Hi, have been reading stories on Literotica for a few years now and have developed a desire to help writers with their stories. I find that the most common errors are names used that are not followed thru as the story progresses, ie: used Mary in first part then used a different name usually by mistake in another area of the story. Have a good grasp of the English language and sentence structure, to help a story flow better. Also a good listener so the writers can bounce their ideas/themes for suggestions. I'm an avid reader who thoroughly enjoys this site. Any other questions please just ask.