint-by-numbers story about a brainless wife who cheats for no reason and ends up divorced, dead, and/or humiliated. And your point is?

I'm all in favor of a good revenge tale, but for fuck's sake make it interesting, compelling, original, engaging, realistic, and/or erotic. I detest these simplistic stories that include the same one-dimensional characters and the same monotonous plot. My point in writing this tale was to prove how easy it is, and how the BTB monkeys will hoot and applaud such a dull and repetitive story simply because it advances their agenda. I also wrote this to prove that the ratings for LW stories are entirely meaningless. I think I proved both points beyond a shadow of a doubt, don't you, Anony?

(And by the way, I find it endlessly amusing for someone to tell me to man-up while cloaking himself in anonymity. How about you man-up and register a username so I know who the fuck I'm talking to, and so that I can contact you directly, man to man?)

To short a story for this start.

We need the rest of the story to see where you are going to go. Please make the stories longer. At least 2 pages. I hope you have part 2 ready or will lose your start.

These are women who have no business being married if they are that dumb and gullible.

Who's Fran?

A good start to a story, keep going.

@ mike9698

You asked: how did this shitty story get such a good score? I answered that question on Friday.

Really hot story!!

.....about bringing fantasy (& maybe more?) Into the marriage-bed........how if you open the mind to all the sexual avenues that are possible, you open your life to far richer, and highly erotic, experiences........

.....and Kam's young wife is just beginning to realise this...........

So far...

...so good.

But the more I read this part the more it felt like you were leading main character to being made a complete cuckold. If that happens,well I'll express my opinion by 1 star and a comment that you most likely will completely ignore

fetish porn. love it!

I suggest that Nathan change out the device in each succeeding story. Each new device getting smaller and smaller. Another well known part of this fetish would be the eventual impregnation with Nathan's child.

vito1960

Live laugh love forgive and turn a blind eye to her laughing behind your back
Hope I am wrong
BUT MOST LIKELY SHE WAS JUST MORE CAREFUL OVER THE LAST 20 YEARS
THE WIFE'S YEAR LONG FFAIR TWICE A WEEK ME TIME IS IN NO WAY FORGETTABLE THOUGH HE MAY FIND RELIGION AND FORGIVE HER
HIS GETTING BACK WITH HER OTHER THAN FOR REGULAR BOOTY CALLS WOULD NOT BE A HAPPY ENDING

PLEASE CONTINUE

PLEASE CONTINUE & IGNORE COMMENTS from others who have nothing worth reading in their comments

Great story

... can't wait for the conclusion.

Keep writing

5/5

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