Mature & Age Difference Story Comments

Definitely a stroker read,

I've given this one four stars, because while it's good as a stroker story, it's missing the characterization that made me add you to my "follow" list. You don't get any real feel for who these people are when they're not in bed (or wherever they have decided to do it) together, and...

I wish there was more to the story, but what's written is great

Sounds pretty normal. Sometimes boring is a good thing.

Good first story!

5

The cold fish becomes a dancing mermaid. Excellent!!

Love the story line... not too late for Part 3.

Hooray for Traci!!!

Very nice...

Well done. 5!

Fabulous read. Thank you.

Judging by the title, I expected the dogs to feature a lot more than they did.

5 stars. Very enjoyable, I'm enjoying your mature themed stories. Also love that many of your women have pubic hair. Too many authors want all their female characters to be completely shaved. Would have preferred that his threesome conversation with Abigail included "I want you all...

Love stories of older women stealing away young husbands and boyfriends. Look foward to when dumb bitch Lacey has to serve granny or lose her husband totally. hope part 3 comes soon , keep up the good work

That was GREAT!! Thank you for such a provokingly interesting work.

I, for one, didn’t mind the lockdown angle. Nice to see a little taste of reality thrown into the fantasy, makes it seem more plausible.

Great story but wish the ending were more definitt.

This is a well thought out and very lively written. It could be a text book for a young peron to study and make a goal of achieveing.

Mark did mention this a few chapters back for sure!

It was okay but they were getting ready to go home. No-one robs a bank when it's closing or already closed.

How could I NOT give this story five stars? It's beautifully written, has a well-developed plot, and the characters are realistic. It's the kind of story I'd like to to be three times longer. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

You can't leave us hanging like this hurry up and write the next installment,

Please, keep this story going!

Love where this is going.

What's Stuart's cock size if it made Leslie obsessed with it?

I can honestly say, lovecraft68, that this is my absolute favorite of your stories that I've read. Just the right amount of different elements to make it an enjoyable read, no matter how many times I read it (at least 7 so far), and one that I will continue to come back to whenever...

I truly enjoyed this story,as it brought back memories of my sexual awakening, compliments of a mid 40s church friend of my grandmother.

You can be the same age,physically as your peers,yet have older or more grown up view of life, or vice versa because kids physically & mentally...

Really good story. The last line was awesome!!!!!!

Can't wait for more !!

Now that's a fun day at work! Good luck in the contest. Cheers. Frankie

You are such a awesome author, I just love this storey, can’t wait for the next chapter! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It worked out just fine!

5

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Wonderful!

The line about "a bank robbery going on across the street, and this whole area is in lockdown." goes beyond the believable and really isn't needed.

The story as a whole is sweet and holds together well.

Wow, talk about a case study for life insurance! Well done.