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Click herethis one goes out to your smile
cast into the gloom room
like tear gas inverted
spreading fog of bubbly
blush blood rush
a regal ricochet bouncing
chamomile kisses and
split second splinters of splendor
penetrating kevlar armor
with sunrays and daffodil intention
and so it goes
when opening ones eyes
is tactical warfare, remembering
to breathe is infantry storm
in full bloom
you are my weapon of
mask reduction
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREover 17 years agoI liked the smily icon and the original idea. At the end though (probably it's the fault of my personal bio.) there were too many warfare and military allusions to make me smile.
LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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duddle146over 17 years agoClever comparison of the technique of war adapted to making love. Well-crafted with some very strong images.
