but a nice try...".My bulging phallus and the testicles beneath." is probably the worse line but all in all a decent napkin epic.
can you give me the address?
nice images butt needs work.....
we love little and big tramps also, so of course we enjoyed your brief submission- please help us keep it up
Shadows of Leonard. I liked sperm in the last line but suggest broken rather than trodden. I also liked the triplets with last lines of stanzas 3&4 and 5&6 rhyming but what of 1&2? In addition, meter and scansion could be tightened.
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