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@norcal62

While it is a valid point "that some things can't always be understood," it STILL feels a bit like a cheat to leave us readers hanging.

Especially, as I said in my earlier comment, after giving us the tease about there maybe something WORSE than infidelity, but they are now divorced, so what harm can come from letting him know, just for his peace of mind, if she ever had feelings for him at all.

@Anonymous 3/21/2015

He is NOT a cuckold. He WAS an UNKNOWING cuckold, when his wife ultimately confessed he took charge and insisted they work on their problems.

He eventually forgave her, but never ACCEPTED her infidelity.

I'm sorry, that is NOT a cuckold!

wonderfully descriptive

needlessly cruel and pointless , I am a witch who would have changed the outcome if I had passed that way

Re-Reading

The kids should definitely be left estranged for two reasons: Either they believed the worst about their father despite what they HAD to know about him OR they CHOSE to believe the worst even after their mother, who they presumably loved and trusted, TOLD them it wasn't his fault.

hahahaha

Dewey, Cheatham, and Howe.....bwahahahahaha

near, but not accurate

In the Bible, God is rather genocidal, and slays over 25 million people.
He commands adoration and worship, like a narcissistic tyrant.
He plans to burn all who disagree with him, including Lucifer, in a lake of eternal fire.

Now who is good, and who is evil? Lucifer, who never kills anyone in the bible, or the serial-genocidalist and dictator of a divine north-korea, Yahweh?

I like how ''radical'' you go, but the truth is a few phases MORE radical, sadly.


Sincerely,
Ignifer.

YOU ARE ONE SICK FUCKER

WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU. WHAT A TOTALLY BULLSHIT STORY.
IT WAS VILE AND DISGUSTING, AND SO NOT BELIEVABLE. QUIT POSTING YOU CREEP.

A real tribute to Mr Poe

I loved your stories .It is obvious that you are a true fan of Poe .

Heart Breaking****

I glad he did not shoot the wife. Thanks for the read.

Good Story, Good Plot and well written.

Lots of fun.

The dialogue is constantly filled with interesting phrases and while there is plenty of action it is constantly downplayed. Just like dear old Dragnet it teases us.

Bah!

Wife's a bitch and makes ZERO effort to find out the truth, refuses to talk to him, even threatens a restraining order, decides to "tweak" him with THREE other guys, and HE'S the bad guy?

Smooth Operation

Steele is operating like a high quality surgeon.

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