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Ignore the detractors

Wonder why the easily offended are here. I hope your long layoff means quick chapters, like at the beginning of the series. Keep them coming!

Sorry folks!

My sincere apologies to the faithful few who have supported this story.
Chapter 6 has been written and re-written a few times. Recently I have been out of commission but it is my earnest intent to get the final chapter finalised for the final time soon - promises, promises!

Wonderful, thank you for posting. Captures the exquisite moments when you feel those new sensations for the first time! After so many years now you begin to really know. Just the aroma of her perfume missing.

A Sentimental Journey

Even though I was born in the 50's - late 60's and early 70's album rock were the soundtrack of young adulthood - I've found myself enjoying the music and movies of the 30's and 40's.

Your story was a well-done invocation of people holding onto the romantic side of what that culture represented and finding commitment and happiness together.

I enjoyed this very much.


The writing seemed a bit hurried, but still erotic.

what's your problem

why is there some fucked up comments in here. if you don't like the story; you might as well not even come to this site. go and read baby stories.
Great job hetup. can't wait for more.

What ugly and crap story!

It seems the author has some serious cuckold issues mixed with grandpa issues that were transported to this ugly story.
This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, poor written, low context and it is not even hot nor sexy story.
This story is not enjoyable and waste of time reading all the way through.

Please Continue!!!

Oh my God, YES!!! Please continue this story!

I wish this chapter would have been longer, I was almost there.

I want to hear it all.

Thank you for writing and posting here.


please next chapter soon so good

What kind of fucked up father would actually look in on this?


Can't wait for the next chapter, hurry!!!!!!!


Really enjoyed the detail, but like most others, want part 2!

We want to hear more!

Please don't make us wait too long -- a delightful story -- thank you, and please have five stars for it!

Strip Club action

I frequent several clubs and I'm thrilled with some of the girls who really get themselves off. Im not as old as grandpa and I've never been fucked in a club but hand jobs are common.

A nice start

But just a start.......
Bring on that promised next chapter SOON.

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