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Loved it.

Different writing style , but a very good story !
5 *'s

Bad

It is sad when the wife ends up cheating when the guy is in harms way. It takes a strong wife to hang on until the guy comes home. She should not get squat for cheating while he was in harms way.

The Wife ain't the problem.

Think about HIV and AIDS. Essentially, people who contracted it in the past were doomed. I've seen it up close and personal. Have you ever dealt with a Chinese woman? They aren't like stupid white women. Not a lot of useless emotion. From her point of view, he was a dead man. Having sex with an HIV infected man? Seriously?

This was a very well written story. John was a sympathetic individual.....but he was infected. Plain fact. Confused people who don't understand that are mentally weak.

As for the suicide, that was appropriate. Each person should have the final say. As for me, Alzheimer's has killed most of the people on my Father's side of the family. I have a 75% chance. I'm 59 years old. That's just how I'm feeling about it.

As for the reaction of the children......they clearly were taking their cues from their mother. So, I'm not blaming the wife. As I've said, I've seen the disease up close and personal. I realize that transmission thru a blood exchange in a fight is a plot artifice, but in the real world, transmission is much nastier.

I remember when AIDS was first getting started. I saw a victim in Venice, Ca. He looked exactly like a concentration camp survivor. I worked for a Doctor who treated AIDS patients. So, I know both sides of the story. Frankly, John was lucky his wife kept talking to him.

Well hell, if we're both single...

Maybe Same Time Next Year is not just fantasy. I hope the move and retirement are what you want. You are talented and work will not be an issue. Living in your home state...good luck with that. You have lived all over and going back may not be easy. Remember that you possess an energy and spirit that can transcend the crap.

I am waiting for a day I regret the choices I made. Even now, I don't.

That was a most unusual comment BTL

I loved this story.
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Mud & Shit (literally)

You are correct, however, there were no irrigation or sewers, or in the case of a small frontier town, no pavement. People were tossing buckets of bath water and piss out into the dirt streets in front of their houses, not to mention horses, they poop. They pee. It's icky.

While it probably wasn't mud from end to end, there were plenty of muddy, shitty (again, literally) streets to put up with in the old west.

I want to make a minor comment. This is all set in the desert, it is hot and dusty yet the streets of Avalon and Redding are described as being muddy and this seems to be inconsistent.

Common sense

Let's see, in the cases of cheating, the cheaters paid a price. What a horrible thing to do.

In the case of two stubborn people who actually love each other, but need to learn to communicate, he gave them a course of action to allow them the opportunity to save their marriage. But with the choice of divorce still available if either or both feel that is the best choice. Again, what a horrible judge.

All the above was said with tongue firmly planted in cheek.

Excellent story, woodmanone, easily 5 stars and favorited.

Longer chapters!

I am in love with this story! My only irk is thst being two pages long it comes to an end to way :( would you consider making the chapters longer? It's a very big game after all (i used to play it)

great story slightly ruined

Well written story and well planned out . Great plot and different to other stories written in this genre . Loved the way you got even with Steven . But ! Jessica was dead at thirty . Personally I find it hard to stomach what was done with her burial site and her remains . To me ! That spoiled the story a little bit. . Otherwise great story .

I was surprised

I was surprised to find an update to those stories. I'm also glad the update is a happy one. I'm a sucker for a happy update ending . As a whole for the three parts I give FIVE STARS.

Remember to read the introduction

We were told this is a story (not real) this was from his imagination. And also not to get upset but, I got upset anyway because she wasn't turned into workhorse and had to carry logs Or he didn't develop witch craft powers. He also could have turned her into Gladstone Kravitz. I'm just not sure which Darrin he should've been

Gave it a Four Star

Could of gone into more depth I thought about Morgan's divorce and Ellen's life.

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