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Click herePanting, trembling, sweating, straining
Holding you down and having my way
Suckling, gripping, teeth grazing, licking
Quick inhalation of breath as you take control
Tongue flicking, vibrating, stroking
Hands anchoring head in place
Legs gripping, back arched, release achieved
Hips gripped as you forge ahead
Begging, pleading, no more, it’s too much
Grip tightened and finger inserted
Pleasure beyond measure, bed gripped, breath labored
Reminder given “I told you I wouldn’t stop”
Head between thighs, expert technique, legs held wide
Expletive emitted as body convulses yet again
Speechless, tingling, ready for retribution
- COMMENTS
vrosej10about 14 years agoThis is a promising poem and I really liked it. It would have even been better (and it is good), I think and this is just my opinion, if you had repeated the intial pattern of repetition throughout the poem or at least repeated it at the end.
