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Problematic

This story was way too disjointed. Made it hard to follow. I think it could have been a really good story if the author had adhered to a timeline a little closer, or made the time-jumps a little more coherent and easier to follow. Just my 2 cents worth. I’m not a writer, just don’t have the gift. But I’m a pretty fair judge of writing, both good and bad. Of course, that’s just my opinion too.

More Constructive Criticism

This story was just plain silly. Third graders don’t frequent this site. Or at least, they shouldn’t.

Never Before

I have never said this before about a story here on Literotica, but I guess there’s a first time for everything. I absolutely despised this story. I read it all the way through, and now wish I hadn’t. It’s like a mash-up of “Deliverance”, “Clockwork Orange” and code writing 101. Two movies I hated and a college class I would never, ever have any interest in. Sorry, cowboy109, but this one just rubbed me the wrong way. Were I to vote, I’d give it a 1, just because I couldn’t give it a zero.

Thanks for a very clever story

5* for a story that includes peoples emotions out of control but they come together because they really love each other.

Delightful

I'm reading this on a Kindle, and as such, I'm further ahead than this chapter. So, I won't talk about the plot, except to say that at first I was afraid this story was just romantic fluff (sue me - I'm a guy), but as I read further, I couldn't help but notice that I was smiling and chuckling and touched by the characters as I become further invested in their stories. It's like when my wife takes me to a rom-com or a chick flick, and I don't want to confess how much I like the film. As a matter of fact, I'm already visualizing the actors who'll play the main characters in the movie version. Delightful. Thanks.*****

How Many Did She Have?

Ch 2: "I've had a few others."

Ch 3: "He fucked so many women. I mean it wasn't as if it was just one meaningless fuck like I had."

So, which was it? A few others or just the one meaningless one?

Is she lying and we need Ch 4 to catch her?

Exceptional

I started this after I left work, thinking it was a short read to unwind. When my alarm went off to wake up the next day, I realized I was in trouble. Brilliant story telling, bringing past and present together and weaving it in with the majestic beauty of south central Colorado, and crafting a tale that touched a fear of justice out of control in a believable way. This story is now a favorite of mine, although I would have preferred not relating so well with the MC at being awake for 36 hours straight ;-P

Very Nice Story

But much too short. Seemed to me that this story had so many possibilities, so many directions it could have gone. It could have been a great story rather than just a nice story. But... it is what it is. And I did enjoy it, thank you very much.

Serials

As I have difficulty with serialized stories, I downloaded “Difficult to Reach” on an e-reader (thank you very much), and will read it all at once. I enjoy your style, and look forward to pealing back the layers of your character’s stories. Thanks for posting here. I wouldn’t have otherwise found you. Great start, by the way. *****

bad stuff

Jalapeno oil on her favorite dildo.....

This story should have been posted in the Sci-Fi/Fantasy section.

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I liked this story, but I would have liked it more if it had some kind of definitive ending. I mean, did he get back with his wife, or not? Did he reconcile with his kids, or not? I mean, inquiring minds want to know!

I positively Hate stories without endings. I’d rate this one a 1 star story.

Nice

I spent a couple of months around the Bay area in ‘69 and again in ‘70. I was in the Naval hospital in Oakland recovering from Vietnam. By then the big “Flower Power” movement had pretty much faded away. What was left was a lot of anti-war protesters, druggies, drug dealers, and some hippies just hanging around because they had nowhere else to go. It was a really interesting scene. I’ve often wondered how many of those people made it out of their 20’s alive.

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