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Click hereAny moron can critique, and many do. My immediate reaction to your work was that it gave me a sense of Van Gogh. There are people like Olivia and Vargas who do what might be called more "real looking" paintings. I don't think that's what you set out to do! I liked it. Thanks
I really like this image! Very simple style, but conveys the raw emotion well.
don't question what you do; just keep it authentic, as you are. maybe photograph it in more light so we can see it better. and show us more!