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Click hereAs a heart hangs in balance,
Waiting and hoping.
On loves last chance.
With too many words spoken,
Broken and never forgotten.
Wearing on ones own heart.
A loves last chance,
To save a heart.
Blowing in the wind.
Hanging by a thread,
A ray of hope.
Though ready to fall.
Broken promises,
Causing a ray of doubt.
With little hope.
A heart dangling,
Ready to fall.
From the thread of hope.
-- Jessi --
- 2/11/04 -
Too many promises unfilled; too many meetings unmet; too much longing unfulfilled. At some point desires and hope are strained beyond what can be imagined and then...
Through Love's maelstrom of emotions ~ a tiny thread of hope prevails...
A nice lil write, full of hope.
I can feel what you want, and even where ya wanna take this. Just need a lil better painting.
You have some great metaphors, needs a lil pull.
Good write with feelings of hope and inspiration ...
More Please, do not give up.
I like the feel of your poetry !! * Smiles *
Just my opinion, please take no offense. ~