tagNon-Erotic Poetry04' Thread of Hope

04' Thread of Hope


As a heart hangs in balance,
Waiting and hoping.
On loves last chance.

With too many words spoken,
Broken and never forgotten.
Wearing on ones own heart.

A loves last chance,
To save a heart.
Blowing in the wind.

Hanging by a thread,
A ray of hope.
Though ready to fall.

Broken promises,
Causing a ray of doubt.
With little hope.

A heart dangling,
Ready to fall.
From the thread of hope.

-- Jessi --
- 2/11/04 -

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