04' Thread of Hope

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As a heart hangs in balance,
Waiting and hoping.
On loves last chance.

With too many words spoken,
Broken and never forgotten.
Wearing on ones own heart.

A loves last chance,
To save a heart.
Blowing in the wind.

Hanging by a thread,
A ray of hope.
Though ready to fall.

Broken promises,
Causing a ray of doubt.
With little hope.

A heart dangling,
Ready to fall.
From the thread of hope.

-- Jessi --
- 2/11/04 -

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Too many promises unfilled; too many meetings unmet; too much longing unfulfilled. At some point desires and hope are strained beyond what can be imagined and then...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Tiny thread a holding...

Through Love's maelstrom of emotions ~ a tiny thread of hope prevails...

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Hope ~

A nice lil write, full of hope.

I can feel what you want, and even where ya wanna take this. Just need a lil better painting.

You have some great metaphors, needs a lil pull.

Good write with feelings of hope and inspiration ...

More Please, do not give up.

I like the feel of your poetry !! * Smiles *

Just my opinion, please take no offense. ~

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