- Non-Erotic Poetry
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Click herei believe in forces of darkness
i believe in the power of love
i believe in the realm of Atlantis
i believe in the gods above
i believe in mother nature
i believe in tainted pride
i believe in the righteous,the chosen
i believe in the ebbing tide
Yet the demons they shall call
Then the righteous they shall crawl
But still and after all
i believe
i believe in a cleansing pain
i believe in the need for tears
i believe in the ones on my face
i believe in the power of fear
i believe in the creature in the corner
i believe in he believes in me,too
i believe in my primitive urges
i believe in the mighty,the few
Yet the demons they shall call
Then the righteous they shall crawl
But still and after all
i believe
- COMMENTS
WickedEveabout 20 years agoA few less "i believes" would help.
For example:
i believe in forces of darkness
in the power of love
i believe in the realm of Atlantis
in the gods above
i believe in mother nature
in tainted pride
i believe in the righteous,the chosen
in the ebbing tide
YDDabout 20 years agoList poems are very difficult to make interesting.
This one might be improved if you dropped a few of the "I believes"
and just let the beliefs stand alone.
But still, do keep believing,
and writing.
YDDabout 20 years agoList poems are very difficult to make interesting.
This one might be improved if you dropped a few of the "I believes"
and just let the beliefs stand alone.
But still, do keep believing,
and writing.
