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I love a story...

..where you can hear the sounds, see the sights and feel the atmosphere, as if you were there experiencing it all yourself.

I seem to remember............

I seem to remember the IC saying that Laura would spend many more years at the university and would retire from there.....I don't remember which series it was but I am sure he said it.

Confused

Great story but...
Was t it Shelby who was lost? Not Lucy ....

GOD CURSE YOU

AND EVERY WRITER THAT PULLS THAT MY KID DIED, AND IT DID NOT FUCK ME UP BECAUSE MEN DONT FEEL SHIT.

OOPS TINY MISTAKE, CUNT HOPE YOUR FUCKING KIDS DIE BITCH. WOMEN GET AN EXCUSE FOR EVERYTHING PRE BABY DURING BABY AFTER BABY AND IF THE FUCKING KID DIES WELL THEN FUCK THE WORLD.

GOD CURSE The Wanderer© FOR THAT, FUCK A DICK AND ALL IS FORGIVEN.

Well written and consistent story.

Glad that there was no unexpected and unrealistic twist at the end.

Wow,

Is Lit behind on this one or did author just start posting here?
I've read up to chapter 46 on storiesonline.net.
Great story will continue to follow it.

Email me the location of where it is

I am so tired of Lit not posting this story in a timely manner. Email me at PRSStarID@yahoo.com where I can find it.

So revenge it is. Prediction correct.

And Sarah still blames Geoff, indicating that they were both wrong. How was Geoff wrong? By trying to keep her out of the situation in the first place? By warning her of Bobby's intentions? By asking her not to hang out with him?

Good grief! Another character that won't take responsibility for her actions. She knew it was wrong and still hung out with Bobby. The only person who wasn't wrong was Jeff, and later Julie. Even Becky is more mature than her mom.

to "My memory"

Laura went to her parents' gravesite because she thought she would not survive her final CIA mission in 'Her Last Bow'. She did not realize a katana was going to be blooded....

Great story

I felt the author threw two kitchen sinks into this story. Castration then murder leaves no time for effect to the lover. The author should've rode one horse in this tale but I still have it a 5*.

To Anonymous - on the Non Erotic Aspects

Thank you for reading, and for your comments on my writing, both are much appreciated!

As for it being here on a primarily erotic site, well, it's a fair question that's been raised before. To which I reply that Literotica itself has included a Non Erotic Category for story submissions, of which have tried to put my Surefoot stories under, to avoid anyone being disappointed if they've come looking for sex.

I'm no prude, I've had published six erotic novels on the Chimera line (under the name Derek Shannon) and on Black Lace publishing (under female pseudonyms!). But I've not felt the desire to add explicit erotic passages to my Surefoot stories. I publish them here because I don't get enough traffic at my own website, and because on the whole the readers here are intelligent, articulate and erudite.

I hope you'll continue to read more, and if you or anyone else want to comment further or even contact me directly, please feel free - I write these because I love the characters, and feedback is my currency :-)

My memory

I seem to recall that Laura took IC back to her home town. I believe the IC was wondering if she was doing it in case she wasn't around and could tell their children about her home and life. So maybe she won't be around much longer.

Did Mr. C think that Melinda was no longer loyal to him? I think Melinda and her trainee, is Darkwing her code name, were the two women who killed the mob assassine trying to kill Carole

Vigilantes were active in the Wild West when there was no law.

I think the Boston Tea Party was a vigilante action where the government was unjust.

Do cops mete out extra judicial punishment, yes, but not like we did in the old days.
But hurt one of us and the gloves come off. The broken back sounds like justice to me!


P.S. the first time I was stabbed (in uniform) did away with all idealism, I knew I was dealing with animals!

Literotica

While I do really enjoy the dynamic and the writing style....this is on literotica. Where is the sex? I've yet to find the erotica. Just the lit....

Great Story

Read through chapter 46 over the weekend on another .net website (don't know if I can mention it here...) Love it so far; keep up the good work.
5*

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