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Click hereplain torn cotton
southern wet edge
sit, be quiet
flow below
let the twist
turquoise wrist
girly girl
open a club
for one
member alone
for four members
allow peek and rub
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoI love the weird little word play that is going on in this poem. Perhaps I'll follow this poem's directions and just "sit, be quiet," and just follow the flow...wherever it goes. *grins*
Anonymousabout 20 years agoWould have to say its certainly open to interpretation, but if thats the case. Then <grin>
I remain, Thesandman
jthserraabout 20 years agoI am seeing a bit of the oddly erotic here. Love the minimal images laced so nicely together. I am not sure if you shaped the poem with a purpose, but I liked the overall curved effect when considered with the words. Nicely done...
jim : )
