Reluctance & Ravishment Story Comments

Not sexy at all, just violent.

I can wait for the sequel to this.

I can’t wait to see what she has to do next

Wilcox010: Thank you. Summer is a submissive to her master. The husband as her cuckold makes no sense whatsoever. I have commented on this before, but Summer’s needs now go way beyond what her husband could possibly give her. Keep him out of the picture.

Becky wants to fuck her daddy, but otherwise has no use for the cheating asshole. No doubt she will have a plan to deal with him.

I agree, no cuckold for the husband

Thank you so much! Please tell your friends!

What a lovely story. Great tension. Very well written.

How long are classes at this high school, because two sexual unions, as described, would not be over in a short time? A different type of rape with one consensual sexual union followed by one nonconsensual. The story is well told, the characters are well described, the character's...

Arlene was a whore. 10 Big Blazing Stars. She would have cheated sooner or later either way. Great Writing. Great Effort. Thanks, Buster2U

In reading this series for the third time or so, loving it. It’s fantasy stretched to the max, so sordid and filthy, good job!!

Have to agree with the comments, why do the really great authors stop?

This is an amazing story that i love reading over and over.

Just the right amount of everything.

I love your stories, please ignore the critic...it is, afterall merely fantasy...but oh boy, I'm enjoying the ride!

more, more, you are the best

What a erotic story, reminds me of myself :)

I love this story and think it’s perfect as it is. It’s one I return to often. It’s exactly enough for me too. Thank you for writing it!!!

No idea why some want the husband/cuckold. Please no.

Fabulous, really enjoyed this one 💕

The thought of a student having that power over me the lose of control god!

I love how he cooks her dinner, he takes care of her, it's not like some books where she immediately starts cooking and cleaning, this is much better and more realistic for me. Hope you update soon !!🤎 🤍 🩵 💛 ❤️😍🥰🥰😍

Please learn that tense is important. You can't switch from present tense to past tense in the same story. It's very distracting. Here's an example;

You can't have one paragraph in the the present tense, like; "John senses her fear, and tries to comfort her".

And then follow it...

Well the dickhead husband admitted he cheated thoughout the marriage with his "friends" as he called them.

Love this so far!! Would be great to see her leave the house and run. And captor run after her and catch her. And she have a breakdown and captor comfort her and tell her that it is her house and that they will be happy together. Hope the stockhlom syndrome will be slow and that he...

Thank you very much for the feedback @Anonymous, I really appreciate the kind words. Yes, Miki is discovering some thing about herself, 'inner slut' included, and she's going to find herself in ever more boundary-pushing situations as she gets closer to what happened to Gwen.

To...

I just gotta say if the goal is embarrassing Janice having her working at the shop extra is too tame. The author def did a good job of making it in the suburbs so keep it in her suburb.

The next neighborhood party, she’s got to wear a black dress that’s tight croquet or kinda transparent...

My god, guy, a "super lover" that could never exist and a Benevolent Rapist is about as likely as a benevolent dictator both an oxymoron at best I have been desperate in my life but I have never sold my soul or body for a better life. Like you have these women in your "Stories"

I made to whoever the second person in the story was. Other seem to have made it further bit seems what I saw in the beginning remains through the story. In order for a a story to be believable, it needs to be rooted in reality, and no cops are going to show up to a victims house...

Fucking her ass may be included in the second part

This story was so funny. Every time I thought it would calm down, it threw me for a loop. Oh, and the sex was pretty hot I guess. 10/10 would fap again

Really enjoyed these two chapters. So many have characters hold threats of "piercings/implants/etc" and never deliver. It's so good when you find a story that actually does.

I got to agree with anonymous from 2 months ago. The so-called haters actually love the category until they get off, then they hate themselves for liking it. I also think it is possible their wives had cheated on them, or the lifestyle backfired even though it turned them on. But...

I liked it. You did a good job expressing what was in each person's head, what they were thinking. Also did a good job on the background of the 3 main characters.

lol, yeah

lazy plot devices and guessing maybe one of the first stories if u had an editor fire them lol

Amazingly hot, really looking forward to part two!!