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He should wish Lucy and the Professor will do what he says/please.....

Also....most Lucy's I have met were annoying bitches. Like the one from Peanuts...who was always teasing and messing with Charlie Brown.

He should make Lucy have sex with him.

I think it would be better if he used the box to make her think him having sex with their teacher was amazing and impressive; So she would want a turn.

More Please

This has to be the best I've read all year. Amazing work and I can't wait for the next installment no matter how long it takes.

too bad his power

didn't come with a way to make a living.

perfect

It was great keep going and don't doubt yourself and I love a longer story

Wow

Let me tell you, You're writing rocks. It's strong, it's detailed, it's mesmerizing, it's scolding hot. I loved the way Kelly made stephanie "feel good" and of course the whole going down scene from both perspectives. But most of all, I love the way how you can vividely capture each character's thoughts and perspectives. You're really amazing. I'm currently trying to work on a story myself and if it get's half as good as this one, I could die happy. Can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm willing to wait for a very long time.

The Liar and the Witch

Thanks for the compliment. If you'd like to read more about the mysterious Asian woman on the bus, and what was really going on with her, my other story on literotica "The Liar and the Witch" is the place to go.

zori

Expertly written,great dialogue,original,and of course extremely erotic! ;)

Fucking Rubbish

Worst story i've read, probably written by a closet and incontinent homosexual the amount he goes on about how much his ass smells of shit

So impressed by this series!

I just started reading this story today, and I finished all 8 chapters already. It is incredibly unique for the genre, and the writing is superb. I am truly intrigued by the mystery of it all. Through all that the sex is as rewarding as any I have read on this site. Masterful work!

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