| Profile Statement:
Good writing is the essence of good communication. In a well-written story, the writing is not noticed; the reader is 100% focused on the meaning, and the story it conveys, painting a picture in the reader's mind and imagination.
A poorly written story has the reader noticing spelling, grammar and many other issues that have nothing to do with the story itself. A picture is never able to form in the reader's mind because of the mental clutter.
I would be happy to help you clean up the grammar and spelling in your story so all the reader sees is the picture you are painting for them of an incredibly erotic and exciting experience. |