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WHAT HOLE DO YOU FUCKING GOOFBALLS CRAWL OUT OF

YOU ALL HAVE TO BE FUCKING IDIOTS. GO A FUCKING WAY.

I DISAGREE WITH THE GOOFBALLS WHO THINK YOU HAD A GOOD STORY

NO ONE TALKS LIKE THEY DID AND SHE WANTS TO GIVE IT UP TO SOMEONE SHE SAYS SHE DOESN'T THINK SHE REALLY LOVE AND HE CONCURS. BULLSHIT OR B AS IN B AND S AS IN S. A TOTALLY BULLSHIT STORY.

There is a wide variety

of the figments of your imagination. In a way this story is more true that you may think as far as taking others along with you in your "dreams". Think about that for a moment because in an odd way, it's true. Thanks for sharing; we have enjoyed hours together in your tales ( with hundreds of your other readers). Scotty / slowrdr@aol.com > your writing style is smooth enough to - not slow down the flow of the stories you tell.

WHAT A FUCKING PILE OF STINKY DOGSHIT

YOU SHOULD STICKING TO FUCKING YOUR FAMILY FEMALE DOG AND STAY AWAY FROM HUMAN CONTACT FUCKTARD.

Good start

Same as my title, good start. I'd like to see how this develops....

Great, but

The first 2/3 or so was fantastic. But then things seemed to get bogged down. Just my opinion. Initially, one of the best ever. Towards the end, eh?

Simply Mind Blowing

I have to say that this series is simply one of the best I have read, so keep up the good work and keep them coming.

This sounds like the djinn that found the owners of the lamp....

....and, as djinn do, grant their fondest wish as a perversion of what they imagined. The "gift" has elements of joy and vexation intermingled.
Ah, too bad he didn't give Luise a set of tits to be the envy of every woman in the county, but so sensitive, she has orgasms from just moving around. And with her job being far more physically demanding than an office job, she's plagued with orgasms throughout the day. So much so, that she asks, then begs Veronica to fuck her ass and pussy two or three times a day. The relief this provides allows her to do her job.
But now, she has a dilemma. Veronica has stretched her out and she's developing feelings for her. Her fiancé Paul, has become suspicious and thinks she may be carrying on with another man. Eventually, she loses Paul, but becomes pregnant with
Veronica's baby. They marry (this is one of those newfangled states that allow nearly anything), and settle into a routine of regular fucking and setting up housekeeping.
Amidst all this drama, the others are facing their own dilemmas.
Beth's unlimited supply of shit means she and her husband spend nearly all their evenings wallowing in it together. His libido has suddenly gone through the roof and he can't get enough shitty sex. They have to remodel a room in the basement with special heating, showers wall linings and floor and sealants to enable them to do a nightly sterilizing wash down, after Beth shits all over everything....but Beth comes to work with a strong musty smell about her, the stink, never completely washing off. This is a huge embarrassment for her.
Meanwhile, Diane has "found" her perfect match and is so engrossed in him and spending time with him, she's begun to neglect her business. The others put in additional effort to pick up the slack, hoping it will end before long, but uncertain if Diane will ever settle down. She dotes and pines until seeing him again. He likewise can't seem to find enough time to be with her. They take long lunches every day and she comes in late and leaves early.
Such is the effect of the hanged to mind and body made by the djinn that calls himself Walter.

Sorry, I just can't help it. It was so alluring an idea....anyway, thanks for writing an engaging and truly weird story. We get so few really engaging ones, this one stands out.
Please continue!

Love this series

Please dont make us wait another month. Also, would love to see a female become a devoted follower from his mind melt power once he refines it further, rather than just insanely horn.

Kind of Twilight Zone-esque. I liked it, but feel like we were brought into the middle of...

...something....sinister, just below the level of conscious thought, somewhere between sight and sound...but ever present...in the Twilight Zone.
Really, we came into this well in-progress series of "handoffs", leaving us intrigued, but very slightly dismayed. So not so much story, as sketch, unless you have more....
Too many loose ends, too many questions.
Where did the green-eyed woman go. Will Ashley be his slave? Or will she be another of Victoria's growing collection?...just for starters.
More.....we need more!
Thank you for something new and different.
Now don't make us go all FTDS on your literary ass.....please write the sequel.

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