Recent reader comments on Literotica Reviews & Essays.
You may want to take into account selectivity issue. People who read stories in categories such as Incest, Erotic coupling and Romance have already had expectations about what they would find in the stories. LW can go either cheating wife, cuckold, btb, an actual LW, RAAC and so...
All Comments/ReplyReminds me of a rather gorgeous young lady in the Ship public house, way back in the 60's. The "girls" were sitting dicussing who they wanted to dance with when certain songs came up on the jukebox. My name was mentioned with the Honeycombs, yes i paid for three tracks and asked her...
All Comments/ReplyYour rant fails to take into consideration any of the health benefits associated with circumcision. Lower rates of penile cancer and lower rates of STD transmission are just a couple of them.
Maybe do some research next time before posting. Facts are better than your feelings.
All Comments/ReplyOne of the first stories that I wrote, I placed in LW. Lesson learned. There are 4 chapters in that storyline. I posted the rest in Fetish. I was astounded by the “hate” comments and realized that the fantasy that I had for my main character (eating creampies) was the item that...
All Comments/ReplyHot story, very real and accurate. Call me naive. But I had no idea Asian massages were so erotic. Personally I see nothing wrong with consenting adults doing this. Loved how you wrote it.
All Comments/Reply@Simcity09 - thank you 😊 Emily
All Comments/ReplyGreat explanation of the thought processes and reasoning behind the story Em.
All Comments/Replythank you so much. I have begun writing again, and I hope the new series will be up soon xxxxx
All Comments/ReplyDear Pixiehoff, I'm just one of your anonymous readers and I'm writing simply to tell you that you're a wonderful writer and to wish you all the best for your health recovery!
All Comments/ReplyCurtsey …. Thank you for all your time and dedication writing extraordinary tales and inspiring many guys …. Franziska’s following you since long and yes, you and your talent its fabulous coming back reading new tales you published ….. this abc about us perverts or even society...
All Comments/ReplyGood story.
All Comments/ReplyNot sure how I found this submission but it confirms what most say. I think that the answer to some of the vicious comments is to not allow anonymous comments. As far as thescoring is concerned, I think that once a story has received more than 20,000 ratings those that try downgrade...
All Comments/ReplyThanks for writing about your likes and dislikes a lot of your like are so natural and it’s an expression of oneself. I see peeing as part of a natural body process but the sexual pleasure is of being able to watch and pee where you shouldn’t.
I enjoy most of what you have written...
All Comments/ReplyYou left out lesbian cuckhold.
All Comments/ReplyI'm one that feels that there should be a conclusion to the story. If it's that they live happily ever after or life just intervenes and they go separate ways. But to just leave it hanging open ended is wrong and not how Jenna would want it to end. If in the future you should want...
All Comments/ReplyIt’s funny, I don’t get angry at cuckold stories, I usually try to avoid them, but the LW category is filled with them, or at least, use the fetish to promote a storyline. For me, the cuckold fetish is the same as homosexuality, in the sense that I have no problem with gays, but...
All Comments/Reply@Lovecraft_lore - thank you 😊 Emily
All Comments/ReplyA well done essay into the thought process that goes into an incest story.
All Comments/Reply@jehoram & @Paul_Chance - thank you both 😊 Emily
All Comments/ReplyA well done little essay. It's nice to get a peek inside your thoughts when writing.
All Comments/ReplyI'll comment further on this in the thread you started about "What I Wrote..." but right now I'll compliment you on the insight that motivated the story. It shows the reader a lot of what writers go through as they craft their stories.
All Comments/ReplyVery well researched, thought through and written. Well done and thank you profoundly. You have articulated what i have felt about myself for decades and only in last few years inquisitively begun to explore and express. The “money line” for me in your essay is “the desire to be...
All Comments/ReplyMY GOD. A man who thinks the same as I do. I'm not here to critique your easy because you are spot on. My bitch is what you said about most stories are about BTB or RAC. Like you I used to skip over the RAC's and really got a kick out of the BTB's. That was the old day's. Now every...
All Comments/ReplyThank you for letting us know that you're so much more cleverer than us IQ challenged lesser mortals who require your briliance to figure out the basics. I'm far more informed and possibly even a better person thanks to your homework assignment. For your next even more clevererest...
All Comments/ReplyHa Ha Ha ! What a load of Feminist, Liberal Bullshit ! Although you list no gender, this is written from a woman's point of view. There is no sense of morality here, just excuses for the wife's choices. Choices to betray her vows and her family. 1 Star on your "Review" .
All Comments/ReplyAgain, appreciate the analytical approach! Always interested in the process of the author/creator.
All Comments/Reply@everyone - reading too much into this, just meant to be a StillStunned behind the scenes view Emily
All Comments/ReplyI read the story and I understand how you directed the reader to interpret the who, what and whys. Your thought process seems good to me and I have read a number of your stories already. I'll keep in mind what you put into this explanation while I read more.
All Comments/ReplyTalk about STALE, this is the-best example!
You say you are not the best writer, I would say you are NOT a writer at all!
I am sure your boyfriend agrees!
All Comments/ReplyNo, no, Emily, it's the mom who sits in the son's lap. Consider the relevant anatomical arrangements.
The story was thought provoking for all the reasons you describe. But it felt, with the afterward and with this, like you really didn't want to write an incest story, like you're...
All Comments/Replythank you Dr B xxxxx
All Comments/ReplyEmily ...
That was spoken too soon! ... Actually I have read a good bit of your stuff. Really good work.
look forward to seeing more in the future.
Levi
All Comments/ReplyLove the fact that you felt the need to put this 'out there'. You obviously take the writing process both seriously and catharthic ( sp )
... i haven't read your other work, but will certainly do so. ... I have always felt that 'good writing is good writing regardless of genre.'...
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