| Profile Statement:
I have been writing for years - and have been submitting to Literotica for about 3 years. I have studied English and Theatre and my interests lie, in the main, in Erotica. I am open minded about most sub genres.
I will look at the grammar of your work, spelling, advise about narrative tension, coup d'teatre, climax and denouement, etc. If you would like advise on characters and their relationships to each other, I can possibly help. Just let me know what your particular query is. As a matter of course, though, I will always check grammar, spelling, etc. NOTE: I have been sent work that is particularly bad with grammar and spelling. I do not have time to give you English lessons. Please read your work out loud because this will help you a lot with finding errors in dialogue, sentence structure etc. I will fix spelling but not when it is appalling throughout the entire story. I also do not want to rewrite dialogue that is not credible. The odd bit of dialogue that is a bit wobbly is one thing; when the entire dialogue is banal and badly written, that's another. Sorry, but I want to give constructive criticism, not rewrite your story, nor have to suggest that you read more! |
