30 Minutes from Now

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rigneyt1
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Thirty Minutes from Now

Thirty minutes from now, your neighbors will
eat dinner.
Thirty minutes from now,
the jet plane that just flew overhead
will be almost 300 miles away.
Thirty minutes from now,
a sitcom on tv will wrap up
and the next one will start.
Thirty minutes from now,
Bill Gates will be a quarter of a
million dollars richer.
Thirty minutes from now,
that truck that just rolled by your house
will be 35 miles away.
Thirty minutes from now,
someone you know will arrive at work.
Thirty minutes from now,
a friend will have made a decision.
Thirty minutes from now,
a couple will decide to marry.
Thirty minutes from now,
a couple will decide to divorce.
Thirty minutes from now,
someone you don't know will die.
Thirty minutes from now,
a baby you'll never meet
will be born.
Thirty mintues from now,
something TERRIBLE will happen.
Thirty minutes from now,
something WONDERFUL will happen.
Thirty minutes from now,
the earth underneath you
will have rotated by about 500 miles.
Thirty minutes from now,
you'll hear that noise from the springs
underneath the two of you...
change....
as it slowly transforms over
from "creak...creak...creak...creak"
to "creak-a...creak-a...creak-a...CREAK-a"
and then
you'll hear
that wonderful noise of the mattress itself
move on into
SHUFFLE-a...SHUFFLE-a...SHUFFLE-a...
SHUFFLE-a
and then suddenly
thunk...thunk...thunk...thunk
THUNK-a.....THUNK-a....THUNK-a...THUNK-a
and then
THUNK-A...THUNK-A..THUNK-A..THUNK-A
. . . . .THUNK-A-THUNK-A-THUNK-A-THUNK-A
THUNK-THUNK-THUNK-THUNK-THUNK-THUNK-THUNK
as your bare feet reach for the CEILING and
he plows on into you
and he gazes deep into your eyes
and you hear yourself scream "FUCK ME!
FUCK ME! FUCK ME NOW!!!" and he pulls all
the way out and then SHOVES himself in to you
and all reason is lost
and you feel your passion rise
and THUNKA THUNKA THUNKA merges into
DON'T STOP DON'T STOP DON'T YOU DARE STOP
and your feet drop to the bed
and you SHOVE your pussy up to meet him
and you both cry out
and you can't hold back any longer
and THUNK-A-THUNK-A-THUNK-A
and you scream I'M COMING!!!I'M COMING!!!
and your pussy CAVES in onto his swollen
member
and he shoves in one last time
and "UGGGGGH!!!"
and you feel yourself hit with wave upon wave
of beautiful, ugly, "DO ME NOW YOU BASTARD!"
passion
and he can't hold back any longer
and his spunk SPEWS out of his throbbing,
rock-hard penis
and he SHOOTS and SHOOTS and oh my GOD
he SHOOOOOOTS that thick, hot stream DEEP
into your coming pussy
and you both moan "AAGGHHH!!!"
as your passion and love SWELLS
and you can't believe it could feel THIS good
and what did I do to deserve this
and you dig your heels in one last time
and THRUST up to meet him
and get that last drop out his red-hot cock
and now his softening penis slips out too
soon and you suddenly, unexpectedly squirt
ALL over the mattress as you moan your
contentment and he slowly starts to kiss your
cheeks and you both feel your tension
slipping away into contentment
and he whispers how much he loves you
right into your ear
and you both drift off in to well-deserved
sleep as you still feel your very uterus
clamping down on itself
and that warm, special feeling
after you know you've made love
and his very SEED is deep inside of you
and you feel some of it
start to drip out
and it feels so COLD but good just the
same
even though it's starting to get sticky
(and you cum slightly again at the thought)
and you drift into sleep
as he kisses your cheek
and you dream of making love once again.
Thirty minutes from now.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
A half hour.

The character in this poem is out to set a new endurance record. Quite long but an interesting read.

MDnavyMDnavyabout 18 years ago
Good..I liked it

I really enjoyed the theme of this piece and the ending left the poem with a very erotic after-taste...a little too much of the "thwk, cha-ck,", but I'm betting that this would sound awesome if read at a spoken word or open mic venue...All in all a very good poem.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Two poems

This reads as if it were two different poems.

I preferred the first,

for it is a fairly novel topic worth developing,

but I would suggest that you eliminate most of the "Thirty minutes from now," lines.

The second part is fairly standard for Literotica.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
intriguing title

and great concept for a poem. I have to admit that I didn't finish reading it, because of the length. So, I didn't cast any official vote. If I get time to read it in its entirety, I will.

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