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I agree with @thunderfoot1959

This is very dark, but very complex story with a particularly tragic ending, but not snuff for sure! After the death of their son, there was no life for them. Even if she was delusional with her affair. For them the only way was to go find their son...

These stories never work

As fantasy I suppose it's okay, if you're a man with no self respect, or a woman with no respect for the man you love. Otherwise, it's just not believable.

As others have said, he wouldn't have sat an watched it. She's given him no incentive to sit through it, he doesn't want to and he knows what it'll be because she tells him early on.

I guess this is a kind of BTB story, but it just doesn't work.

A message from the author

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

Believe it or not, I'm really sorry to fuck up your pathetic lifestyle fantasy dream.

The marriage arrangement you propose is really a nightmare, but not one you will ever have to contend with. Yeah, its that obvious.

And, don't believe it.

A message from the author

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

A comment from the author

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

A comment from the author

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

Good story

Good plot and characterization. It reminds me of a recent story by whatdreamsmaycome called "The Observer." That's a high compliment, as that was one of the best stories I've ever read here. This one has several mistakes, but it's very good. Write another one and I'll read it, too. Far better quality than anything written for a good while.

A comment from the author

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

A comment from the author

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

A comment from the author

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

You think your cock is tiny?

You should get a scan of your brain. Won't cost more than a couple of bucks, and take maybe 5 seconds. Now your ass, I can see that from half way around the world.

A comment from the author

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

A message from Amy

I hope that all readers will send asfdaw4wqdu68gu6cfi (long for “asswipe”) a note of sympathy. As you might have recognized he follows me around like a love-sick puppy writing the same foul and stupid comment to all of my stories hoping to get my attention like a school boy pulling on the pigtails of a girl that he is sweet on. Unfortunately, asswipe has never had a date so he doesn’t know how to treat women and the constant rejection he receives has caused him to loathe them. Asswipe is 5 feet tall, weighs 330 pounds, is prematurely balding, has warts all over his body, and hasn’t seen his micropenis (except maybe once in a mirror) for at least a decade. His only joy, from his mother’s basement, is to write sick irrelevant comments on my stories.
I feel so sorry, and ashamed for, asswipe, and I hope that you do too. Please send him a message of pity to his email, or on a comment to this story, so that he knows that you care for his wretched soul, and point out to him that having a micropenis isn’t all bad (although why it isn’t I’m not really sure).
Love, Amy

Dark, but well written

This is an interesting, well crafted, dark story. While I don't condone taking a life, I found the story compelling. For those commenting about him going to jail, read the ending again, I think it's fair to infer that the ocean will take them both with the tide.

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