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I don't think i could

I can thank the author for laying out a path for me to see how this unfolded. However I can't see that it could be reality. Great job on the writing to be able to make me think about it, shows the leave of skill you bring to the table.

I'd Prefer A BTB Ending

A few funny lines in this one, but not an ending that satisfies my personal reality. The setup gave you a lot of room to craft a funny story, but I agree with others who say "no way" he stays with a serial cheater.

Fun, and consistent.

I knew the main character was a wus and a looser when Zoey grabbed his note book and read the cover. But before she opened it she asked for his permission to read it, and how does he respond, to the readers? "Like I had a choice." What pure self-serving submissive bullshit. That's when Zoey knew she had her next rape victim.

Thanks for making this useless piece of cock so obvious. I just skipped to the epilogue and saved myself a Whole Bunch of wasted time. A pathetic story wallowing in misery and emasculation. Zoey's get away with it because wimps like your character make it so fucking easy.

Great story...terrible ending.

Needed a torched earth ending. Still well written. 😒😒😒😒😒

Thank You

I first saw combat in Dec 69. served my 25 active and 5 reserve. I know this was fiction but in 30 years I watched as our military has been degraded to a point that as of now I don't believe we could deal with a really serious war. The armed forces are too soft in most cases. The exception being the Marines. Thank God for his "Misguided children". And thanks for a good story.

enjoy your stories

I really enjoy your stories. I started at the top with the "A" ones and now down to the "W" ones. You repeat a lot of your story lines such that I think I am re-reading an earlier story. But as I have going straight down the story list and not skipping around, I realized you were just cutting and pasting. Your proof readers must also just be helping to tighten up the story, as there are too many homonym errors (to instead of too, etc.), errors in keeping character names the same (using Bill instead of Brad), errors in using women instead of woman. It does detract from and distract from the stories. Maybe you could ask your proof readers to read closer to catch these also.
Otherwise, good job.

Amazing....

..... from the range of comments how this story has hit the psychological nerve center of so many readers. Some with the capacity to personally understand and except, and some others forced toward total denial of life's realities. Same comment I made several chapters back. Congrats to the author.

Well Done.

The perspective from Laura's mind is extremely well written. Bravo for the insight.

Interesting.....

..... to see from the spread of comments how deeply and differently this story has hit the psychological "nerves" of so many readers -- both those personally accepting and those in absolute denial.

Nice

You know this was an interesting read but totally preposterous. Still it was better than most tales coming out now.

HIS BIG CHOO CHOO SHUNTED INTO HER TUNNEL

Gold what about the gold-ahr we don't need it honey we have my big loco
really thats the whole story! They both got shit dumped onto them! I think they struck it rich ! Now he won a choo choo now he has Jan and he goes up and down the rails ! He marries Jan WHAT A THE GOLD
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FANTASTIC STORY WITH US!
LOVE YOU ALL! BYE!
OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE GREG!

WHY DO AUTHORS COVER DECADES IN 2 PARAGRAPHS

Don't get me wrong! This is a fantastic story ! But as we come to expect from all the
Authors they cut through the chase in 1or 2 maybe 3 Paragraphs AAAHR THATS
BLOODY FRUSTRATING! You know you butchered it (not really)
Scotty two to beam up?
WELL THATS MY COMMENT a bit crappie Yes!!!
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS FANTASTIC STORY WITH US!
LOVE YOU ALL! GREG!
OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★

WHOE MAN FAR OUT STORY! OUTRAGEOUS

Yay! Corrupt poliesfiYayds familiar hey! In all fairness not all are corrupt!
Peoples THIS IS LITEROTICA EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED!
what happened to Mom and sis? Kids none,
Garrett Maybe named It RKM so People can't connect the dots or Honor of Grandad
or his Wife's second name (How the heck would I know)
Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us!
Love you all! GREG.
OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
OH OH OH! Never go fishing when you drink! 6 of us went to Moreton Island to surf
fish! It was late 1.30 am I was drunk so we ran out more line an slept high near start of dunes. About 4.00 am my reel screaming I jumped up and gave one almighty jerk on rod then I heard someone crash at water line I CUT LINE AND HID SHE-IT MAN DID HE CURSE That was 40yrs ago shit I feel old I wonder if he hurt himself? Bye

DIDN'T HAVE TO READ THIS CRAPPER

JUST SCAN THE COMMENTS TO KNOW YOU'RE A PISS POOR WRITER AND THIS PILE OF SHIT ISN'T WORTH READING. QUIT POSTING AND GO AWAY.

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