Mind Control Story Comments

Could it be that this is a chapter of the Paradise Bimbo Inn?

That was one very nasty deviant orientated step sister however, ending the story that way was probably better as if he had glued it back together, his response to her would have taken it to another level of nastiness.

Mixed minds on this story, had a lot of potential but it felt like...

It’s been 7 months now. Where is chapter 4? Also, you really need to find a proofreader and/or editor. Clean up the grammar and punctuation. If you are aspiring to be a writer, that would be my first suggestion. I gave you 3 stars for now. I’ll be on the lookout for your future stories...

This didn't fit the continuity, unless I missed something. Not part of b the story

WTF, this has nothing to do with the previous chapters. Did some kind of tech error happen?

Readers - I see the your/you're issues and have sent in a correction. I swear I had checked for that, and yet somehow it reverted after my proofreading.

Amazing story. Reading this has my creative juices flowing again!

Would have liked to learn how it all started.

Anna has to be one of your hottest creations, Aoife. I never thought I would enjoy a story where the protagonist is coerced into sexual activity, but you have changed my mind. Anna's first person account of her first ever 'assignment' was mind blowingly hot. I am now a committed fan...

I like this one the best.

@lustychimera: Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really liked the idea of contrasting Thomas and his love for his wife again James and his complete disregard for the well-being of anyone except himself. I really appreciate the compliments, and I hope you like the rest...

All caught up, I'll keep checking back for latest updates.

This was great!

I love the contrast between the polished but distant prose for the men and the intimate first person arousal of the women. I did like how easy the almost sterile prose of the men was, but I absolutely loved the tight poetic first person. The latter was where the heart...

I’m sorry this didn’t go much longer. I’d love to see more chapters. More women. I’d love to see if he finally succumbs and fucks his mom’s pussy and Sandy’s.

Great series! I love the divest divest divest coding <3 fav author on here <3

This is the hottest story I’ve read in a while

Sooo glad for this chapter, this is easily my favorite series on here. The gentle femdom mind control genre mix is so great.

Great story. I’d like to see it continue. After a couple more chapters it would be an interesting twist to have Alena have control over her husband as he has over her. That could get pretty wild. Imagine the twisted zany repercussions!

Wow she's a slut right from her first sexual encounter... Run Josh, run!

Heather is completely hate able. It's awesome. I like that she is able to pull away some of the disdain some readers may have for Cassidy's behavior.

Unfortunately, the editing could have used another pass on this one. Besides, the occasional tense slip, one of the dares doesn't...

I found this incredibly hot, and I really believed Delilah's slide into corrupt bimbohood. I'd love to read more!

@eldarmark What are the Freewill 504 stories?

@weisman Thanks! I prefer more slowburn stories anyway.

@Anonymous Yes, Amanda and Amy are synonymous. I was sorta aiming to have Amanda be her actual name and Amy be the nickname her "producers" give her, with Amanda slowly slipping into...

Ooooohhhh..... Maybe Sean is the mysterious owner who paid for Kari?!?!? 😏😏😏🤤

Anonymous, are you the one that keep mentioning utilizing the town. Ok, let's say this isn't a story and the author just wants everyone in a compound, cause it's his story you know. I can think of a dozen or so reason why the town won't work. 1. The Feds might find it tough to...

2 AM and I'm going to keep reading until I catch up with series.

I bet the commune are the militant ass-wipes he's met a few times. Guarantee he'll have to play hero again.

Wow, I'm just guessing but I think our main character is going to end up with 15 or 20 ladies by the time this story is done. I got a funny feeling lot of these ladies he's been meeting are going to end up with him. That would be extremely cool.

The best plague series I've read and as a retired Vet, I've read alot. I love it!

you should follow up and see how dad reacts. does like or is h appalled at what his son did for retaliation.

Good, but I liked it better when I thought he was hypnotizing her during the interview.

Not sure what's up with V? I mean the easiest thing would be for her to fall in love after-all. But I'm hoping something else happens. In any case, I hope Harrison can somehow hurt her feelings a little as well. Maybe he can have her unlinked without telling her or something....

5555555555555555555555555 Fucking love it!

Wow, That's brilliant! Well written and the entire teasing till now has been A+

I Iike Cattie. She's cool. It's nice that someone is able to call Cassidy on her bullshit, and the slap was cathartic as hell.

Becca seems cool too. Hope that goes somewhere.

Won't complain, just an random fact: if the woman is shorten then the man and the men is embeddet into her - his head will likely be on her shoulders or near her head. It will take some efford to lay the head on her tits and will not be an position an men would mantain sprawling uncouncess....