Hello! I'm a new writer interested in improving my own craft as well as others'. English is not my native language but I've been exposed to it ever since I've been a kid and asked my mom what 'damn pig' meant. I can't promise I'll be the best at helping with grammar but I will give you my honest opinion on your story's pacing and general content. I consider my specialty to be lesbian romance and passionate sex with flowery language. I like to read in detail about the sensations and feelings characters go through, the sort of thing that spices up the smut. I prefer the submissions to be in .docx format, as I can use the review feature to highlight text and insert my own comments without disturbing the original.