tagNon-Erotic Poetry03' Loves Control

03' Loves Control


Time has shown,
Life goes on.
Living and hurting,
Loving and dying.

Now its become,
Not so much a battle.
Letting go,
Of the control.

Winning in falling,
Head over heels.
Breathing so hard,
All but love is a blur.

Lost for words.
In a dreamy daze,
A gaze that all would know.
As love has taken control.

Ruling body,
Mind and soul.
Nothing matters,
Except the love.

The feeling so deep,
Within the soul.
Finally giving,
To loves control.

-- Jessi --
- 3/4/03 -

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