I have a keen eye toward word usage errors (their/they're/there, we're/were, hear/here) and punctuation, and I'm a spelling wizard. I'd be delighted to review your Romance, Group Sex, Erotic Couplings or Loving Wives stories. I can also find continuity errors, but I'm not a writer; I can't help much with plot lines or the mechanics of a story. My squicks are sexual violence and horror; don't ask me to review a story about rape unless the rapist ends up dead. I fervently believe that sex should be FUN.