Non-Erotic Story Comments

Great story. Just one hell of a lot of feelings came up.

Good story, and I'm glad he didn't fold right away after she came running back from Sam. I'm afraid I have to disagree with the idea that he also needed forgiveness. It came down to her accepting a job working for a prick that she KNEW was working to get into her pants AND wanted...

I really loved this. I feel like it manages to neatly explore all the parts of the creative process. The desperate desire to write (or the desire to create, the desire to run, leap, live, be important!), paired with all the other things that get in the way. The need to connect with...

NTH suggested this one as a great read.

He was right!

Appropriately awarded.

Thanks for giving us a little insight into yourself.

Again, "No Talent" is quite the misnomer, as your body of work here exemplifies!

Beautifully done. Well worth all the work you put in on this. Thanks for this.

Thank you for guiding me to Melissababy's story, and by extension her other writings. I am not a writer. I thrill at being an audience of one for the many talented writers, yourself included, who have woven their tales through my brain over the years.

Again, thanks.

****.Wow it would be great if other writers would follow an example like the February Story in Loving Wives with some sermons they remember for Non-Erotic. Great read. Thanks for sharing.

*****Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Decent story.

Gut wrenching and heroic, sad. Good thing we found all those weapons of mass destruction VP Cheney manufactured. Now we have many more friendly countries in the Middle East.

Bit too sugary for me.

But some politicians just as bad are still running loose!

5

Dang

I think I would have enjoyed reading Buster2U’s comment. Looks like it was deleted. Oh well.

Thank you for the read. Truth is stranger than fiction, they say. George Conway is an interesting figure in the American political scene.

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“ Drive your cart and your plow over the bones...

Tagged the bitch good!

You couldn’t even be bothered to properly finish your story.

Pathetic!

1/5

Thank you for sharing this.

Excellent. Thank you.

LOL BTB

Wow! Excellent

Thank you for this. A good telling. Well done.

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Be well!

Brutal! *****

II used to work in a fish shop in Devon, UK in 1969, and we prepared several chickens every day by deep frying them in oil. They always tasted great, and also imparted a nice chicken taste to the chips (French Fries).

I believe what you described can be called Turdunkin

A fantastic story. I love how you wove it all together and he finally realized how easy it was to make a mistake.

Can’t wait to read more.

*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.

NTH did you a great favor by directing me, and many others here. In writing, two things are extremely difficult. The lesser is maintaining a novel or novella length narrative. The greater is capturing the story completely with the fewest words. You have done this. I grew up...

Beautiful…

All five stars turned golden... You captured my exact feelings concerning my own mother. Thank you for penning this story.

"In that brief moment, I believe that I saw not her physical form, but her soul. She was not just a woman at her labors, but the goddess who had given me life...

So you know, NoTalentHack mentioned you and this story at the end of a post in Non-Erotic today... and considering what I think of him, I HAD to come here to see why.

Now I know.

5 stars, a follow, and a promise to read your other work on Lit

This was a beautiful story, and whether...

a clue shows that this story has an autobiographical root in Sunday sermons:

a cast composed exclusively of males: from the preacher to the Brother, from the father to the son (and the son has messenger duties, that is, in ancient Greek, an Angel).

Everyone has a name: Jeb, Abner,...

I really appreciate the humility of NTH. True, he may not be the best writer on this site, but he's definitely top 10 and arguably top 5. The perspective of the characters in the story was substantial. Great work. The many years I was forced to attend the Baptist church by my mother...

Like Monogamous, I'm firmly convinced your handle is a lie...

...the impact of what was an early experience in your life had enough of an impact on you that in some form or other, you brought it here, and conveyed the emotions it evoked in you in a very well-written story here.

I...

The moderator(s) here suck, lol.

When one of your stories comes up in my notifications, I don't always bother to check the catagory, because I know it's going to be good. So I was surprised at what wasn't in this one. Regardless, It was good.

I stop reading the minute Dan agreed to meet his ex again. What Whimp, Weakling poor excuse for a man would do that ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I’m not reading any of your story from now on.