2068 : Hit or Miss ....???

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Nasa : in 2068 Earth might get slammed
  an asteroid in our Planet might get jammed !!
Will it be a hit or will it be a  miss ?
  to mindful peace give a Goodbye kiss .
It might Flyby or Armageddon Now
  [The explosion if it hits Wow ! Wow!]
By Two Thousand Sixty Eight most o'us will die  
  [still for our grandkids'sake hope it's Flyby]
Will Dems & Reps be fightin' in Congress
  Syria still in flames,Delhi still rape-stress
Will the common danger open the eyes of all
  ---Mankind is One ,Together Rise
        & Together Fall ???!?!

{ puttin' thoughts in parentheses is a great idea !
 Freaky Freaky , thank you you're a Brilliant
Fella' !]    

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
Sorry Ash

this time I voted 3

more miss than hit

freakyfreaky469freakyfreaky469about 11 years ago

I'm glad you liked my experimental syntax, Mr Ashesh.

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
When it all comes down, hope it doesn't fall on you

lyrics from a song late 60's or 70's. Not sayin' we should run around like chicken little, but we should be looking for an umbrella or a back door. 5ed for telling me something I did not know. If you are interested, Mars is expecting an extremely close comet in the near future that may or may not hit.