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ch. 04 near end of page 1: Courtney giving bj while Erika watches. Text refers to Courtney as Britney. Yesterday read this author's ''The Tolerant" on patreon.com and it also sometimes had same kind of name mixup (no biggy). Britney a major character in that story...

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Amaze-balls

Worth the wait. This story has the perfect blend of snark blended into tense situations that makes it very readible. The plot elements woven together into a beautiful tapestry. The caracters were believable and relatible and that cemented my interest in the story. The best story I have read on the site.

excellent

This is a terrific fantasy, fulls of buttons being pushed. I'm a bit disappointed in the commenters who claim "If I was that husband" because they missed the clear statement that this husband only knows about it during the sessions.

Excellent premise -- using hypnosis

(sort of with consent) into a sex-hungry bimbo as needed -- well carried out. Thanks for your submission.

Another good addition!

I can't wait until he realizes what's happening.

A perfect state.

Great,semi-voluntary willing horniness.
A blend of abandon and submission."
I'm not sure which end of this I want to be on.

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Why stop? Had the potential to be very interesting.

Another great chapter.

I can hardly wait to see what you will have Robbie getting up to in England.

This is one of the best stories on Lit, please don't let anyone convince you it has run out of steam, all the positive feedback and comments prove it's still a great story.

As for confused, If you really believe the story has run out off steam the answer is simple, stop reading it.

A Man's Good Fortune.

Talk about a man's good luck!

He sends his dog for pet training to become more affectionate, obedient, and attentive and he found that he also gets his wife well trained toward the same lovely ends. The trainer is as effective and professional in training women as in training dogs.It is too bad that there was that bit of infidelity as the trainer introduced the wife to good loving and the means to a happier sex life, but all's well that ends well.

Two for the price of one...HAPPY DAYS!

THANKS SJP!

THANKS SJP FOR THE "GOD DAMN" AT THE END OF CHAPTER SEVEN. NOW YOU ARE REALLY COOKIN' HOPE TO "C" A LOT DEEPER STORIES AHEAD!

HALLELUJAH

FINALLY GOT TO SEE THE "SEA", NO, THE "C" WORD, IN YOUR STORIES ABOUT "IN THE NAME OF THE FATHER"! THANKS SO MUCH SJP. NOW I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO CHAPTER EIGHT AND BEYOND. PERHAPS YOU MIGHT WORK A "MESSE NOIRE" OR A BLACK MASS INTO THE STORY. AND A "GOD DAMN" OR TWO ALSO? YOUR SPARING USE OF THE "C" WORD DOES MAKE IT EVEN MORE POWERFUL, I'LL ADMIT. BTW I HAVE GIVEN YOU ALL "5 STARS" ON ALL YOUR STORIES!

well …

… it doesn't look like this will be continued. I was wondering how you'd make sure that Jennifer would get her steady supply of the drug after that weekend. Could have been difficult to realise.

LOVED YOUR STORY ......

SJP I LOVED YOUR STORY BUT WONDER WHY YOU DON'T USE MORE BLASPHEMOUS WORDS LIKE GOD DAMN AND SUCH. AND THE MOST POWERFUL WORD OF ALL ............. C U N T ( I REALIZE THAT WOMEN AND GIRLS TAKE THE WORD AS A POSSIBLE SLUR TO THEM, HOWEVER .....) THE POINT IS, A PUSSY BECOMES A CUNT WHEN A WOMAN/GIRL USES IT TO SEDUCE A MAN AND DRIVES HIM CRAZY WITH HER BODY. THE VERY SAME PUSSY OR VAGINA OR EVEN BIRTH CANAL IS THE THIRD MOST IMPORTANT PART OF THE LOVE/CONCEPTION/BIRTH PROCESS, AFTER HER BRAIN AND UTERUS AND WE AS MEN/BOYS SHOULD BE AWARE OF THAT. OTHERWISE YOUR STORIES ARE PURE GOLD!

underdeveloped

You may have this in the wrong category. The ESP element doesn't really do anything for the story.

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