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Click hereHe was
a precocious child
"Daddy, count the stars!"
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- COMMENTS
10 Comments
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoVery creative...
and I could picture an unusually advanced child being so interested. Nicely done.
duddle146over 17 years agoPrecociousness ~ Children's Art.
A child's wonderment ~ A child's plaintive request. Lovely in its simplicity.
LeBrozover 17 years ago~~
From such precocious ones
Come feelings of prideful wonderment
And uncontrollable rage...
Bill Dadaover 18 years ago?
I have no idea what 'directional frosting' is but I like it. I like it almost as much as I like your poem.
