1201 Bees in the Bonnet

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HarryHill
HarryHill
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Were I a bee,
or a spider,
what words I could write;
in light or darkness
each corner would be right,
but not square.
Angled points that all connect
to lines without compare

HarryHill
HarryHill
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TsothaTsothaalmost 10 years ago

I have no idea what I've just read... And reading the comments helped none. I wonder at the meaning of 12's clue.

bogusagainbogusagainabout 11 years ago
Watch it Harry..

..that bee stings!

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
title

sucks

i fived

this isn't bad, but if everyone just spent a little more time thinking, editing, and getting away from the rampant me-ism.

Here is a sad clue, the You that you are is defined and made by the Them that is around

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years agoAuthor
You can tell your poem really stinks

when even Tazz fails to comment